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PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 7:09 pm 
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1. http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/7923/tt17px.png
2. http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/948/tt26py.png
Martin Luther King Special: http://img491.imageshack.us/img491/4153 ... ial6hu.png
3. http://img304.imageshack.us/img304/9443/tt32pp.png
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4. http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/3641/ttps8ug.png
5. http://img488.imageshack.us/img488/6504/ttps28gy.png

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teen titans by bonzai
mummy from metal slug by croix and soldiers by grim
base for cadaverous by Deekman
Naruto sprites by Deekman
Effects by Cloud TK and Sammy Studios

ok I'm starting to work everything out, you may notice some spelling mistakes....sorry about that, I'm going to check my spelling from now on, if you have some suggestions I'd like that, please no flames some advice might be good though

with comic five you'll notice some of the panels have small text, I messed up with photoshop so I just put in text from paint, but at least it's readable

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They are pritty good did you make the characters yourself? or did you get some help?

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 7:26 pm 
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I din't make any of the sprites, the teen titans were made by banzai, the credit part has who the sprites belong to, and you said pretty good how can I make it better?

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Awesome pie, man.

Put your name in the thread title though.

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Cadaverous wrote:
I din't make any of the sprites, the teen titans were made by banzai, the credit part has who the sprites belong to, and you said pretty good how can I make it better?


I can't see the last two because the imaging is so small, but that's beyond the point. I love funny comics more then anything and I like the idea, I'm not too sure how you can improve think about them and try to make them as funny as possible, I kinda liked the first one that introduces Naruto that was good! I laughed when he intoduced himself it's soo like him! lol

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hold you mouse over them until you see the expand...thing then press it

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lol I love the 4th one that is really good ^^

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The orange text in the first couple is hard to read, and 3 and 4 are very hard to comprehend, but overall its well produced

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I'm not personally a fan of sprite comics, but otherwise I think the idea is good and it is funny ^_^ Watch your spelling and grammar and you'll be doing alright!

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Must say i like. Sprites look well done. if any of your friends are up for some commission work I need some sprites of my character.

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A sprite comic featuring anime and teen kittens *shivers*


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Sprite comics are hard to make... But you seem to be extremely good at it... Keep up the good work...

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I just want to point out I don't make the sprites on the credit page you can see who made them but if you want to find good spriters you can looks here:

http://s7.invisionfree.com/Space_Pirate_Frigate/

thats where I started making this

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Coolness ensues
I always wondered why the villians were so lame in teen titans compared to other DC villians.

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I always wondered why the villians were so lame in teen titans compared to other DC villians.


The old dude magician guy KICKED ASS. Trigon rocks so much. Slade is fucking awesome.

How dareth you!

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the next comic:

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That one was good lol the onlything that that needs some fixing is the size of the talk bubbles should be a little bigger for longer frases, and I think you should change Cyborgs font to a darker blue, so it's not as harsh on our eyes.

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yeah but dark blue is Naruto's bubble, I'll figure something out, maybe a different shade

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I don't really like sprite comics but some are kind of cool.


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just to say if you guys have any character sprites that you would like to see join or have a picture of a character, I would really appreciate it

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Hey nice sprites. Keep it up man!

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This one is kinda hard to read.
Anyway, they're really good ^_^

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update:

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don't worry plot advance soon.
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Master Hand by Kenju
Godzilla by Grim
Bart by Sousanator
Kirby by gbasandra
Bobobo-bobo-bobo (or however you spell it) by Harsh29
Earth Worm Jim by Sonic Freak

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Cool sprite comic. But, why did Raven n' Starfire blast Naruto out of a window?


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