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Plot:

Saruwatari Makoto is an thirteen year old junior high school student. When he came home, he decided to have a conversation with his sister, Junko. When the creature's hands came out of the well, he and his sister is being taken back to feduel Japan. Set in Edo period in 1783, he and Junko was being taken to Hokaidou, Japan. He wasn't really sure what was going on in his life, until he meet with the people, who are known as Ainu. After welcoming the Ainu tribe, he came to the place called, Ainu Moshiri-Kamui Kotan. When he arrived at the Kamui Kotan, there are two young ruru sisters, Nakoruru and Rimururu, who is looking at him wanted to go on with him.

His adventure now begins!

Sounds interesting Makoto_shinobi.

Thanks, DP. I know I couldn't make my plot really good, but I tried though. Oh, Chapter 1 is coming soon.

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Oh yeah, here are my character profiles:

Samurai Spirits Doujinshi Character Profiles (Beginning) (Last updated Wednesday July 15, 2006 20:28)
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Saruwatari Makoto (pronounced Saluwatari)

Birthdate: March 1, 2016

Birthplace: Shinagawa, Tokyo

Gender: Male

Blood Type: B

Eyes: Blue

Hair: Black

Weapon: Hono no Zenzen (Wholly Fire)

Likes: His siter, having girlfriend, Chronicles of Narnia, J-pop, and J-rock, IIDX

Dislikes: Being alone and sad

Flaw: Treated as a sugar-high and airheaded guy at home.

Modern Looks: Wearing black jacket, blue hat, and Jeans.

Ainu Looks: Green and white traditional Ainu clothing, hat, gloves, and green shoes

Alias: Good

Biography: Living in modern Japan, Makoto is an fourteen year old junior high school student. His sister is in her same school. When it's Friday, he end up reading his favorite book about Hokkaidou and the Ainu people. After reading his book, he decided to go to the well sitting there talking with his sister. But then the creature's hands out of the well grabbed Makoto and his sister's arms. And then they went to the time period back to Edo period, which is set in 1783. He has send himself to Hokaidou, Japan. He and his sister wanders around what's going on to them and then end up by those people that they didn't know. These people are called, Ainu. After welcoming to new people, Makoto decided to stay with Ainu tribe for a night's stay.

Other notes:
Makoto and Junko's have been slightly edited. Their birthdates and biographies have been change a little. For this reason, I wanted to make them a teenage middle school students before having adult ages.

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Saruwatari Junko

Birthdate: July 10, 2017

Birthplace: Shinagawa, Tokyo

Gender: Female

Blood Type: AB

Eyes: Brown

Hair: Blonde

Weapon: Haha-Midori (Mother Green)

Likes: Her brother, thinking to beat his brother in video games, Konami

Dislikes: Leaving one of her best friends, leaving the love of Konami

Flaw: She is afraid of the world changes as the years goes by.

Modern Looks: Red schoolgirl dress, purple headband, purple ribbon

Ainu Looks: Purple and white traditional Ainu clothing, gloves, and purple shoes

Other Looks: Long blonde hair

Alias: Good

Biography: Living in modern Japan, she is a thirteen year old junior high school student. Unlike her brother, she has many friends. As soon as she finishes her school day on Friday, she's having an conversation with her brother, Makoto at the well. The creature's hands came out of the well and grabbed Makoto and herself. Then she has been taken to the past period of Hokaidou, Japan. When she was introduced to Ainu people, she's taking care and talks to two young Ruru sisters, Nakoruru and Rimururu.

Other notes:
Makoto and Junko's have been slightly edited. Their birthdates and biographies have been change a little. For this reason, I wanted to make them a teenage middle school students before having adult ages.

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Nakoruru (pronounce Nakolulu)

Birthdate: October 11, 1771

Birthplace: Ainu Moshiri-Kamui Kotan

Gender: Female

Blood Type: AB

Eyes: Blue

Hair: Blue

Weapon: Her treasured sword, Chichi-ushi (Father Bull)

Fighting Style: Dancing Swords Arts of the Shikanna-Kamui

Likes: The natural surroundings of Kamui Kotan

Dislikes: Those who cannot respect nature with the highest esteem

Flaw: "...I can't reveal that."

Quote: "Daishizen no Oshiyoki desu" meaning Great Nature's punishment.

Looks: At young age, she wears black, yellow, and white traditional Ainu clothing, yellow headband, yellow ribbon, and yellow shoes.

At older age, she wears red, blue, and white traditional ainu clothing, yellow belt, red ribbon, and red shoes.

Other looks: long blue hair.

Alias: Good

Biography: Nakoruru was born in Kamui-Kotan, and raised with her grandparent and mother. When she was introduced to new friends, she decided to let Makoto play and tell her about stories. Her father's name is unknown, but it is believed that he is an Ainu warrior. At the age of 17, she heard that the evil has plague the nature. She will be treated like her father after he passed away. Her pet's name is Mamahaha, in which she uses it as a weapon. She is a defender of mother nature.

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Rimururu (pronounce Rimululu)

Bitrhdate: July 6, 1774

Birthplace: Ainu Moshiri-Kamui Kotan

Gender: Female

Blood Type: B

Eyes: Black

Hair: Brown

Weapon: Hahakuru

Fighting Style: Dancing Sword Arts of the Shikanna-Kamui

Likes: Sweets, icy treats

Dislikes: Spicy foods

Flaw: Everyone always treats her like a kid.

Quote: "Something my big sister taught me."

Looks: At young age, she wears blue and white traditional Ainu clothing, blue hat, blue belt, and blue shoes.

At older age, she wears exactly like she was young, except hers is now light blue.

Other Looks:

Alias: Good

Biography: Nakoruru's sister. Rimururu was being raised with her grandparent and mother at the young age. She likes to play with Makoto for a while and likes to tell stories. When she is 14, she was afraid to let her sister go, because without her, she would almost have no one, but herself. Her ice friend's name is Konril, in which she uses it as a weapon. Together, she is part of Ruru sisters and the defenders of mother nature.
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Anaruchi (prononce Analuchi)

Birthdate: December 15, 1745

Birthplace: Sapporo, Hokkaido

Gender: Male

Blood Type: O

Eyes: Brown

Hair: Black

Weapon: Shizen no Keii (Honour of Nature)

Fighting Style: Dancing Sword Arts of the Shikanna-Kamui

Likes: Teaching them respectfully

Dislikes: People who don't listen to Anaruchi

Flaw: Someone think they'll be better than him.

Quote: "Remember, respect your people, land, and personally."

Looks: He wears black, white, and dark green traditional Ainu Clothing, circulet

Alias: Neutral, but good

Biography: He was originally born in Sapporo, he decided to become an leader of the Ainu tribe. He loves to respect the nature's role and people's feelings. When Makoto and Junko arrived at the Kamui-Kotan, he wanted to welcome them to the people who never heard of them before. After the beginning of the saga, he decided to make Nakoruru a leader of the mother nature.
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Yukino Satsuki

Birthdate: May 25, 1766

Birthplace: Otsu, Shiga

Gender: Female

Blood Type: O

Eyes: Brown

Hair: Brown

Weapon: Sword of Setsugekka, Shuriken, Fireball, Firewall, and many Hatori Hanzo's techniques have been teached.

Fighting Style: Ninja sword arts of Hatori clan

Likes: Snow, white tigers

Dislikes: Being slow

Quote: "How should anyone know? I'm a ninja of course!"

Looks: Wears a blue ninja suit, sheath sword of Setsugekka on back, ninja boots, and a mask

Alias: Good

Biography: When she was fourteen years old, she decided to be trained as a ninja. She trained for at least two years and she decided to be like Hatori Hanzo. By the age of seventeen, one of Hatori clan's men were surprised that Hatori Hanzo decided to make Satsuki an leader of this clan. Her main job is to assassinate the evil beings. She saved young Nakoruru and Rimururu from one of the Raneyumo and his minions.

Character profiles look good Makoto_Shinobi.

Thanks for your comment, DP. I'm working on Chapter 1 still. It will be up sometimes soon.

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Finally, I've created my first chapter. Here it is:

Chapter 1: The Beginning

Chapter 1: The Beginning

Blacker than pitch, a deep darkness of boundless nothingness. It begins within this vortex. A sinister presence quickens within it's womb. It's pulsing beat becomes an invisible, intangible wave drifting in the darkness, and at the end of its roaming it reaches Japan....

The year is 1771. A time known to subsequent generations as the great famine of Tenmei. Its vestiges still remain and the starving regions show no sign of relief. In every region, insurrection and destruction break out, spurring increasing ruin. The people tormented by unprecedented misfortune scape by, knowing not when it will all end. Today or tomorrow?

The Shogunate's response to this crisis was nowhere near effective. Before his country, buried in heaps of corpses and slowly dying away, a noted general turns toward the heavens and roars.

The Tokugawa shogunate, who is known as Tokugawa Yoshitora, is fighting the battle against the warlord, whose name is Gaoh. The battle was bloody as hell, and then when Yoshitora defeated Gaoh's army, the Tokugawa clan won. Yoshitora is now considered as an emperor of Japan.


Modern Era: Shinagawa, Tokyo 2030


The year is 2030. The city of Tokyo is filled with crowded traffic, people, and as well as many buildings. Soon, there is an thirteen year old student from Kotono Musashi Junior High School. His name is Saruwatari Makoto, an 8th grade student. Right now, he's at school with some of his friends working on particular subjects. When it's Friday after school, he came back to his home with his family, while his friends left.

"Tadaima (meaning I'm home or I'm back in Japanese)!" Makoto said to himself, going upstairs in his room. "I'm feeling good about my school today!"

Junko walks behind him after she came, "Tadaima, Ohkasan (meaning mother in Japanese)!"

"Yeah, I'm pretty much great student at Kotono Musashi Junior High. Oh, you know that some people think I was airheaded and sometimes plays dumb stuff."

"Oh, nothing to worry about of course!"

Makoto and Junko went to his room and decided to talk with her. As for now, he wants to have an conversation with Junko about the Ainu.

"There is something interesting things I wanted to talk to you, Junko." said Makoto, thinking in his head.

"What things you're talking about?" Junko asked.

"I like to talk to you about the Ainu and Hokaidou."

"Oh, really? I haven't studied that much."

"I've studied many times and I've understand who are the Ainu people are. They looked similiar to Native Americans in the United States."

As Makoto talked along with his sister, he takes the book off from the bookshelf. He shows to Junko about what do Ainu look like and what's their culture is. Now that Junko understands about Ainu and Hokaidou after she read the book in her room. She felt tired after the graduation ceremony and lays down on the bed.

It is now nighttime and Makoto wasn't that much tired, since he sleept that much early, than his sister was. Junko woked up and she is little late on dinner. After dinner, she wants go with Makoto at the well and having another conversation. They are now talking about their relationships in high school.

"So how many friends do you have, brother?" Junko said.

Makoto turns his head and said, "I have five friends."

"That sounds like a lot, but not! I have like seven to twelve friends, because I'm so popular on after school activities! Ha ha!"

"Wow, you beaten my count!"

Makoto begins to feel shocked after Junko said something silly about her friends and popularity at school. Makoto felt a little tired and still talks with his sister.

"You know, I haven't had any girlfriends yet," Makoto said, "since I haven't had one in one of my schools in the last few years."

Junko smiles, "Well, I think that you were airheaded guy in young school years and even teenage school years. That's because people think you were a loser, but later in the years, you weren't a loser after all."

They continued to talk for like fourty-five minutes and it's nine o' clock. It's Junko's bedtime for now, but she likes to continue to talk with her brother. The well's door is shaking. It's the creature inside of the well and tries to open the door harder. And then it was broked and then Makoto and Junko were shocked.

"What was that!?" Makoto shouted. "Who broked the door of the well?"

"I don't really know what it is, I'm scared!" Junko felted shivered.

Then there is an evil laughing voice from the well. Makoto and Junko looked at the well and then they didn't see anything.

"I don't see anything but only heard that voice." Makoto said "Maybe it's an monster or someone is in there."

"How do you know it's an monster?" Junko said shiverly, "I think it came from other world or better yet--it's really an monster!"

The creature's multiple hands came out and then grabs Makoto and Junko into the well.

"What the--?" Makoto shouted.

Junko screamed, "Eeeeeyaaaaa!!!"

The creature has finally hold on both Makoto and Junko's hand and arms. The creature brings them into the well into the pitched black darkness. You will be feeling like you're stuck in the sewers like you watched the Japanese horror movie, Ringu. Makoto felted suddenly slepted as the creature spread the sleeping dust.

"Makoto!!" Junko screamed. "Are you all right? I can't move!"

Junko is struggled and then the creature successfully make both Makoto and his sister to sleep. Junko now feels asleep as soon her eyes closed.

After the hours of dark and deep sleep, they finally landed on the grass. Makoto opens his eyes and he couldn't see any.

"Ooohhh, where are we?" Makoto said to himself. "I don't know what it is but...."

Junko opened her eyes and then she sees the blue sky. Junko thinks she had a terrible time having conversation with him at the well. She now sees the beautiful forest trees and green grasses.

"I don't know where are we." Junko said, "I really wanted to go back home. But how do we get back? I'm scared of this totally changed world!"

Makoto pats Junko and said, "Woah, woah, take it easy, sister. We'll find out what's going on. I'm not really sure what's this land is suppose to be. So please calm down, I'm always brave when something has happened."

Makoto and Junko now journeys through the forest and hopes to find the city. Unfortunately, he will end up to the village, because he is now in the past time period. I haven't mention you about the beginning of this doujinshi story, it was set in Edo, an old name of Tokyo. Right now, they are in Hokaidou, Japan.

End of Chapter 1

Looks pretty good Makoto_Shinobi. But it misses some description.

Thanks DP. Description is pretty much difficult for me to make. So is there any improvements on my description?

nice chapter but there are grammar erros like you said "an monster" an only goes before a vowel, other than that it's cool. the names sound funny but names are different there I guess

This is the first fic i read that is written by you so i don't know if the description is improved.

That's okay, I've tried my best as I can. In the next chapter, Makoto and Junko journeys through the forest and then they end up to see the village. So that's how my story goes. Although, I'm not good at writing script or some other things I didn't really know. But thanks for your kind anyway.

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Thanks, Cadaverous. Oh, thanks for making me check the grammar errors. I'll replace to "a monster" and it'll sound much better. Thanks for your help.

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Okay, chapter 2 is up!

Chapter 2: The arrival at Kamui Kotan

"Man, I'm so hungry." Makoto complained.

"Me too," Junko said, "It's hard to go anywhere without water and food."

They were feeling hungry, because after having such deep sleep and lose plenty of energy after the creature steals them. So, Makoto and Junko journey through the forest to find the village. The forest is filled with green leaves and animals. The animals you see are deers, squirrels, birds, and many others. After walking straight forward, Makoto heard the voices speaking.

"I wonder who are they," Makoto said, "It must be people speaking."

Junko twinked her eyes and yelled, "I bet it is!"

"Shh, quiet down, sister."

"Oh, sorry, brother."

They kept going straight forward to the light, until then, they end up seeing the village. When Junko said something out loud, the guards heard her voice. The guards then sneak behind the tree and looks at Makoto and Junko.

"I know that's an intruder," the first guard said, "they disturbed our nature and peace."

The second guard said, "I know they did it."

The third guard said, "They are alien men."

The guards waited to see if they are about to enter the village. Makoto and Junko now thinks they can go to the village they wanted to get help from them, because they didn't carry anything, such as food. But it wasn't going to be a good idea and enter the village without welcoming the others first.

"Let's go to the village and get some help for us." Makoto said.

"Yeah," Junko said, "Hope we can get."

Two of them walking into the village that they never been there before. But then the guards trapped two of them by circling them.

"Hold it right there!" the first guard shouted, "I know you're about to attack our village!"

Makoto said, "No, we didn't do anything wrong! What's the deal here?"

"That's because I heard someone's voice and we wanted to protect them from intruders, such as you. I believe you're the one who came from other place and then came to attack our village, so you must leave or die!"

"No, wait! It was the creature--"

And then the guards goned to rage and then about to attack them, but then the Ainu leader comes and shouted, "Stop! Stop this for instant!"

The Ainu leader comes to Makoto and Junko and the crowd of Ainu people came and watches them along with the guards.

The Ainu leader said, "Who are you, and where do you come from?"

Makoto replied, "We were from the well that the monster grabbed us and send us here. So where are we right now? I don't really know what's this place is."

"Okay....Ahem, my name is Anaruchi. I'm the leader of the Ainu tribe. And what's you and the girl's name?"

"Oh, my name is Makoto. Saruwatari Makoto. And I'm from Shinagawa, Tokyo."

Junko said to Anaruchi, "Oh, my name is Junko, Makoto's sister."

Anaruchi said, "Hmm, that's strange, where all that clothing you have?"

Makoto replied, "We were from the modern human world, where our world has many things and technology."

"A technology? I never knew what kind of technology you have in your other world."

"I believe your only technology is housing and weapons."

"Oh, really? How did you know that?"

"I read it from my book about the Ainu and the Hokaidou."

"Oh, the thing you asked is we're in Hokaido. We live in Moshiri-Kamui Kotan."

"Hokaidou!? ....I can't--believe it!"

When Makoto was excited and shocked after he heard from Anaruchi, he really knows what Hokaidou really is before. However, he never been here before in his whole life. This is probably his first visit in Hokaidou.

Anaruchi asked, "I liked to welcome you to us and let you stay here."

Makoto said, "Oooh, I'm glad you're helping us. We didn't bring any stuff, such as food."

"Well, well, I expected to see two of you poor young fellows came here, so we have some food if you're hungry."

Makoto was so happy that he really likes Ainu and Hokaidou by now. The guards went back to the village and then Makoto and Junko walks with Anaruchi to the village. They now stay in the Kamui-Kotan, taking rest in Anaruchi's house. Junko was scared after she was being caught by a monster from the well. It seems that she will understand Ainu and Hokaidou well very soon as she stays with them. As they rest, they eat fish and rice, and drink water. Soon Anaruchi wants to talk to Makoto something about the important rules of Ainu.

"There's something important I wanted to tell you," Anaruchi asked, "I want you to wear these clothes. I want you to change that modernized clothing you're wearing."

"Why do I have to?" Makoto replied, "What's the deal for wearing Ainu clothing?"

"It's because I do not want to confuse to other people about your clothing, so you must wear these."

"Okay, I might like this."

Makoto feels a sweat when he must wear the Ainu clothing. Makoto's color of his clothing is green and white. Junko's color of her clothing is purple and white. You might think Junko wears it like Bust Nakoruru or Rera, but obviously it's not. Junko wears a purple ribbon, while Makoto wears a green hat. After they weared it, they looked at the mirror.

"Wow!" Makoto said, "I can't believe that I wear an Ainu clothing!"

"Oooh, look what I look like!" Junko said, "I like purple color."

When they're done changing their clothes, they meet new Ainu people in the village. People looked at them and they wondered. One of the Ainu people asked Makoto.

"Oh, it's great to see you here," Ainu woman said, "I'm Monashiri. And who are you?"

"My name is Makoto. Saruwatari Makoto. I'm from Shinagawa, Tokyo."

Junko said, "Oh, please to meet you, I'm Junko, Makoto's brother."

Monashiri pleased both of them and she leads them her house. She allows them to meet her grandparent, who is named Sanoku. And they have two young children. First, there is an twelve-year old, and then the second one is nine-year old.

The two young children said, "Hello."

Makoto thought, "Oooh."

The first child said, "I'm Nakoruru."

The second child said, "I'm Rimiruru"

Both of them said, "We're Ruru sisters."

End of Chapter 2

good update Makoto_Shinobi. But it still misses some description.

Thanks DP. Still having trouble with description. So what's a description anyway? I wanted to know.

Just some simple character description will make it easier for readers to follow the story.

Oooh, I get it. You mean character profiles or during the story?

Something like that. Just the eyes, hair, special features like scares or tatoos, gender and a simple description of their clothes like you did with the Ainu clothing is what i suggest.

Oooh, I see. I'll fix my character descriptions. And Chapter 3 is coming soon.

Profile updated.

i think it is handier to describe characters in the storie but this also looks good.

Oh, thank you, DP. Now my description is much better than I expected. Yeah, I think it's handy to describe the characters in the storie. I'm glad that mine looks good so far.

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Okay, my profile is updated. And now, here's chapter 3!

Chapter 3: Meet the Ruru sisters!

The Ruru sisters say hi to both Makoto and Junko. Makoto only just thinking what he wants to say to someone else. He doesn't care about anyone at younger age. Rimururu likes to be happy with Makoto, while Nakoruru is just being fine.

"So, what's your name, pal?" Rimururu asked.

Makoto replied, "Umm...My name is Makoto. Saruwatari Makoto."

Junko replied to Rimururu, "My name is Junko, I'm Makoto's sister."

Soon Rimururu is happy to hear Junko's voice saying, "Well, Rimururu, I guess I can take care of you while your parents are off to something."

And then Rimururu is excited and plays with Junko for a while. Makoto is just has nothing to do, but wanted to know what's going on his time.

Anaruchi came and asked Makoto, "What's wrong? Is there something you were sad about?"

Makoto replied, "No, I had nothing, but feeling so weird and I don't understand how did that monster came from the well. Do you have any story to talk about that monster?"

"Well, I may think I've heard the stories about the tales of Makai (meaning demon world). It is believe that one of the Raneyumo's minions has let someone from the well in our time. When it's time that Raneyumo let go one of his minions to go to the well, they atempt to kidnapped them and murdered them, especially young children."

"Oh no...It can't be!"

"Indeed, it's almost no way to destroy that fiend with any kind of weapon, including our own. I believe that the legends says that Raneyumo, who is attempt to rule Japan and the rest of the world. It's a scary feeling to everyone and they can hurt their feelings, because they lost their young children."

"If I see him, I must run away?"

"No, you must not. If you came to this village, you must help us destroy him. It's your own duty and I must beg you for doing so."

"You didn't tell me early didn't you? If not, then why didn't you tell me so?"

"Although because you haven't mention about that minion early after your welcome and a rest. In order to destroy him, you must carry the dagger, which is called Hono no Zenzen (meaning Wholly Fire)."

"I don't know any fighting skills, is there training here?"

"Yes, there is training. I'll take you there and help you get started on your own adventures and survival."

"Alright, I hear you what you said, I'll be tougher than I would think."

Makoto goes with Anaruchi to the training in one of the houses. Anaruchi showed him the dagger and Makoto wonders what does that weapon use for. He handed to Makoto and he understands what was used for. After he understand, he must spend hours on training. After the hours of training, he felt really sweaty and thirsty. Makoto went to take a bath and went to sleep for rest. The next day, he did training again and he feels stronger than he thought. He takes bath and sleeps again for the next day. On the third day, Makoto felt stronger on fighting skills and agility. One of the training men felt impressed about Makoto's skills after he has been training for hours. They thought he was powerful as they expected.

"Phew! I think I had enough." Makoto breath and feeling tired.

Anaruchi tells Makoto, "Well, well, I never seen any fast looking warriors happened in training before. You know that the Ainu warriors have speed and agility. As for males, like you, you'll have strong power, speed, and agility. It's your own responsibility to use these powers that you have."

"One thing I wanted to asked, is Junko going to be an warrior too?"

"It depends on her. Some females decided to be Ainu warriors."

"I don't think she is brave enough against evil force. She scares of darkness and horror that she faced."

"Don't worry, she will get used to be brave when I tell her. I'll train your sister as possible."

"But she is busy playing with Ruru sisters. Will she have time to do training. I may not think she is strong enough to do a lot of training like I was."

"You'll see what I mean, Makoto."

Makoto felt kinda worried about his sister that she is busy on caring with Ruru sisters. He may thought she would be kidnapped by Raneyumo and his minions someday. It's hard to believe that Anaruchi's opinion about the story of Raneyumo filled with horror, dark, and even worsens anybody's feelings. He may fear the worst that he will face off dark force filled with dangerous minions, weapons, and traps. Will he able to kill off the Raneyumo the fiend, or he'll die trying?

End of Chapter 3

good update Makoto_Shinobi.

Thanks, DP. Chapter 4 is coming soon. I'll update my profile again, especially about Raneyumo's bio.

Good job Makoto! Keep going!

Thanks, Forse! Thanks for your kind.

Okay, a little update on Nakoruru and Rimururu's profile. And now, Chapter 4 is up!

Edit: Fixed mistaken grammar.

Chapter 4: Raneyumo the Fiend

Makoto wants to tell Anaruchi more about the story of Raneyumo. He didn't hear it that much, only know what it looks like. Anaruchi now tells Makoto the whole story of Raneyumo.

"So is there any more story about that fiend?" Makoto asked.

"I have more to tell you about," Anaruchi said, "Raneyumo is not only kills anyone like the young ones, he also become an notorious villian. I can tell you why."

"Alright."

"Raneyumo was originally a human being. We don't know exactly his birthdate and birthplace, but it is believe to be somewhere in Edo. It is said that after he was being possessed by evil spirits, he turned himself to a fiend."

"Does he have personal name? Besides murdering the young, what else he has done?"

"Well, we don't exactly know what his personal name was, although we haven't heard this monster a lot for the unknown reasons. Raneyumo is not only a murderer, but tries to be a ruler of Japan. He wants to destroy the emperor, but he was too much stress, so he oftenly likes to kidnap the young ones very oftenly. Whenever anyone destorys him with fire and lightning, he would turn himself into bones and leave himself dead. So, then years later, he was resurrected by the dead. He wants to give a revenge against the men who has defeated him. When you weild the weapon you're using, you'll able to destory him. But I want you to be very careful about that fiend, because he as a lot of power and kill any humans like in seconds. The best way to defend yourself from that fiend is to block and give a quick attack."

"So when do I see that fiend?"

"If that fiend captures any young or anyone, you'll hear their scream and you must follow the fiend in order to attempt to destory him. You'll wait for couple of days and you'll someone scream. When you destoryed him with fire, he won't be resurrected from the dead again, because he can only do it once. I beg you."

"Yes, sir. I'll do my best."

"Good, now you take rest and be careful when you're about to start your own adventures."

"One more thing, does the fiend comes out day or night or both?"

"He sometimes comes out at night, but he likes to come out on day time."

"Oh, okay. Now I see how it will happen someday. He may come out at night only if he has stealth skill."

"True, but he doesn't think of that oftenly. All he has done is sneak up the young and kidnap them quickly, so I want you to be careful. Remember."

"Yes, sir"

Soon it's Makoto's bed time and then he falls asleep. He didn't have a dream yet until three hours later. He is dreaming about loving with girlfriends, but he didn't have any yet. He wants to have an girlfriend at high school, but he felt sad because he didn't have one in his elementary school years. When he went somewhere, he sees Junko and walks forward to her.

"What's going on, sister?" Makoto said.

"Oh nothing," Junko said.

"So what's up with you today?"

"Well, I've been bored thinking to go with my friends to their birthday party."

"What's good about their birthday, sister?"

"What's good is I want to go with them forever."

"What...I thought you're just a student still! You can't just leave school extremely early!"

"Well, then I must...."

Junko's eyes turned red and then she turned herself into a devil and attempts to grab and bite Makoto's arm.

"Oh my god!" Makoto screamed, "What the hell are you going!?"

"I want your blood and flesh. I'm hungry."

Makoto's eye's open wide and thinks to run away. But then the weapon fell from the sky. It was his dagger that Anaruchi gave it to him as a valuable treasure. Makoto quickly grab the dagger and wields it. Then he began a fight against the devil.

Devil screamed, "I want your blood and flesh!"

"No, you cannot!" Makoto shouted, "You cannot take my blood, because I have fire to destory you."

Makot then begins a fight against the devil. Devil then punches Makoto and he fell down. Devil seems that Makoto is now struggling to get up, but he is not, he is brave and gets up. Makoto then he has a bravery skill and attempts to kill off the devil. Makoto then quickly rolls and slashes devil's kidney and then she is bleeding. Devil looked at her cut in her kidney and then it turned into a fire.

Devil screamed while burning, "NNNOOOOO!!!"

The devil fall down to the ground and then Junko turned normal. Her body was filled with some blood and burned cuts. Junko is struggling on breathing and she can't get up. She is wounded and is about to die.

Makoto shouted, "Sister!"

"Brother...." Junko said slowly

"Sister, don't die! Don't die, sister!"

"I can't talk--ooh...."

Junko then died from the burned cut and wounds that she has after the fight. She was possessed by an unknown evil she didn't really know. Makoto then screamed, "Sister!!!"

Makoto suddenly woked up after his bad dream. Oh my god, he thought. He had a terrible time about his dream that he killed his sister. But after all, it was his dreams. He seems to felt worried about his sister that she is probably possessed by Raneyumo's magic and that is why she turned herself a devil. Makoto then tells Junko while she was playing with the Ruru sisters.

Junko asked to Makoto, "What's wrong, brother?"

Makoto said, "I had a bad dream about you. You were possessed by Raneyumo's evil powers and you turned yourself into a devil!"

"Really? Did that happened to you? How did you get that?"

"I don't really know, maybe because after hearing Anaruchi's story about that fiend."

"Oh, that's why you get a bad dream. I know you were brave enough to fight, don't you know that?"

"Yeah, I fought the devil bravely, but it wasn't real because of my dream."

"Wow, too bad."

Makoto then came to the house and eats fish, rice, and drink water to make him calm down. He wasn't feeling good today, because after he had a bad dream, he begin to worry. Soon he told Anaruchi what happened about himself last night. Anaruchi told Makoto before about the use of Hono no Zenzen. Now that Makoto understands now what was happened in his dream. He should be brave enough to kill off Raneyumo whenever he sees it. Soon, Raneyumo came from the forest and he sneaks up in a boulder.

"He he he," Raneyumo laugh evilly, "I can kill off the young for flesh like I was a demon. I'll kill off the famous warriors faster than I expected. I'll be the ruler and a great muderer...."

He laugh evilly again, and looks behind Junko and Ruru sisters. He tells one of his minions to sneak up and capture them. One of the minions sneak up slowly and hides behind the trees and boulder.

"Junko, I've heard that your brother is having a bad dream," Nakoruru said, "I may fear that he'll be powerful against that fiend."

Junko said, "Yeah, I believe so, because that dagger was originally made by the famous guy who created fire-based blade weapons."

The minions then sneaks up behind one of the girls and then captures them.

Rimururu screamed, "Eeeeaaaahhh!!!"

Both Junko and Nakoruru looked behind and shouted, "Rimururu!!!!"

The other minions then captures two other girls. Junko is struggled to get out. She doesn't have a weapon. She lefted at one of the houses.

Both Junko and Nakoruru screamed, "Eeeeeaaaahhh!!!!"

Makoto suddenly hears the scream and shouted, "Sister!! Rurusisters!"

Makoto reports to Anaruchi that the his sister and the Ruru sisters were kidnapped. The crowds heard their scream and they wanted to know what's going on.

Anaruchi said, "It must be Raneyumo and his minions!"

Makoto screamed, "Oh my god! It can't be!"

One of the people has Junko's weapon that she left and hand it to Makoto, "This is your sister's weapon! Hurry and rescue her!"

Makoto then rushes to grab his weapon from his house and prepares to chase after that fiend. When Makoto kept going, he suddenly stopped by that warrior that doesn't really know.

Makoto shouted, "Hey, who are you? And why did you stopped me?"

The warrior then replied to Makoto, "...I'm Yukino Satsuki. Call me Satsuki. I'm the one who is going to assassinate the evil beings. I'm here to help you out to kill off that fiend."

"Really!? And you must be a ninja!"

"That's right, I've been trained, since at the age of fourteen. But there's no time to talk about me, we got to hurry before he kills the girls."

Makoto and Satsuki rushes to find Raneyumo's hideout. Soon Raneyumo and his minions as finally arrived at his hideout.

"What are you doing to us!?" Junko yield.

"You'll see what you see." said Raneyumo

Junko felted scared and she wasn't feeling right about her day. The Ruru sisters were crying and yielding for help. But it seems that they didn't come to help. Makoto and Satsuki then runs forward to find Raneyumo's hide out. An hour later, they have finally found their hideout. They entered their hide out and there are candles on top of the walls where they can see it. Will Makoto and Satsuki rescue his sister and the Ruru sisters in time?

End of chapter 4

Good update Makoto_Shinobi.

Thanks, DP! Chapter 5 is coming soon.

Added after 5 hours 10 minutes:

Chapter 5 is now up!

Chapter 5: Enter Raneyumo's hideout

Makoto and Satsuki has already entered their hideout. They are filled with dangerous monsters, traps, and even blackouts. They kept going forward until they made it to the pathway. There are three pathways they must choose. Soon Makoto and Satsuki picked the second one and they entered. Here, there are filled with many bats where they were sleeping. The bats woked up and flys out of a pathway.

Satsuki shouted, "Look out!"

Makoto crouch, "Woah!"

The bats continued to fly aways, until they're gone. When they're gone, they continued to venture the pathway.

"Let's go," Satsuki said.

"Let's hurry," Makoto said.

As they go on, here, she tells Makoto to be careful about those wall and floor traps. Both Makoto and Satsuki carefully go through and sneak up slowly. Makoto then stepped on something when he can't see it. He stepped on the switch and then the traps activiated.

"Oh god," Makoto said, "I did something. I didn't really see it."

"Don't worry about it, just be very careful not to be stabbed by those pole traps on the wall."

"Okay, I'll go first. How about we can crouch down?"

"Yeah, that will work."

Makoto then crouches and sneak up slowly and avoids traps as possible. When he's out of the traps, he's been alright. Satsuki crouches too and slowly goes through. Then she has avoided all the traps. They moved on and continued to venture through the pathway. There are stair traps, where the spikes come out in seconds. Together, they avoided the stair traps as they go upstairs. When they made it to the stairs, there is a door.

"There's a door," Makoto said.

Satsuki said, "Let's go there."

Makoto and Satsuki then open the door and entered the room. The room was empty and no one was here, so they entered there and wander.

"I see no one," Makoto said, "I wonder if it's a trap or not."

"I have no clue what it is." Satsuki said and looked at the floor.

Makoto steps on something and one of the floors feel shaking.

"Oh!" Makoto shouted, "I think I found the secret!"

"Oh, that's a passage!" Satsuki said, "Let's go there!"

Satsuki then opened the floor step, and then there was a ladder. Satsuki climbs the ladder first and comes down slowly. After she's half way there, Makoto then climbed the ladder. When they finally arrived at the bottom floor of his hideout, there is another door.

"Wait here." Satsuki said.

"Okay." Makoto said.

Satsuki then comes forward to the door and opens the door slowly. When she see something inside, there's no one there just like the first floor.

"It's clear," Satsuki said, "Let's go in."

"Okay." Makoto said and follows her.

Both Makoto and Satsuki has entered the room and it sounds like crow's voices. When they're inside, the crows screamed and the doors were locked. One of the minions is laughing evilly after they locked them.

"Ha ha ha ha ha!" said one of the minions, "You can't able to save your precious sisters! Now you see, it looks like you're gonna lose against us!"

"Well see about that." Both Makoto and Satsuki said grinning.

Minions are about to attack Makoto and Satsuki in the first room. Makoto weilds his dagger, Hono no ZenZen, he then dashes to them and performs Dragon Mitsube, in which he slides himself putting his dagger in front of him and does do a quick attack. The minions then were slashed by Satsuki's katana, and they were killed. Makoto has killed three minions, while Satsuki has killed five minions. She killed them by slashing their back and their kidney. When the battle was over, Makoto and Satsuki sees the light from at the top of the roof. The lady has came and talks to Makoto something important.

"Hello Makoto, my name is Miyajima Jun, a Miko who is known for giving warriors a special abilities."

"How did you know my name? You didn't see me."

"I've heard that you're about to rescue your sister and friends, so I want you to use this. This fire element spirit's name is Shoril, an round sized ball. If you touch this, it will not burn you."

"I see. So this means I use this as a pet and weapon?"

"Yes, you use it as a weapon. Without this, you won't be that much powerful against foes, especially giant one. I want Shoril to be your partner. In order to use it as a weapon, all you have to do is to cast is by shouting out or use your physical to cast it."

"I understand now, lady," Makoto said, "Shoril, you'll be my partner now."

"Good luck, Makoto. I beg you to promise to keep this as your weapon. Use it against your foes."

"Yes, lady."

Lady Jun then disappeared away going back to her own home. Shoril now follow Makoto as a partner and friend. Makoto and Satsuki then enter the next room and it was empty. When they entered, the doors were locked. And there was a huge noisy roar that could hurt Makoto's ears. Both Makoto and Satsuki covered their ears with hands. And then Raneyumo came from the other room in front of them. Raneyumo laugh evilly and he thinks he can kill both of our heroes faster than he think. Will Makoto and Satsuki destory him?

End of chapter 5

Good update Makoto_Shinobi.