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Deena

Post subject: Re: (Rockwell) seris sketch

Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 9:59 pm

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Your linework's astounding!:3<3 I bet it'd look really badass with some shading, especially high-contrast shading, like Frank Miller. It'd probably bring out your linework, too.

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im going to check out this frank miller person

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This is what your work looks like lined up. Your lines are
light so it was hard to get the white to a crisp level.

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Rockwell wrote:

mecahnaical pencil experamenting.

I was brainstorming for a particular character and this just hit something on me. If you arent using this guy, then I'd like to borrow his design

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ROCKWELL

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rossfellow wrote:

Rockwell wrote:

mecahnaical pencil experamenting.

I was brainstorming for a particular character and this just hit something on me. If you arent using this guy, then I'd like to borrow his design

sure, thats a charachter from the major comic im thinking im doing but of course thast gonna b a long time from now so her desighn will likley chang anyways.

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rossfellow

Post subject: Re: (Rockwell) seris sketch

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Thanks

I'll let you know when he appears.

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ROCKWELL

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Erix wrote:

This is what your work looks like lined up. Your lines are
light so it was hard to get the white to a crisp level.

I know its just my lines are messy so I dont turn up the contrast much.

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ROCKWELL

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I promise ill make the words smaller next time.

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Radar6590

Post subject: Re: (Rockwell) page 4

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Man, that looks pretty sweet.

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ROCKWELL

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I know

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Rockwell your battle scenes are awesome

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Heh... What can I say? Rockwell's battle scenes are as cool as always. You can never get tired of them :D

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rossfellow

Post subject: Re: (Rockwell) page 4

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Whoa whoa.

I'd love to see these in finishing touches (inks, colors/tones). They'll be epic!

I wish you hadnt given up on inks and colors ;__;

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the reason I gave up on inks and colors is to improve on my penciling. that way wonce I master penciling, Inking will be easy and then I can work on coloring. then, hopfully, ill be snafu slot worthy.

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still getting used to the gfirl thing heres some concept for the charachter in my comic but I doubt shell stay this way they almost always chnge.

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TheJez

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upon looking at anything you've drawn the CONSTRUCTIVE CRITIQUE I would give would be to study proportions for a while.

THAT is ACCEPTABLE critique.

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ROCKWELL

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porportions are somthing to experiment with thats why alot of my porpotions are off.

Rockwell wrote:

ummm, I dont think youll be selling anything realy, your work isent professional at all.

you seem like a beginer, mabey after several concentrated years.

I realy cant belive you got pissy over this...seriously...you shouldent shun honesty, sense your trying to sell professionaly.

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read the message I sent you.

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Radar6590

Post subject: Re: (Rockwell) concept (still getting used to the girl thing

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Rockwell, looks pretty good, though her head does look kind of wide, I can't quite ever tell when you're taking something to the extreme on purpose or not. I guess to me her jaw is just a little square. Soften it up a bit, make her look a little more feminine. The body's good, though she also looks muscular, I'm sure that's also on purpose since you generally draw very muscled people.

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Shes too manly. Even combat women should be a lot more slender then males. Thin her up a tad, especially the legs. And try not to be so jagged with girls. They are smooth creatures

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Erix wrote:

Shes too manly. Even combat women should be a lot more slender then males. Thin her up a tad, especially the legs. And try not to be so jagged with girls. They are smooth creatures

no u

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Am I the only one getting tired of the repetitive "girls are slender and smooth and round"? They don't have to be. It's only the ideal that is that way, and it's not like men are made of cubes either. A lot of comic artist tend to draw the ideals, but it's not a necessity at all. Not to mention, she's wearing an exoskeleton, not a freaking chainmail bikini.

I really don't have anything to crit about, except that she looks more like a women (something about the head), than a girl, but that doesn't have to be a bad thing.

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Post subject: Re: (Rockwell) concept (still getting used to the girl thing

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Radar6590 wrote:

it looks OK to me though , rock ain't going for anime style ... he's going for those like america cartoon comic style ( super man , wonderwoman , batman etc ) , if that's the stle you after rock , you've done a great job , but if it'sw anime style you going , dude , you might wanta smoothen her up a lot ...

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Rockwell draws everything in Marvel's art style, not anime style. That's why his art is the way it is.
And about the drawing - I think her legs should be at least a bit thiner. Otherwise, I think she looks good.

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ROCKWELL

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eh, im thinking of adding an animie touch to my drawings sense thats what seems to sell nowadays, not super weirdo whishy arms animie but allitle.

thanx 4 the crits evrey body.

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