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PostPosted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 10:01 am 
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i update fast and small updates so please do not get angry at me becouse the update's are too short



It’s a normal day in megavile and the girl’s are flying to school
Blossom: I wonder what happened to mojo after we left Townsville
Buttercup: heh the only thing i wonder is with how much i will win in today’s gym class
Bubbles: .......
Blossom: hey bubbles…something wrong?
Bubbles: ....eh wa?.....oh yeah im fine...... Just a bit dreamy
Buttercup: right well-
Suddenly a big boom is heard and when they look up they see a very familiar sight with a twist
Blossom: mojo?
Bubbles: wait aint that dexter’s power suit?
Blossom: don’t think so that thing is way to big for that and beside that it also covers the chest with glass........looks strong
Buttercup: what are we waiting for? Let’s kick some monkey butt
They fly to the robot, only to be knocked down by one of its arms


Meanwhile, about 10 km away a strange man walked along a empty street, the man had a grey cape wrapped around his body with 2 black stripe’s and a black 0 on the back completely concealing his body, he also wared a pair of black shoe’s
A big boom is hared again and the robot was thrown into the direction of the man followed by the ppg

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Good opening Robro.

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Great openning robo! Keep going!

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Great opening robro


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PostPosted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 10:20 am 
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thanks
well here is the next one:

Bubbles: look!!
Blossom: the robot is gona crush that strange man!!
Bubbles: on it!!

Bubbles jet’s off aiming to grab the man and carry him aout of the way…but when she reached him the man turned his head to face bubbles and open’s his eye’s……and what bubbles sauw in those eye’s spooked her so much she stoped right in her tracks hovered for a bit and then collapsed unconsios on the ground

Blossom/buttercup: BUBBLES!!

The girl’s grabed bubble’s and coud only wach as the robot fell on the man. It seemed inposible to survive that

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Nice update robro! Good job!

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thank's forse i realy apreciate you coment
.......seems i cant stop smiling

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it's too short to make anytihng of it... put a litle into dialog

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robro wrote:
i update fast and small updates so please do not get angry at me becouse the update's are too short


and the dialog thing i wil try to take care of

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Great update Robro


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thanks and i make the updates in advance soooo if you don't mind i have to get to work again

new chapter is here!!
it's a bit short tho....even for my style



Just as the ppg prepare to attack the robot a faint grey glow came from under the part of the robot the man was supposed to be under
Blosem: hey buttercup look-
A loud bang was heared and mojo coud be seen flying upward’s as the robot disintergrated in the grey explotion and the thing that caused the explotion was none other than
Buttercup :what the….
Blossom: this can’t be real
Buttercup: is this a kind of sick joke?

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This too short....
Anyway great update robro!
But try to make your updates be a bit bigger than this. Your updates are already a bit small but are nice so don't make them any smaller because then it will just get annoying.

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Your chapters are very short, Robro but there are good!

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@force:i know it's too small but it wil happen once in a while
big update's wil happen also (big for my doing) and thanks for comenting
@Leon FlameBurst: thankyou

anyway here is the next update



The reason the girls where so suprised was well founded as the very thing that was expected to be dead was the sorce of the massive explotion
It was the strange man, still standing and eye’s still closed

Blossom:…..let’s get out of here that man is way to creepy
Buttercup: NO WAY i want to make him pay for what he did to bubble’s
Blossom: BUTTERCUP STOP……this is bad

Buttercup charged at the man but he just stood theire and when buttercup was near him he looked her right in the eye’s…..buttercup stood there just petrified and then started to slowly back off and then fliew right past blossom and in the direction of the house they lived in……blossom just looked and followed wondering how in hell the man could scare buttercup so bad


The man just closed his eye’s again and continued walking the road he walked before


When the girls got home buttercup raced up to the room of the ppg and put bubble’s in the bed then she come’s down shaking, blossom just sat there thinking
When the proffesorcame home he was quite suprised to see buttercup in a state of terror and bubble’s missing

Utonium: buttercup? What happend?.... and where is bubbles?

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Excellent update! Keep writting!

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ohh and it may take a while for the next one to come
i got to make some new chapter's

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Meanwhile in brisbaine’s office
Butch: WHAT?!?!
Brick: wait…what?
Bribaine: you heard me brick, and butch keep your voice down
Butch: *grumble’s*
Brick: we got to kidnap someone? Don’t you got your solders for that?
Brisbane: if i was to try that he woud wipe out the whole army
Boomer: pardon?!?!
Brick: say what?!?!
Butch: you got to be kidding me!!
Brisbane: just watch this video

Brisbane take’s a remote and puches a fiew buten’s and a big sckreen came out of the roof, Brisbane puched another buten and a video of a robot being dealt a big blow by the ppg and then landing opon the strange man who blew it up and scared the hell out of buttercup and bubble’s
And finaly a shot of the face that creeped out the girl’s,
Brick: WHAAAHH
Butch: WTF!?!?!?
Boomer: OMG!!!!!
Brisbane: it creeped me out too when i saw it for the first time….it still creeps me out
The face of the man was that of no emotion and it had absolutely no color and it was like it was a character from a old horror moevie as it was all black and white and it had no eyeball’s, only 2 grey hole’s that seemed to never have any blood vesels leading to the eye’s….it was like it was born…..or made that way and it also seemed to have some dark vluid flow out of the corner’s of the “eye’s”….it was crying……its own blood

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Thats Bad ASS!!!!!
lol I thought that was funny the fact he scared the crap outta every one and there like WTF!?!?!?!?! lol
Awesome Update

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glad you even read it and im trilled that you like it
but seriosly tho...if you saw him in real life you woud probaly act the same or worce :P

i know i would...i mean he is like a living nightmare....without color

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but seriosly tho...if you saw him in real life you woud probaly act the same or worce?

If I saw this guy and he was after me,I would be like"........HOLY SH**" lol
Still this guy Is a Bad mutha dude.
One thing will there be any fights?
There was one but it was short,i wanna see some bloodshed

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