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Postby dark psyghost » Thu Jun 22, 2006 7:49 am

Well as Bass exe fan i post a drawing of him first.
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Postby Glahardt » Thu Jun 22, 2006 7:58 am

Um... Your hand shakin' or something? Fast strokes makes the lines smoother.
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Postby dark psyghost » Thu Jun 22, 2006 8:14 am

yes i had some fine motor skill problems in the past that might explain the the lines looking like my hands are shaking. and i will try to use fast strokes more. Thanks for the comment Glahardt.
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Postby Darkness_calls » Thu Jun 22, 2006 10:47 am

Ecluding the lines a little shaky, I find the picture really good ^_^
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Re: Dark psygost not so good art (warning big pictures).

Postby dark psyghost » Thu Jun 22, 2006 4:49 pm

Thanks for the comment DC

Added after 2 hours 54 minutes:

here is the colored version i still need to add shade and other effects caused by the light. so here is the basic colored version.
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Postby Coos » Thu Jun 22, 2006 5:05 pm

Keep it up Dark
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Re: Dark psygost not so good art (warning big pictures) bass

Postby Darkman1 » Thu Jun 22, 2006 6:26 pm

Not bad, most prudent dilemmas have pretty much been said.
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Postby dark psyghost » Thu Jun 22, 2006 7:09 pm

Thanks for the Comment TheCoosinator and Darkman1
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Re: Dark psygost not so good art (warning big pictures) bass

Postby dark psyghost » Sun Jun 25, 2006 8:09 am

well here is the shaded version.
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Postby Frostmork » Sun Jun 25, 2006 8:13 am

shade in a diferent way...Now it just looks like the pic is wet.
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Postby dark psyghost » Sun Jun 25, 2006 8:37 am

ok Frostmork i will try some differnt shading methods haven't found a good one yet.
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Postby Emerald Emblem » Sun Jun 25, 2006 8:48 am

All floors have been pointed out
nice try DP
very good
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Postby Frostmork » Sun Jun 25, 2006 9:35 am

Try to place the "sun" in one corner.Ill try a thing in a moment...w8

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Sorry...A total failure...(From my side...!)
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Postby dark psyghost » Sun Jun 25, 2006 9:40 am

Thanks for the comment PPGD Fan.
and frostmork i will remeber to put the lightsource in a corner i also did that in some other drawings. But in this one i had trouble figuring out how the light from a corner would effect Bass his helmet.
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Re: Dark psygost not so good art (warning big pictures) bass

Postby Darkman1 » Sun Jun 25, 2006 1:52 pm

I would say that you're biggest problem is the lines. With solider lines, the shades you have now probably wouldn't look so bad even though they could use a touch(The cloak is shaded well, the helmet shades mostly.
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Postby Taku » Sun Jun 25, 2006 1:56 pm

Are you using photoshop? I can point you to some good lineart/coloring tutorials.

Other than that, I like that picture. Bass' helmet is hard to draw from straight on. ^__^b
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Postby dark psyghost » Sun Jun 25, 2006 2:11 pm

First of all thanks for the comment Darkman1 and Taku.
Yes i use photoshop. I will be very thankfull if you could point out some good tutorials Taku. And i will practice on my lines until I get them better.
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Postby Taku » Sun Jun 25, 2006 5:21 pm

http://www.deviantart.com/view/15100583/

Very good tips on coloring and lineart.

For this next one, I suggest you stick with lineart and not try the pen tool untill you have had some practice, trust me. This one has good tips on the blur/smuge/burn/dodge tools.

http://www.deviantart.com/view/11889358/

Now her art style is different from yours, but don't let that scare you away, there are some very good tips in there.
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Postby dark psyghost » Sun Jun 25, 2006 5:41 pm

Thanks for the links to the tutorials Taku.
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Postby Mirak's Mod Ghost » Sun Jun 25, 2006 11:28 pm

Although i find the image good, i can't decipher the direction of the light you base to shade the pic...

Still, is a lot better than things i could make, good job ^^
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Postby dark psyghost » Mon Jun 26, 2006 6:11 am

Thanks for the comment Mir@k.
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Postby Erix » Mon Jun 26, 2006 6:18 am

only thing I'd say needs work is hand control. You have the a grasp of look, but what looks like an unsteady hand.
that'll come with time though :P
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Postby dark psyghost » Mon Jun 26, 2006 8:46 am

Thanks for the comment Erix.
I will put hand cotrol on the list of things i need to work at :).
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Postby dark psyghost » Wed Jun 28, 2006 6:19 pm

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Re: Dark psygost not so good art (warning big pictures) 28/0

Postby Casmiricus » Wed Jun 28, 2006 6:24 pm

Just a little tip: I used to have 'shaky hands syndrome' like that. I now use lots of little fast strokes, and it works well. Just give it a try.
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