Well as Bass exe fan i post a drawing of him first.

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Um... Your hand shakin' or something? Fast strokes makes the lines smoother.

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yes i had some fine motor skill problems in the past that might explain the the lines looking like my hands are shaking. and i will try to use fast strokes more. Thanks for the comment Glahardt.

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Ecluding the lines a little shaky, I find the picture really good

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Thanks for the comment DC

Added after 2 hours 54 minutes:

here is the colored version i still need to add shade and other effects caused by the light. so here is the basic colored version.

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Keep it up Dark

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Thanks for the Comment TheCoosinator and Darkman1

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well here is the shaded version.

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shade in a diferent way...Now it just looks like the pic is wet.

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ok Frostmork i will try some differnt shading methods haven't found a good one yet.

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nice try DP
very good

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Sorry...A total failure...(From my side...!)

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Thanks for the comment PPGD Fan.
and frostmork i will remeber to put the lightsource in a corner i also did that in some other drawings. But in this one i had trouble figuring out how the light from a corner would effect Bass his helmet.

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I would say that you're biggest problem is the lines. With solider lines, the shades you have now probably wouldn't look so bad even though they could use a touch(The cloak is shaded well, the helmet shades mostly.

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Are you using photoshop? I can point you to some good lineart/coloring tutorials.

Other than that, I like that picture. Bass' helmet is hard to draw from straight on. ^__^b

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First of all thanks for the comment Darkman1 and Taku.
Yes i use photoshop. I will be very thankfull if you could point out some good tutorials Taku. And i will practice on my lines until I get them better.

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http://www.deviantart.com/view/15100583/

Very good tips on coloring and lineart.

For this next one, I suggest you stick with lineart and not try the pen tool untill you have had some practice, trust me. This one has good tips on the blur/smuge/burn/dodge tools.

http://www.deviantart.com/view/11889358/

Now her art style is different from yours, but don't let that scare you away, there are some very good tips in there.

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Thanks for the links to the tutorials Taku.

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Although i find the image good, i can't decipher the direction of the light you base to shade the pic...

Still, is a lot better than things i could make, good job ^^

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Thanks for the comment Mir@k.

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only thing I'd say needs work is hand control. You have the a grasp of look, but what looks like an unsteady hand.
that'll come with time though

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Thanks for the comment Erix.
I will put hand cotrol on the list of things i need to work at .

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picture expains it i hope.

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Just a little tip: I used to have 'shaky hands syndrome' like that. I now use lots of little fast strokes, and it works well. Just give it a try.

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