Hey I'm new in this place and this is my opening to my first attempt to create a story like this. All help is welcomed.
A tall, blackhaired fifteen year-old boy appeared from the darkness of the now abandoned alley. His black eyes were full of darness and death. His purplestriped black shirt and trousers were covered in dried blood.
"Well, he wasn't here." he said "the hunt continues, off to the next dimension, the next country, the next city, Megaville!" With that he streched his arm. Right then in frond of him a green portal appeared and he swiftly entered it leaving behind him a now dead world and thousants of corpses. Who was he?
Countless years ago in a mystic place a creature of great power, Origin, gave all of his power to create unimaginable creatures of vast force and he and called them Masters. But Origin gave a larger part of his power in to three master lords, Forse the deathmaster, Sparks the life master and Spirit the soulmaster. After hundreds of years in the mystical realm of Origin, the masters managed to escape. Through a dimensional gate they journeyed, finally reaching our land. For a millennia this creatures corrupted our land, killing, pillaging and destroying anything in their path. Then a council was held in order to find a way to get rid of the Masters once and for all. So the people using all of the power they had they managed to capture the three mighty master lords. Using the force of these massive beasts they destroyed the weaker masters and in slaved the most powerful ones that were past to the hand of the great leaders of the land. But some masters were too strong to be controlled so the were locked with the hope that their rightful heir would never come to claim them.
That was Victor Master the heir death now Forse the death master the deadlier of the three master lords and he was hungry, hungry for death and revenge. And his next stop in his trail of blood a quiet and peacefull dimension. A place of heros and villans and more specificly MEGAVILLE!
End of chapter one