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Postby Tsunade » Fri May 26, 2006 12:42 pm

Well this is my first fic so it could be a little lame. I don't have a title for the fic either :unsure: Please put comments I don't care if they are bad or good.
Ok here it goes


Chapter 1- What Happened?
Part 1


“Raaaven!!!” she heard a voice in her head.
“Beast Boy!!” Raven yelled while waking up from her unconsciousness. “Huh?
Where am I?...

Raven looked everywhere around her looking for Beast Boy.
“Beast Boy? Beast Boy?”… She kept calling but no one answered. She started walking. Trees… just trees and no sign of Beast Boy. Where am I anyway? I have never seen this before… Raven said to herself confused. She kept walking for hours and still no sign of BB. She got tired and sat on a big rock.

“What happened?? I remember falling but nothing else… wait! Herald… yes I know what happened… Raven started remembering…

---------------------------------------------FLASH BACK------------------------------------------------

“So you betrayed us? Raven said angry
“Yeah!” said Herald. He was wearing a blue cloak and had a trumpet in one of his hand
“But why, Herald, why have you betrayed us? Said a girl with green eyes and long hair.
“Simple, Starfire…” While running toward at her. He then stopped in front of her.
“Because I chose to” He punched her in the stomach and then in the face leaving her unconscious. Then he played his trumpet and a portal appeared. He caught Starfire and threw her in the portal.
“Starfire!! Yelled Raven. Then she loked back at Herald. “You! Azarath Metrion%remember” Said BB
“You’re right I’m not. That Herald died. I’m a new Herald” said Herald with an evil smile
“Well in that case you’re still gonna pay for what you did” said BB in the battle position
“And what are you going to do? Kill me? Just try!” said Herald still with his evil smile
“Sure thing” said BB transforming into a dinosaur.
"Let's begin then" Herald started running toward BB

End of part 1
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Re: Fan Fic by Tsunade ^_^

Postby Twilight_Flames » Fri May 26, 2006 1:00 pm

Great fic but who is Herald?
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Postby Emerald Emblem » Fri May 26, 2006 1:01 pm

Good
a bit hard to understand but still good

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Re: Fan Fic by Tsunade ^_^

Postby dark psyghost » Fri May 26, 2006 1:07 pm

nice fanfic
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Postby Tsunade » Fri May 26, 2006 1:23 pm

yes I tought no one will know him.
Well he's the black-skinned guy who has a trumpet. You can see him in the episodes where all the TT are fighting together against the Brother Hood Of Evil.

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PPGD Fan wrote:Good
a bit hard to understand but still good


Yes I know. You'll understand later.

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This is Herald
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Postby ChocolateHurricanex » Fri May 26, 2006 1:38 pm

well im not a fan of Teen Titans but your fic caught my atention gooooooooooood joooooooooob.
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Postby Tsunade » Fri May 26, 2006 1:42 pm

^_^ thanks!
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Postby Darkness_calls » Fri May 26, 2006 2:39 pm

Great job Tsunade ^_^
See I told you that you would do a good job lol
Keep it up ;)
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Postby Tsunade » Fri May 26, 2006 5:35 pm

Thank you DC! Now for the next part

Chapter 1- What happened?
Part 2


Herald started running toward BB and jumped very high but BB hit him with his tail. Herald flew away and crashed into a wall falling like if he was going to sit in the floor. Then BB began to run toward him but Herald escaped letting BB knocked himself out. BB returned to his human form and was badly injured since he was running really fast and couldn’t stop in time.

“Leave him alone!!” shouted Raven while letting out her dark power with a form of an arm. But someone wrapped her
“When will you learn?” said a woman with short black hair. She was wrapping her with her own body
“Let me go!” Said Raven trying to get out
“Madam Rougue!” Said Herald
Madam Rougue wrapped Raven so much that leaved Raven without breath. Herald played his trumpet again and a portal (the same one that appeared the 2nd time) appeared while MR punched Raven really hard in the face leaving her unconscious. Then they both threw BB and Raven to the portal.

------------------------------------End of Flash Back-------------------------------------------------

Sighed Raven “Those two… Well let’s keep looking. Now where should I start?”
The young woman started walking straight forward. She has a light grey skin. She’s wearing a blue cloak and a black leotard and a chain belt around her waist. She has a long violet hair (she’s no longer on her 16. Now she has 19 meaning she’s no longer a child anymore)
While she was walking she saw a house, a really old house. She stepped in front of the door and knocked but no one answer. Knocked again and still no answer. She decided to leave and started walking but before she could do another step she sensed that someone was watching her from a lot of trees from her left side. She turned to see but no one was there at least anyone she could see. Raven started walking again but with caution that at any time she could attack back or defend herself.

But… there was someone indeed.

End of part 2
End of Chapter 1
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Postby dark psyghost » Fri May 26, 2006 5:42 pm

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Postby Darkness_calls » Fri May 26, 2006 6:06 pm

Lovely Tsunade ^_^
This keeps getting better :)
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Postby Tsunade » Fri May 26, 2006 6:19 pm

Thank you!
Next updated will be at 10:00pm(now 7:01pm) since I have to go. :(

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or tomorrow
well... now leaving
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Postby ChocolateHurricanex » Sat May 27, 2006 2:49 am

good job and bye-bye.
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Postby Aeris » Sat May 27, 2006 5:27 am

Cool^^
Just be careful when mixing the past with the present (I mean verbs).
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Re: Fan Fic by Tsunade ^_^ Chapter1 part 2

Postby Klyptomaniac » Sat May 27, 2006 8:33 pm

Not ot be mean, but I believe her name is Madame Rouge.
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Re: Fan Fic by Tsunade ^_^ Chapter1 part 2

Postby Tsunade » Wed May 31, 2006 12:58 pm

Klyptomaniac wrote:Not ot be mean, but I believe her name is Madame Rouge.


really? well I thought it was madam mrooch. I'll change it now. Thanks!
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Re: Fan Fic by Tsunade ^_^ Chapter1 part 2

Postby Leon FlameBurst » Wed May 31, 2006 1:01 pm

Nice Chapters, Tsunade, for me you can continue so keep this up!
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Postby Tsunade » Wed May 31, 2006 1:08 pm

Chapter 2- No Time for This


At the same time, in another place where there were more trees, there was a young woman running. She’s wearing a kimono, has long black hair and has a giant boomerang on her back. Next to her was a little female cat no larger than a kitten with white fur, various black markings, large red eyes, and two tails, running as well. Kohaku, where are you? That’s the only thing that passes through the young woman’s mind ever since that day.

The young woman suddenly stopped, so as her cat, since they sensed something not human was near by. “Kirara” she whispered. Her cat nodded and fire appeared around it while it was turning into a tiger-like demon-cat with long, saber-like fangs and the fire that wreath her legs and tails. The young woman took out her kimono and her custom was different. It’s red and black and has a custom-fit gas mask so she can protect herself from her paralyzing poisons. She prepared for battle waiting to the not human thing to come out. Then she heard something moving in a bush. She stepped toward it but suddenly something appeared behind her and almost caught her but she jumped. Huh? When did it…? She looked back still in the air and saw a demon. “So, just another of those annoying demons. I don’t have time for this” She said to herself grabbing her boomerang. “Hiraikotsu!!” she shouted throwing her boomerang toward the demon instantly killing it. Kirara flew where the young woman was and she sat on Kirara’s back and caught her boomerang as it came back to her. “Thanks Kirara! Now let’s keep looking” and Kirara started flying away. It kept flying until they reached some point in which they saw someone walking outside an old house with some weird clothes, clothes that they have never seen. They landed on the ground and noticed that it was a young woman with a blue cloak but it wasn’t covering her hair. A woman?!? Maybe she’s… “Kirara, let’s follow her” she whispered and started following her.

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this one is kinda of short i know. the next one will be long
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Postby Emerald Emblem » Wed May 31, 2006 1:10 pm

Very confusing but it is good anyhow
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Postby Tsunade » Wed May 31, 2006 1:42 pm

Chapter 3- Raven, Sango and Kirara

Back to Raven

“Just great, more trees. I’m getting tired of this. I’m gonna meditate” she said and sat down on the ground and closed her eyes. “Azarath Metrion Zinthos. Azarath Metrion Zin…” she created a dark barrier and something rebounded from it. Raven looked at the thing that rebounded and she noticed that it was a giant boomerang. Suddenly a young woman on the back of a big cat appeared and the woman caught the boomerang and threw it at Raven again but she jumped and dodged it. The boomerang went back and Raven noticed so she created a dark barrier again and it rebounded.

Damn it… who’s she? And that power is… the young woman thought surprised. She caught her boomerang she jumped from her cat’s back and her cat started running toward Raven. Raven disappeared and appeared behind the cat and, with a tree she was controlling, hit it and the cat flew a few meters backwards leaving it unable to move and turned back to a little cat. The young woman landed behind Raven and kicked her on her back. Raven landed on the ground and the young woman was going to kick her again but Raven did a back flip and they exchanged some punches until Raven got a lot of rocks with her power and threw them at the young woman. She dodged them all but Raven created an arm and caught the young woman.

“Let go!!” the young woman shouted
“Who are you? And why you were following me?” Raven said
“Where’s my brother you witch??” The young woman yelled with tears
“Huh?” Raven said releasing her “You’re looking for someone too?”
Wait… she’s looking for someone too?? “Who are you?” Asked the young woman curiously
“My name is Raven and you are…? Raven asked
“I’m Sango a demon exterminator” she said walking toward her cat that was on the ground a little injured.
Demon?!? The last time I got involve with something similar it was when my father almost ruled the world. Where am I?? Raven thought a little unsafe
“And this is Kirara” Sango said grabbing her.
“Wait, let me check her” said Raven looking at Kirara's back. She then put her arms on it and around her arms appeared a light green power aura that was healing Kirara’s back. “It’s ok now!”
Besides that strange dark power, she has the power of healing. She’s kind of dangerous. But the question is can I trust her? Sango thought wondering what she’ll do
“Sango, is it? Raven asked
“Yes?” Sango answered
“You said you were looking for your brother…” Raven got interrupted
“Yes, did you see him??” Sango asked impatiently
“Umm… no. I just got here. I’m looking for my friend, Beast Boy, and I don’t know where he is… or where am I… First of all where am I? Raven asked looking around
“Japan” Sango answered
“Japan?? Raven said surprisingly “But… This is not the Japan I know… in what year are we?”
“1469”
Raven’s eyes were wide opened. I’m in the past?!?
Sango noticed her face’s change. “What? What’s wrong?” she asked
“Sango, I’m from the future” Raven answered
“That explains those powers of yours… and your outfit too. It happened before with a girl so I’m not surprised. But how you got here?”
“Well I’m from a team called Teen Titans. We fight a lot of different bad guys. First we were 5 but after we defeated the Brother Hood of Evil, with the help of other heroes, we became like 26 Titans. Well one of those titans betrayed us and released one twisted woman, literally, that was part of the Brother Hood of Evil. Beast Boy and I were fighting the traitor but we got beaten and he sent us here” Raven explained
“I see”
“What happened to your brother?” Raven asked
“A long time ago he was controlled by Naraku. I would say he’s the devil itself. After my friends and I defeated him, my brother was released and we were all having wonderful times. But… Sango stopped and she turned her face down…2 days ago he got captured by a guy with a blue cloak. We were so happy back then… I won’t forgive him!” she said with some tears.
Guy with blue cloak?? Could it be…? Raven thought
“That’s why I was following you. I thought you were him but I realized that you were a woman and since you have the same cloak...Sorry!” she apologized a little embarrassed
“Don't worry! but Sango, did that guy had a trumpet?”
“Umm… yes!”
Greeeat! Raven thought not so happy “Sango, that’s Herald, the one who betrayed us. Looks like we’re in this together. I’ll help you find your brother he may have Beast Boy too” Herald, what are you thinking?!? she said a little concerned
“And I’ll help you find your friend” Sango said putting Kirara on the ground. Kirara transformed into the tigger-like demon-cat and Sango sat on her back. “Raven, we’re going to fly, come one” Sango said extending her hand to Raven’s
“I’ll fly” Raven said putting her cloak’s cape covering her hair and started flying
She can fly too?!? What kind of future is that? Kagome didn’t mention anything about people flying…

And they flew away.
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Postby dark psyghost » Wed May 31, 2006 1:52 pm

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Postby Emerald Emblem » Wed May 31, 2006 2:02 pm

ravens text was hard to see so I had to highlight her text but I liked it anyway
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Postby Frostmork » Wed May 31, 2006 2:09 pm

Cool...
And confusing+I almoust got a headache for reading Ravens text.
(See it as a sacrifice and be happy.)
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Postby Darkness_calls » Wed May 31, 2006 3:21 pm

Great job ^_^
Go Sango ( my fav ;) ).
I love the third chapter the most :)
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Postby Tsunade » Wed May 31, 2006 3:26 pm

lol thanks! ^_^
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