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Tenshi Nova wrote:The overlap of conversation makes it harder to follow. At the top it's assumed that we're supposed to read this from left to right, but at the bottom it's assumed we should read from right to left.
ULTRADJ wrote:Meh, not bad, but not impressive either. The story does look like it's moving forward though, which is a plus, but the introducing of Tak was a little sloppy, and the dialogue at the bottom was kind of annoying to figure out. The style isn't too bad here to be honest, maybe a bit too shiny but it's not bad. Let's see if the comic can keep up a good pace or not with the story.
NEK wrote:Saved by girl you liked who turned out to be an Irken invader. Oh well, beggars can't be choosers.
geminidragon wrote:I am happy that Tak saved Dib.... Why didn't Dib see Taz as also a threat? Or even acknowledge her help in saving him from Gaz?
THANK YOU!!!!Tisvana18 wrote:As a side note (since one of the first few comments mentioned it), I'm banking on the idea that the voices in the comic are Lard Nar and Schloontapooxis.
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