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Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby Numa430 » Tue Oct 29, 2013 2:16 am

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Test drafts for Guardstar, enjoy ;)
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Re: Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby Exodis » Tue Oct 29, 2013 2:18 am

Interesting artwork you have here!
What's your project about?
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Re: Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby Birdofterror » Tue Oct 29, 2013 2:51 am

Woah. That last picture does not dissapoint in the slightest. I personally still think this should be in art- but eh.

Whatever you're going to make, I'm sure it's going to be 'very' interesting. I look forward to your future works.
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Re: Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby Numa430 » Tue Oct 29, 2013 2:53 am

The total story takes place in Titan City, the City of Tomorrow.
There was once a scientist who worked for IMPERIAL, a secret service to protect and fight for a better tomorrow.
He somehow gain super powers in a laboratory incident(kinda like in Watchmen*Totally not like that at all.)
Who then became known as Guardstar!

I wrote a 380 page script for how it began.
I will post something you guys might wanna see from the artist who i've hired for this project.
He is the same person who made these drafts i posted minutes ago.
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Re: Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby Havoc » Tue Oct 29, 2013 2:59 am

I'm getting a very "Marvel" vibe from this, which is not a bad thing. So what abilities does Guardstar have?

Numa430 wrote:I will post something you guys might wanna see from the artist who i've hired for this project.
He is the same person who made these drafts i posted minutes ago.

Sure, go for it.
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Re: Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby Numa430 » Tue Oct 29, 2013 3:09 am

Guardstar has super strength, flight and energy blasts.
He knows close hand to hand combat, The incident also slow down his aging with invulnerablity.
Anyways here is a preview of what the art will look like.

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Re: Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby dj1107 » Tue Oct 29, 2013 3:19 am

-looks at armor guy- X-O manowar?
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Re: Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby Numa430 » Tue Oct 29, 2013 3:34 am

No. That happens to be Dr. Kraken, the archenemy of Sea Lancer.
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Re: Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby dj1107 » Tue Oct 29, 2013 3:49 am

Numa430 wrote:No. That happens to be Dr. Kraken, the archenemy of Sea Lancer.

Ah sorry the armor just reminded me of X-O manowar.
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Still this project looks interesting.
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Re: Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby BeeAre » Tue Oct 29, 2013 4:18 am

Numa430 wrote:The total story takes place in Titan City, the City of Tomorrow.
There was once a scientist who worked for IMPERIAL, a secret service to protect and fight for a better tomorrow.
He somehow gain super powers in a laboratory incident(kinda like in Watchmen*Totally not like that at all.)
Who then became known as Guardstar!

I wrote a 380 page script for how it began.
I will post something you guys might wanna see from the artist who i've hired for this project.
He is the same person who made these drafts i posted minutes ago.


whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa.

380 pages? seriously?

you gave me less than 500 words and called it six pages.

What word processor are you using?

Generally, a page is at a double-spaced 12 pt standard font like Arial or Times New Roman.

Numa, I don't think you've made 380 pages.

Recheck your numbers at double-spaced 12 pt Times New Roman.
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Re: Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby Numa430 » Tue Oct 29, 2013 4:34 am

Aye
I guess i was wrong on that part Beeare.
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Re: Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby Birdofterror » Tue Oct 29, 2013 4:34 am

Well don't keep us in the dark! What's the verdict? What "is" the number? :P

For my story, 3 pages of whatever default settings Microsoft Word is set to is between 1000-1500 words. I'm willing to call that true based on the fact that when I printed it out, the entirety of the pages were covered in text and there were 3 full ones, so yes- I believe what I'm at is the default. If I were to condense your story to my settings, if what BR says is true and your 6 pages was 500 words... doing math WHICH I SUCK AT would place your story between 90-100 pages.

Calculator says 95, but this is using a bunch of vague generalizations and going off of the assumption that what I'm writing at is the "Default."
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Re: Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby Numa430 » Tue Oct 29, 2013 4:42 am

19 pages on the dot.
I guess i need to write more for chapter two or something..
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Re: Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby Birdofterror » Tue Oct 29, 2013 4:44 am

Damn, I was WAY off. o.O

Just what settings were you set at before?
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Re: Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby Numa430 » Tue Oct 29, 2013 4:46 am

Text documents, its the only simple thing i have to use.
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Re: Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby Birdofterror » Tue Oct 29, 2013 4:47 am

Ah, I remember using Wordpad and Notepad. Those were terrible times. Errors everywhere, not just limited to my own skill.

Microsoft word cleaned my shit up in ways I didn't even know possible. If you ever have the ability to get it, do so. I promise you from the bottom of my heart you will realize just how much better it is than anything else.
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Re: Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby ari-6 » Tue Oct 29, 2013 10:41 am

Would it be okay if I asked you some questions about the artist you hired, if you don't mind my asking. What is his name? What kind of background does he have? How old is he? I know I have no businesses knowing these things but if you saw fit to oblige me, I would be very grateful.
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Re: Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby Numa430 » Tue Oct 29, 2013 10:55 am

ari-6 wrote:Would it be okay if I asked you some questions about the artist you hired, if you don't mind my asking. What is his name? What kind of background does he have? How old is he? I know I have no businesses knowing these things but if you saw fit to oblige me, I would be very grateful.

That is a solid good question.
His name is Cesar Seba.
Born in Brazil.
Used a digital tool like photoshop or something.
He is 21.
That seems fair?
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Re: Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby ari-6 » Tue Oct 29, 2013 10:59 am

Wow, I honestly was not expecting such a response and certainly not one so quickly. Thank you, and I hope that this work is successful for you both.
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Re: Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby Havoc » Wed Oct 30, 2013 12:38 am

So what's Guardstar's real name, and how old is he?
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Re: Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby OrangeBee » Thu Oct 31, 2013 1:50 pm

All right, I'm hyped! I can not wait to see this!
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Re: Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby Numa430 » Thu Oct 31, 2013 8:54 pm

Havoc wrote:So what's Guardstar's real name, and how old is he?

His name is Marcus Adams, he was originally 38 but after the incident which alter his body in the appearence of a younger look, he doesn't age like a normal human at all.
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Re: Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby Tamuramu » Thu Oct 31, 2013 9:28 pm

This looks very interesting. Getting a marvel vibe but it makes me love it even more.
Anyways better than anything I could make.
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Re: Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby Havoc » Thu Oct 31, 2013 10:51 pm

Tamuramu wrote:Getting a marvel vibe

Ha. That's exactly what I said. Welcome to the forums new friend.
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Re: Guardstar (My upcoming project!)

Postby dj1107 » Thu Oct 31, 2013 11:06 pm

Really? I'm getting a more Astro City vibe.
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