If no one minds me running in here and being honest, I do love where you've put the lines, the skin colour, oh and the shade is wonderful (Just see the way it shapes around the shoulder and boobs), that lower half (Yes I'm staring down there! But more for appreciation rather than naughty business!... Okay sort of both
) and let alone that eye. In general it is one heck of a sexy drawing.
But I have to back Randori on this and say that even though you've tried to do the Anime trick of concealing it with her fringe, it's not convincing. For one, the eye you can see is long, width wise and there's no shade over the hidden eye to make it seem as if it's even hidden by the sun.
I should also probably shouldn't be talking about this as I'm just as bad with it as anyone here, but proportions! The arms and head is extremely small to the rest of the body that it's freakish... to me anyways. Apologies if I'm being harsh, but I'm just wanting to highlight my point.
Also this is just nitpicking, so feel free to find out where I live and hit me with a shovel, but your character doesn't look as if she has a chest. You sort of have, but it's not satisfactory to imagine a rib cage in there. more like it's an expansion of her stomach.
Hope you appreciated this anyways, in an effort to improve your art or just comment in general and to just try to improve my own art.