Sigment Kurosai wrote:I wonder if Blood will let him in on Redcliffe.
This far into it? I'm not completely sure.
Zelosse wrote:A 14yr old does not a threatening warrior make. Make him 19 or so, give him that boastful arrogance that so defines that age.
I agree with this, I did over look the age, my bad... as is the parent thing, ehh I can see its getting worked on. 17 or 19 works for me for your character, Tenshi.
Ro Wong is the expert on Qunari here, seeing as he is literally the only one using one right now. Probably chilled back the most with Sten too in the game.
So yes, adjust the age, and the parent thing is going to have to be looked at as well.
I'll overlook the length of your CS. I like long ones because I try to incorporate some of the player history into the game as well.
Also just a general note guys, I'm going to be posting tonight, but you won't see me again until Tuesday. Nothing serious, just finals. I'll check incognito to make sure things are going well, but that'll be about it.
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