TheMadDoctor wrote:Having the character's entire personality based on rage and vengeance and rage isn't quite the best idea. It's gotten a bit of a cliché by now. I recommend the vengeful part to be an underlining trait and give him a more diverse personality.
Blood Lord wrote:You're doing this as a fan fiction in the Lit section, right?
Birdofterror wrote:YOU CAN'T PROVE THAT!TheMadDoctor wrote:Well, not sleep, more like rape.
Also I'm going to use Blossom's newly discovered track record to drop a statement:
You can't rape the willing.
TheMadDoctor wrote:We really aren't even that sure if Chi is blossom's daughter.
Blood Lord wrote:The fuck is this in here for? Kind of a random drop zone to be discussing this again.
Maru wrote:Yknow that kid looking girl from Touhou? The one that drinks a lot? What if Aku fucked her?
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