CrimsonCreed wrote:So* I* was fiddling around with character ideas* in my head for a Grim Tales fan chapter and I* want to get your opinion on something.
Hmm. Well this isn't really the place to discuss such a thing, maybe in the Literature forum, or your own thread in this section of the forum? But- while I'm already typing this I could give my two cents on your idea.
CrimsonCreed wrote:ok so I* was thinking of making an* introductory chapter for a character who's able to use his blood as an* armor
Not a bad power to have, but kind of specific. I take it he could also make 'weapons' out of blood as well? Perhaps swing his blood out of his body as a kind of projectile?
CrimsonCreed wrote:and ends up meeting Jr and Minnie and ends up becoming friends with them
Well, do they need each other? Does this character need Junior and Minnie? Do Junior and Minnie need this character? Is it a mutually beneficial relationship or is it just one that happens for no other reason?
CrimsonCreed wrote:I'd* like to give him a personality where deep down he knows he can't trust anyone but himself but gives the appearance that he does.
Well, has be been betrayed somewhere down the road? Is there a reason he can't trust anyone? Has this character had a hard life of love and loss?
If you need help with your character we can exchange some PM's, because past this post I'm not sure if it qualifies for this specific thread, you know?
Tom E. Gemcity wrote:FUCK ASSASINS CREED.
Language bro. Language. Use your inside voice.