White Death (Shiroi Shi) Fan Story

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White Death (Shiroi Shi) Fan Story

Postby grimjr1234567890 » Sun Jan 27, 2013 1:54 pm

Last edited by grimjr1234567890 on Wed Jan 30, 2013 4:50 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Promoting my story here: viewtopic.php?f=7&t=51576&start=0
Junior and Minnie are off on another adventure but this time its from a different point of view.
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Re: White Death (Shiroi Shi) Fan Story

Postby Birdofterror » Mon Jan 28, 2013 6:54 am

I don't want to be a downer or anything like that, but I think it's against the rules to have two separate threads in the literature forum, especially if the other one is still on the front page.

Also do you think you could split your story into paragraphs instead of one giant block of words? That would make it infinitely easier to read.
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Re: White Death (Shiroi Shi) Fan Story

Postby Blood Lord » Tue Jan 29, 2013 7:51 pm

It is against the rules. Hence why I have three stories (which I need to update badly) in one thread.

And yeah, if you don't paragraph your text, people are less likely to read it.
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