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Postby not rockwell » Sun Nov 11, 2012 5:35 pm

critique plz?"

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Postby Hiryu » Sun Nov 11, 2012 5:55 pm

Poppy is shorter, dude. And wields a hammer, not a sword.
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Postby Stricken » Sun Nov 11, 2012 5:57 pm

and isn't a ginger...
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Postby Kkeellaacc » Sun Nov 11, 2012 6:03 pm

"I have a shirt like that but it's completely different"
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Postby Hiryu » Sun Nov 11, 2012 6:07 pm

Stricken wrote:and isn't a ginger...
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Postby not rockwell » Sun Nov 11, 2012 6:13 pm

lol, wut. thats not popy
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Postby Valhallen » Sun Nov 11, 2012 6:23 pm

Looks like she's missing faulds and a helmet, but that's probably intentional.
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Postby Asmodai » Sun Nov 11, 2012 6:28 pm

I'd make the mountains in the distance a little more visible, I think it would add a grander look to it
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Postby Hiryu » Sun Nov 11, 2012 6:31 pm

not rockwell wrote:lol, wut. thats not popy
Sure it is.
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Postby BeeAre » Sun Nov 11, 2012 6:48 pm

not rockwell wrote:critique plz?"

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Postby General_Gob » Tue Nov 13, 2012 2:01 am

Hmm. Cool.
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Postby Valhallen » Tue Nov 13, 2012 3:05 am

Also, you might consider reducing the size / prominence of that large area of blue in the top center. As it is, it's visually weighty enough to serve as a second focus that prompts viewers' eyes to rest there. If you move the wisp of cloud separating the two darker blue areas of sky a bit to the left, the clear sky would appear more as a field extending up past the top of the picture. The visual thrust of the image would be less bounded, which I think would fit it better.
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