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not rockwell
 Post subject: hey guys.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 11, 2012 5:35 pm 
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critique plz?"

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Hiryu
 Post subject: Re: hey guys.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 11, 2012 5:55 pm 
Teddy bears are manly
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Poppy is shorter, dude. And wields a hammer, not a sword.

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 11, 2012 5:57 pm 
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and isn't a ginger...

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 11, 2012 6:03 pm 
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 11, 2012 6:07 pm 
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not rockwell
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 11, 2012 6:13 pm 
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lol, wut. thats not popy

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 11, 2012 6:23 pm 
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Looks like she's missing faulds and a helmet, but that's probably intentional.
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 11, 2012 6:28 pm 
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I'd make the mountains in the distance a little more visible, I think it would add a grander look to it

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Hiryu
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 11, 2012 6:31 pm 
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not rockwell wrote:
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Sure it is.
But I always preferred Battle Regalia.

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 11, 2012 6:48 pm 
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dude you are really good could you help me with the comic idea we had? :P email my black ass nigga we straight up thugs us out a story.

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 13, 2012 2:01 am 
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Hmm. Cool.

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Also, you might consider reducing the size / prominence of that large area of blue in the top center. As it is, it's visually weighty enough to serve as a second focus that prompts viewers' eyes to rest there. If you move the wisp of cloud separating the two darker blue areas of sky a bit to the left, the clear sky would appear more as a field extending up past the top of the picture. The visual thrust of the image would be less bounded, which I think would fit it better.
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