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PostPosted: Thu Jan 05, 2012 9:53 pm 
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WOW i like this page it sertinly is evil :evil:

what's next i realy want to know. will grim jr. be to late to save his siter? will his nergal powers take controle again?

i can't wait for the next page! :mrgreen:

but no pressure :)

....... where is everybody :(

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 04, 2012 12:42 pm 
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oh well
Can't let this comic dies
I will finish this no matter what

anw, new pages, hope you like it
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looks like it's so many pages for Veronica

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 04, 2012 11:53 pm 
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real nice comic by the way :mrgreen:


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PostPosted: Sun Feb 05, 2012 1:10 pm 
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its "she's out numbered" not "she's out of numbers"
nice page btw :)

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 05, 2012 2:19 pm 
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They are screwed! Now time for a battle.


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PostPosted: Mon Feb 06, 2012 8:16 pm 
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oh goody varonica brought some new friends. :)

activating the don't f*ck with me mode.

lets see if they can handle it .

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 12, 2012 9:45 pm 
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@ Haruhi: Thanks :D
I have fixed it

@ darkness: let's see :D

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I haven't check the grammar on page 35, so please help me if you can

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 12, 2012 10:19 pm 
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This page looks really nice... Only thing you might want to check is the dialogue in panel 4. You might want to change that first sentence to something like "We meet again after all", or "After all this time, we meet again". For the second sentence, instead of "have a right choice" try "make the right choice".


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PostPosted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 8:12 pm 
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i know he is going to deside from two out of the three but even i ponder on that question as well. is he going to choose #2 or #3?
he didn't stand a chance with her brother, so how is he going to kill dark mandy?

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 24, 2012 11:42 am 
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Just have to wonder. Does Veronica come off as a Merry Sue to anyone else?

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 25, 2012 11:15 pm 
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Imosa wrote:
Just have to wonder. Does Veronica come off as a Merry Sue to anyone else?

maybe she will, mabe she will not. it depends on max on that one. :|

Keep on going! :rock: Keep your hard work liven on.

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 1:32 pm 
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@ Imosa: Who is Marry Sue?

@ dark: I still keep going, just have been slowed

well, this is new page, hope you like it

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P/S: There is something in a game, do you know what game is it? :D

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 1:44 pm 
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btw, something I done days ago:
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PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2012 9:43 pm 
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*Holds his laghter.* That comic page is so funny, I might die laghing. lol

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2012 11:57 pm 
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darknessvandeath wrote:
*Holds his laghter.* That comic page is so funny, I might die laghing. lol

Sorry for being cruel. I'll try to be better. :(

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2012 7:03 am 
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I enjoyed this where has it gone?

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2012 7:12 am 
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I have been art block for months , can't draw anything
well, sorry for making you wait so long (for someone who like this)

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 6:52 pm 
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wow...........witch one is going to die first?

welcom back maxy! :D

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 07, 2012 10:36 am 
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@ Darkness: Thanks :D

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 28, 2012 4:22 pm 
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Well good Jr. is screwed. :(

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 04, 2012 12:57 pm 
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liking so far.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 05, 2012 5:16 am 
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2 Months since the last time I post something here

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Well, hope you like this

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2012 12:21 am 
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Talking about stuck between a rock and a hard place.
And who is this ultamate guy the gate keeper said?

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 15, 2012 7:59 pm 
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ooooh I like way much~! except the comic sans...

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2012 9:00 am 
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Good to be back
Well, at first:
BossyGirl wrote:
ooooh I like way much~! except the comic sans...


Thanks, I like you, too. but I'm too lazy to change or find some suitable fonts, any ideas for me? (And because of my lazyness, I get use to with this comic sans)

@ darkness: you'll know, soon (I hope so)

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