Well, shit. Kinda Lich King-like in the last panel there.

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Tuor: Stuff is our resident, hot mess, alcoholic.
Senel: Stuff is the patron saint of getting shitfaced. You replaced your organs with an engine that runs solely on alcohol.
RIP Lucky. I love you so much.

I know this may be weird to bring up, but doesn't Bleedheart look like M. Bison

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...already known the fact.

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I heard you don't accept god
I don't accept fandom/shipping/mary-sue

Damn, this page is really dark, with all those bodies all over the place. That must have benn one hell of a battle.

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The Bringer of death and chaos to the World of humans!!

"Why so Serious?"

Okay, this page is kind of neat.

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“One day you wake up and realize the world can be conquered.”

Kinda liked Bleedheart's presence in the first scene. Thought at first that he might've been just a floating body in the past, so seeing him interact like that would be interesting. But then, the last panel... Oh well.

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(from Dragonlance)

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Well tell your 'Dragonlance' that dying is pointless. You can fulfill your destiny and still live. Man, some people are way too willing to die.Was that picture really necessary? I mean really.Huh... I never caught the floating body vibe before, but I can definitely see where you are coming from with it.

I like the last panel... although our buddy seems to take a squeezing to the head too well.

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"It's such a fine line between clever and stupid."

The Chronometal Wars, a fan-fiction taking place in the PPGD Universe. Catastrophe is the only certainty.

Anyone notice that his exposed, bleeding heart wasn't there?

The way Brave aiming at Bleedheart's heart in the last page makes me think he might be the one who burned Bleedheart's arm and exposed his heart.

Why is there a floating armor in the first panel

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His head and legs are just in shadow.

... ... ... ... ...
I think he knows that... I think he was trying to be funny...

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"It's such a fine line between clever and stupid."

The Chronometal Wars, a fan-fiction taking place in the PPGD Universe. Catastrophe is the only certainty.

What the fuck kind of lighting is that.

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The dramatic kind.

Oh, i thought it was the "oh shit i fucked up the fucking lighting god damn -bleedman" kind, i guess i was mistaken, my apologies.

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Someone's just notice the pattern after me.

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I heard you don't accept god
I don't accept fandom/shipping/mary-sue

It's good to see Bleedheart have more to do now. He's really abit on the creepy side, which I think does make sence since he is the King of Sorrow. He's like a bulky Grim-Reaper with him talking the souls of the dead.

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The Bringer of death and chaos to the World of humans!!

"Why so Serious?"

^ This. I agree. The shoujo-lover in me kind of wants to see more about the girl Brave loved... but I suppose that might annoy the heck out of the few loyal fans this comic still has

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"Courage is the Magic that turns Dreams into Reality"
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I'm glad and thankful for the loyalty of those who continue to read what is shared. As things go with the writing and creative process, not everything that gets planned goes into the comic...and some things that were never planned at all gets placed in priority at last minute.

My personal apologies to anyone I've irked or upset during the time in which I began working on this comic. I do hope that you all enjoy the next few pages, though.

Thank you for reading!

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All that has ever been created was done so for a reason, even if that reason is just for it to be.

DMB, you're the last one to blame. You've just been thrown into this, and trying to make it right.

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Tuor: Stuff is our resident, hot mess, alcoholic.
Senel: Stuff is the patron saint of getting shitfaced. You replaced your organs with an engine that runs solely on alcohol.
RIP Lucky. I love you so much.

Heh, true enough. Instead of getting to work on my own original story, I'm pretty much trying to continue (and finish) an idea had by others.

That said, I pretty much want what IS there now to be as good as possible. I'm trying to work within certain...parameters, you could say.

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All that has ever been created was done so for a reason, even if that reason is just for it to be.