Well originally in another thread Haruhi5, I think is the name, asked me to see some of my literature, and since it's been a while I decided to make a descision and finally post in one here so tell me what you think.
Lost, lost like a needle in a haystack. Forever to roam in the every ending nightmare of the burning, eternal, flames of this endless place. Eternal darkness is all I see. For miles it's endless darkness, but the screams of the damned fill my ears. I see one man, being burned alive in the flames. His screams loud and crazy, his body seeming to burn to a crisp. His screams sounded as painful as those being crucified by romans. I just watched him in awe. My hands slowly reaching outward to him, wanting to stroke his burnt skin. And soon, I too felt myself burning in that eternal damnation of an inferno, the screams of the lost souls somehow echoing in my head and ears, and I felt the burden and shackles of hands slowly grabbing at my ankles. It was forever to be my punishment, to burn with the damned. To never see the light of day. I will lose my sanity, my place, my authority, and my purpose all in this place of flames and punishment, in this place called Hell.
Dude, just stop. You're not even good.