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PostPosted: Mon Oct 31, 2011 3:44 pm 
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Maxgate
PostPosted: Mon Oct 31, 2011 11:07 pm 
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I'm impressed with your skill Maxgate, but I would highly recommend you send drafts of your page to a person who speaks English as their first language before you post them, to help correct the grammar and spelling errors. Or, better yet, find somebody you can trust as a writer and explain your ideas to them so they can get the sentences and phrasing perfect the first time, and you can then use their script. I'm sure if you ask around you'll find volunteers.


Actually I did it every time I submitted a new page on Deviantart
but looks like there's only few people want to help me
btw, I always forgot to submit the edited page here

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darknessvandeath
PostPosted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 6:55 pm 
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keep going

i like your story since i read the first page

will drk minnie kill regular minnie or is she going to push push into lust like that red man with claws did

i can help if i can draw worth **********

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Why not just ask one of us to do it? send us a PM on Snafu or through Deviant art and I'm sure any of us would be more then willing to help

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darknessvandeath
PostPosted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 8:56 am 
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ok :(

lets just see how many errors i have on my drawings

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Maxgate
PostPosted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 12:02 pm 
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@ DJ4U: Glass you want to help me :D
Could you please tell me what's your Deviantart ID?

@ darknessvandeath: you can help me coloring the comic or checking my grammar mistake :D

anw, bonus page
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darknessvandeath
PostPosted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 5:27 pm 
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funny side show

i like it, it tells the difference if the gaurdien of worlds was actualy a purfurded ofe

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darknessvandeath
PostPosted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 8:21 pm 
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i have one question since i m still a newby how do you insert pictures :unsure:

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Its DJ4U2, just send me the script prior to uploading it and I'll spell/grammar check it for you

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darknessvandeath
PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2011 5:02 pm 
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thnks but i ment skeches, drawings, no comics about it

and besides i don't have a deviant art account

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2011 6:08 pm 
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darknessvandeath wrote:
thnks but i ment skeches, drawings, no comics about it

and besides i don't have a deviant art account


Dude my old message was for Maxgate, and to upload your own images start an art forum and click the :Img: button then you can upload your pics that way.

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darknessvandeath
PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 5:18 pm 
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@ DJ4U: Glass you want to help me :D
Could you please tell me what's your Deviantart ID?

@ darknessvandeath: you can help me coloring the comic or checking my grammar mistake :D

anw, bonus page
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Just for fun


i like the way you colored nana in the last page so keep it like that

the gaurdian of worls i think he should be different shades of brown because he looks like a wooden figure if you ask me

on the fist panel insted of "where is me" it should say "where am i". and on panel 6 when he said "she fell into me" it should be "she fell on top of me".

other than that you did a good job

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darknessvandeath
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DJ4U wrote:
darknessvandeath wrote:
thnks but i ment skeches, drawings, no comics about it

and besides i don't have a deviant art account


Dude my old message was for Maxgate, and to upload your own images start an art forum and click the :Img: button then you can upload your pics that way.



sorry thought you were talking to me

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Maxgate
PostPosted: Sat Nov 05, 2011 7:40 am 
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@ DJ4U: Thanks
I have watch you in DA
I'll need your help, soon :D

@ Darkness: He looks like a wooden figure, I know, because I want him like that

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darknessvandeath
PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2011 8:09 am 
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i still like your comic max

you are so good at drawing sketches and comics, i am kinda jealus or your skill

just keep up the good work

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Maxgate
PostPosted: Wed Nov 09, 2011 1:53 pm 
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@ Darkness: Thanks :D

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darknessvandeath
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some toys :mrgreen:, i would do what she says because i don't want to be in the sushi buisness :(

those toys must be heavy or something or els it will only be a symple paper cut :grin:

veranica must be more than hell mad. bad idea nana

i like the way this is going ether nana tells where minnie is or have to face a mad veranica :dead:

lets see nana's reply :happy:

:devil: ceep on going, this story is getting to my favorate part (where jr. have to face dark jr. again) :devil:

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just started reading this, really awesome story, bro!
i can't wait for more btw i DevWatched you :)

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darknessvandeath
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mimi, nana
minnie, dark minnie
grim jr., dark grim jr.

what is next in this dimesional world comic, some monsters that can travel in the earth?

this is getting good keep on going max :)

max if you run out of ideas i might give you some of my ideas :)

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Maxgate
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@ darknessvandeath: I don't think I'll run out of ideas =))
but I think this comic is long enough, and should be finish

@ Haruhi: Cool!
and thanks for waching me

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P/S: What do you think if Nana has a twin sister?

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that be good.

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darknessvandeath
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geers chose to cheer for veronica? probably because he does not want to be in the cross fire.

i like the way grim jr. choose his words.

lets see how this comic ends

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Maxgate
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next page, nothing much

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darknessvandeath
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i like it. it realy shows how pissed off veronica is.

will nana servive this?

hope that grim jr. will recognise his own sister

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Maxgate
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page 30 - new girl appear
Name: Anna - the twin sister of Nana
you can say that Veronica has been trapped

and page 31:
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Well, hope you like it

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