Ehem...Let me introduce myselfe first...

I'm Nigi ( my friends always call me like that ) I'm Vietnamese so...my english isnt'very well...(x_x) except when I talking to someone in english:mrgreen:

Well...I think that's enough of that

Now with the Art ~ ! \(>w<)/

[ Hope that someone leave a comment (OxO) ]

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Here is a pic of my own char in an Art Game names Fantasia


Some pic in Fantasia

Trans: kinda like "please eat" or "dig in"^^




Event: Fantasia Race



Get,set...and GO !!! ( Don't ask me why I've drawn like that,Ok ( OxO")

Work on your anatomy abit more.
Paul Richer and Bridgman is good for learning anatomy.

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mmm.... I see the words "vnsharing" in your first picture
so you are a member of vns? I think I haven't seen your gallery yet

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Give me a paper, a pencil, an eraser and a pen, I will show you MY STYLE
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Anyways, I'm not good at English, so, if I make some mistakes, forgive me

Well...update

This is another char in an art game





p/s: I'm not really got at Photoshop

It looks better.
But something looks off with his right hand.
And the whole body looks flat.

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It looks better in pencils

Oh well, need more practice...

You sound discouraged from his critique. You should never be discouraged; only hopeful.

You have a good foundation so far. With some improvements and diligent practice, you can fix the errors that Morpheus mentioned.

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Critique itself should be one of the reasons you post your art.
To refine your art to perfection.

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More update~

Up more...

Doraemon Baseball

I like the detail you put into making the glove.

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i really like the one in the cementary
the background is very well done ^^

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This is a ( really really ) short comic of mine , why is it short ?

Well...'cause it was 4 a comic event and I hadn't much time 4 it ( School...u know )

Luckily , I've finished before the deadline ( Phew...)

But I'll post one page first , the rest I'll post later

Here we go !

     

not bad very nice story telling without words!

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The story seems to be interesting. Your art with drawing is really nice too.

But the story line seems really fast.

In the first three panels, there is the Character 1 walking in the scenery, looking at the girl crying and asking to her.
It could have more panels with more actions like: After the second panel, it could have a close-up of the girl crying; he walks at the girl; the girl realizes that someone is getting closer to her; she looks up and then he ask "what is wrong, little girl" to her.
In between the 4th and 6th panels could have more panels of actions too.

I like your style of drawing. Really attractive.

Grivous.

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I told it on the top of the post that the story is very ( I mean really really ) short because I had to keep up with the deadline

Anyway ,thanks 4 giving me some good advices

Up to page two

Pls leave ma a comment

I liked the fifth panel. That angle is really hard to draw and the detail of the wood in the floor is amazing!

And I loved the joke about his size. Hahaha! xD

But about the eighth panel, it looks like the bad guy is trembling for some reason.

Grivous.

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love how the story is coming along ,your art is so cute


it looks like he might be laughing at him, since hes so small

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Haruhi Suzumiya // ♥ Avid Reader ♥ // Tumblr for Music Lovers // Commissions

Thanks guys 4 the comments

To Haruhi : Yeah, u're rigth about that

He's laughing at Jacob's heigth

Normaly when u're going to challenge a fight with a bully or bad guy with that height of course he'll laugh at u

Let's see how Jacob is gonna to handle with him

Up , up and...up (OxO). ( Leave a comment, pretty pls ! )

Oh my...

I like this comic... But is Jacob very far away in the 6th panel? Because if he is, I think the perspective on the floorboards is a little bit off.

Hm...u're right about that.

Just need more practice than...

Well well well...look who's here

It's Jack's turn

Don't forget to leave a comment ( plz~~~)