Grivous wrote:And I think, in the last Gears' phrase, there is a 'do' in "So you know her?". It will be like this, "So do you know her?"
It could be right.
What I find funny is that you swapped the words crime and criminal. "the most wanted criminals in their relm..." and "an unacceptable crime in any world."
Panel 4: "You said you are the
Guardian of Worlds".
Panel 5: "...a portal to any worlds
... and its the source of my power too
Panel 6 "they had
a little help... from a red girl" and "Can you tell me her number?". lol even though a phone number is made up of 7 digits, it's still considered one number.