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Nigiri-chan's art

Postby Nigi » Sat Sep 10, 2011 11:41 pm

Ehem...Let me introduce myselfe first... lol

I'm Nigi ( my friends always call me like that ) I'm Vietnamese so...my english isnt'very well...(x_x) except when I talking to someone in english:mrgreen:

Well...I think that's enough of that :roll:

Now with the Art ~ ! \(>w<)/

[ Hope that someone leave a comment (OxO) ]


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Here is a pic of my own char in an Art Game names Fantasia
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Some pic in Fantasia

Trans: kinda like "please eat" or "dig in"^^
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Event: Fantasia Race
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Get,set...and GO !!! ( Don't ask me why I've drawn like that,Ok ( OxO")
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Re: Nigiri-chan's little art

Postby Morpheus » Sun Sep 11, 2011 7:20 am

Work on your anatomy abit more.
Paul Richer and Bridgman is good for learning anatomy.
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Re: Nigiri-chan's little art

Postby Maxgate » Sun Sep 11, 2011 1:02 pm

mmm.... I see the words "vnsharing" in your first picture
so you are a member of vns? I think I haven't seen your gallery yet
Give me a paper, a pencil, an eraser and a pen, I will show you MY STYLE
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Anyways, I'm not good at English, so, if I make some mistakes, forgive me
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Re: Nigiri-chan's little art

Postby Nigi » Fri Sep 30, 2011 10:27 pm

Well...update :unsure:

This is another char in an art game :?

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p/s: I'm not really got at Photoshop
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Re: Nigiri-chan's little art

Postby Morpheus » Fri Sep 30, 2011 11:52 pm

It looks better.
But something looks off with his right hand.
And the whole body looks flat.
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Re: Nigiri-chan's little art

Postby Nigi » Sat Oct 01, 2011 8:19 am

It looks better in pencils :unsure:

Oh well, need more practice...
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Re: Nigiri-chan's little art

Postby Coos » Sat Oct 01, 2011 7:57 pm

You sound discouraged from his critique. You should never be discouraged; only hopeful.

You have a good foundation so far. With some improvements and diligent practice, you can fix the errors that Morpheus mentioned.
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Re: Nigiri-chan's little art

Postby Morpheus » Sat Oct 01, 2011 8:03 pm

Critique itself should be one of the reasons you post your art.
To refine your art to perfection.
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Re: Nigiri-chan's little art

Postby Nigi » Wed Oct 05, 2011 7:02 am

More update~ ;)

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Re: Nigiri-chan's little art

Postby Nigi » Tue Oct 11, 2011 10:19 pm

Up more... :mrgreen:

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Re: Nigiri-chan's little art

Postby Morpheus » Tue Oct 11, 2011 10:25 pm

I like the detail you put into making the glove.
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Re: Nigiri-chan's little art

Postby Lady Haru » Thu Oct 13, 2011 5:37 pm

i really like the one in the cementary
the background is very well done ^^
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Jack&Jacob :Tale of a pumpkin lanter (Pg_1)

Postby Nigi » Sat Oct 22, 2011 8:20 am

This is a ( really really ) short comic of mine , why is it short ?

Well...'cause it was 4 a comic event and I hadn't much time 4 it ( School...u know :roll: )

Luckily , I've finished before the deadline ( Phew...)

But I'll post one page first , the rest I'll post later

Here we go ! :grin:

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Re: Nigiri-chan's art-Jack&Jacob :Tale of a pumpkin lanter (Pg1)

Postby Lady Haru » Sat Oct 22, 2011 8:33 am

not bad :D very nice story telling without words!
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Re: Nigiri-chan's art-Jack&Jacob :Tale of a pumpkin lanter (Pg1)

Postby Grivous » Sat Oct 22, 2011 8:56 am

The story seems to be interesting. Your art with drawing is really nice too.

But the story line seems really fast.

In the first three panels, there is the Character 1 walking in the scenery, looking at the girl crying and asking to her.
It could have more panels with more actions like: After the second panel, it could have a close-up of the girl crying; he walks at the girl; the girl realizes that someone is getting closer to her; she looks up and then he ask "what is wrong, little girl" to her.
In between the 4th and 6th panels could have more panels of actions too.

I like your style of drawing. Really attractive.

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Re: Nigiri-chan's art-Jack&Jacob :Tale of a pumpkin lanter (Pg1)

Postby Nigi » Sat Oct 22, 2011 9:17 am

Grivous wrote:The story seems to be interesting. Your art with drawing is really nice too.

But the story line seems really fast.

In the first three panels, there is the Character 1 walking in the scenery, looking at the girl crying and asking to her.
It could have more panels with more actions like: After the second panel, it could have a close-up of the girl crying; he walks at the girl; the girl realizes that someone is getting closer to her; she looks up and then he ask "what is wrong, little girl" to her.
In between the 4th and 6th panels could have more panels of actions too.

I like your style of drawing. Really attractive.

Grivous.


I told it on the top of the post that the story is very ( I mean really really ) short because I had to keep up with the deadline

Anyway ,thanks 4 giving me some good advices :grin:
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Re: Nigiri-chan's art-Jack&Jacob :Tale of a pumpkin lanter (Pg2)

Postby Nigi » Fri Oct 28, 2011 9:30 pm

Up to page two :mrgreen:

Pls leave ma a comment

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Re: Nigiri-chan's art-Jack&Jacob :Tale of a pumpkin lanter (Pg2)

Postby Grivous » Fri Oct 28, 2011 9:40 pm

I liked the fifth panel. That angle is really hard to draw and the detail of the wood in the floor is amazing!

And I loved the joke about his size. Hahaha! xD

But about the eighth panel, it looks like the bad guy is trembling for some reason.

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Re: Nigiri-chan's art-Jack&Jacob :Tale of a pumpkin lanter (Pg2)

Postby Lady Haru » Fri Oct 28, 2011 9:45 pm

love how the story is coming along ,your art is so cute

Grivous wrote:But about the eighth panel, it looks like the bad guy is trembling for some reason.

Grivous.

it looks like he might be laughing at him, since hes so small
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Re: Nigiri-chan's art-Jack&Jacob :Tale of a pumpkin lanter (Pg2)

Postby Nigi » Fri Oct 28, 2011 9:54 pm

Haruhi5 wrote:love how the story is coming along ,your art is so cute

Grivous wrote:But about the eighth panel, it looks like the bad guy is trembling for some reason.

Grivous.

it looks like he might be laughing at him, since hes so small


Thanks guys 4 the comments :mrgreen:

To Haruhi : Yeah, u're rigth about that ;)

He's laughing at Jacob's heigth

Normaly when u're going to challenge a fight with a bully or bad guy with that height of course he'll laugh at u
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Re: Nigiri-chan's art-Jack&Jacob :Tale of a pumpkin lanter (Pg3)

Postby Nigi » Thu Nov 03, 2011 9:05 pm

Let's see how Jacob is gonna to handle with him :eek:

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Re: Nigiri-chan's art-Jack&Jacob :Tale of a pumpkin lanter (Pg4)

Postby Nigi » Tue Nov 08, 2011 10:53 pm

Up , up and...up (OxO). ( Leave a comment, pretty pls ! >.< )

Oh my... o.O

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Re: Nigiri-chan's art-Jack&Jacob :Tale of a pumpkin lanter (Pg4)

Postby Innocence Abandoned » Tue Nov 08, 2011 11:05 pm

I like this comic... But is Jacob very far away in the 6th panel? Because if he is, I think the perspective on the floorboards is a little bit off.
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Re: Nigiri-chan's art-Jack&Jacob :Tale of a pumpkin lanter (Pg4)

Postby Nigi » Sat Nov 12, 2011 9:09 am

Innocence Abandoned wrote:I like this comic... But is Jacob very far away in the 6th panel? Because if he is, I think the perspective on the floorboards is a little bit off.


Hm...u're right about that.

Just need more practice than... ;)
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Re: Nigiri-chan's art-Jack&Jacob :Tale of a pumpkin lanter (Pg5)

Postby Nigi » Thu Nov 17, 2011 9:19 am

Well well well...look who's here :eek:

It's Jack's turn :grin:

Don't forget to leave a comment ( plz~~~)

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