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Maxgate
PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2011 6:49 am 
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Well, I have a plan to draw my own Grim tale comic, and now I'm working on it, I named it: Grim tale from dark realm
line art and color in Photoshop CS2, and still a noob =)
well, hope you like it

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This page was colored by my friend, she has a tablet

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and I'm continuing
aww... about Minnie's talking style, I'm not good at OE, so... sorry about that T_T

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GridsNaranek
PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2011 6:50 am 
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This goes in art. Moved.

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Maxgate
PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2011 6:52 am 
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@ Grids: so sorry
thanks!

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Tom E. Gemcity
PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2011 11:39 am 
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This is really good. I would like to see more. This is so close to BleedStyle.

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Grivous
PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2011 3:53 pm 
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But I want to see more of your own drawing style, Maxgate.
This makes the drawing being unique. The drawings are very awesome.
I am waiting for more updates.

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:bigsmile: Awesomelicious.
And I agree with Grivous, it would be pretty nice to see your own style.
Especially since your bleedstyle is great, imagine how your own would be~ :jawdrop:

I shall be waiting for moar.

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Imosa
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Interesting. Is Veronica an original character or did I miss something?
Found some grammar mistakes too. page 4 panel 2, page 6 panel 1, panel 4. Hope none of those are actually supposed to be like that.

Also, on an unrelated note, what about it makes it "Bleedstyle"?

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Maxgate
PostPosted: Fri May 20, 2011 12:26 pm 
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@ Soulchild: thanks :D

@ Grivous and Alopunk: uhm, I'll try :D

@ Imosa: sorry about the mistake
I'm not good at EL, you know
Please show me the right grammar, ok :D

and Veronica is my OC, she's daughter of Jack and Sally (because they can't have a child, so Dr. Finklestein made her for them)


update: page 9 -
My coloring style: I have just bought a Wacom, so I use it to color
this page is my third work with Wacom, so it's not so good
well, here is it:
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Grivous
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Tom E. Gemcity
PostPosted: Fri May 20, 2011 6:19 pm 
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Word on the street is that you can replace those dead comics if dave likes your stuff and it was original.

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Zombie Queen
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OMGodz! This is REALLY good. U drew this on your own? :O You've got a lot of talent. I cant wait for the next part. Keep up the good work. w00t

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Maxgate
PostPosted: Wed May 25, 2011 11:46 am 
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@ soulchild: Bleedman still drawing Grim tales
btw, I'm one of his fan, I'd like to post here than replace his comic :D

@ fireknight: thanks :D

@ ZombieQ: I draw it
but I'm not good in coloring and background, that's the problem

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Tom E. Gemcity
PostPosted: Wed May 25, 2011 1:35 pm 
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i know but theoretically Dave could take those dead fancomics down and replace them with a fan-fancomic that is actually working.

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Teran
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Holy shit son, you've got some talent there. Gonna keep an eye on this thread of yours.

By any chance, do you have a DA account?

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Maxgate
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@ Soulchild: yes he can, but I don't need it :D

@ T-800: thanks :D
and I have a DA account: http://www.phantom62.deviantart.com

well, update next page:
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Grivous
PostPosted: Thu May 26, 2011 8:07 pm 
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Two words:

AWESOME. COLORING.

And in the last Minnie's balloom, there is a little mistake. "It's(or This is) gonna be fun".

Grivous.

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Imosa
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Interdenominational travel. I will be curious of what... roinuJ is capable of.

Also, the first and second bubbles have mistakes.
The first on... I'm not sure what you were trying to say. "Deal with us? Why don't we deal with you?"
Then the second bubble should be "He said your the only one who can match me. I'm very excited. Just give me all you've got."

Also
Page 4 Panel 2: "She does not look truly happy." That's an awkward sentence, not sure if you meant it to be that way.
Page 5 Panel 1: I don't think what're is a valid contraction for "what are". I think you have to say the whole thing.
Page 6 Panel 1: "I have sent a team to go check but they haven't returned."
Page 6 Panel 4: "if it really has young master's power, and it's an enemy."

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Maxgate
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@ Grivous & Imosa: Thanks :D I have fixed them

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Awesomelicious pages. <3
I just LOVE those parallel dimension plots!!! :bigsmile:

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Minimandy speaks weird

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The shading looks off, and the lines really make it so things don't blend.

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I love it, i started reading just the very first page, and i already want more :eek:

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