pwned-by-twilight wrote:Well, as I was saying to BeeAre about the last page being anticlimactic, that's just not right. There was too much build up and speculation for how it was done. An anti-climax is supposed to give the reader that "Oh wow, wasn't expecting that" feeling, but it just went and slapped the reader in the face in my opinion. It's like if someone wrote a 100 page essay, and it's pretty good, but then rushes the 4 page closing for no apparent reason.
Again if there's no explanation or clarification for why this was what it was, it just won't sit well with me. And on TOP of that, there's a grave error in speech that wasn't given a response in the post I gave.
But moving onto THIS page, it's nice, yes. The speculation that this page is a tie-in to the Zim comic Johnny brought up is a good question though... Is it a tie in?
So why couldn't we have moved it along with a short scene at the beach instead of just summarizing it in one page after the entire trip? It all just seemed unnecessary with how it was executed.
Ntoonz wrote:I feel like folks just kind of tired with the Dexter and Olga thing and decided to phone the rest in. I suppose it's off to the next big buildup.
JesusChrist wrote:shouldn't we wait until the story is over before we decide whether a chapter was executed well or not?
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