I suppose what makes it hard to follow at times because of the multiple paragraph structure.

Well I've read everything up this point on DA, and I must say this is an interesting story you guys have here. Looking forward to future updates.

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there's a lot going on, what do you recommend we do to change it?

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Going to Tacoma Washington in the end of September and staying around the North Western half of it for two years without internet.

In terms of your story, its still great and wonderfully written. At times I do detect the original PpG, and then their expansion which is something I expect from fan based literature. Its good to have the characters balanced between what they use to and are like, with how the author believed they changed over the years.

But the style, while unique and very imaginative, is still a bitch to adjust to and read. It's a double edged sword for me.

The person with Princess. Is she a OC or that one pro-women villains?

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@ Blood Lord: Regard the last line of that paragraph with some scrutiny.



She is a character from the series, and the answer can be found here.

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Oh fuck. She's training Princess?

Dayum.

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Jeffffey - Blood, you look at the information someone says, look over what really happened, and reply in a way that makes them realize what they were really thinking.
Mythrrinthael - Blood Lord, our local expert in interpretation of The Grim Tales from Down Below!
Fievel - Numerous campaigns and conquests, countless bodies decaying after the abandonment of victorious battlefields. Such is the life of Blood Lord.
Dusk_Imp - Blood Lord is like a celebrity here. Everything he does is pure awesome. ALL HAIL BLOOD LORD
Doctress Who - Why couldn't there be a Blood Lord in every forum? It would make life so much easier.
Snafu's Mercypostle.

On this note, there's always internet cafes, and laptops have generally become more affordable recently. I saw a *really good* 15.4-inch one at Walmart the other day for something like $549. I walked by the TV section after that, and a 32-inch TV was more expensive than that (at something like $698). Layaway is a good option and might get you a laptop in a couple of months if you can manage your money right.

Of course, I realize that not everyone can spend that kind of money. But I would hate to see you disappear for years at a time.

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I'm currently using a laptop with wi-fi. Nice Dell that I got for graduation for college. I'll have some limited access, but I don't know what will happen. Layaway is a great place. I think I saw a TV a little smaller than that for somewhere in the neighborhood of like $559. I'm not completely sure anymore. Anyways, it was a good deal.

I'm LDS, and the reason why I'm going to Tacoma is for mission where I teach the Gospel to people and basically help out. My connection to the world is heavily severed, and unless I sneak it or get permission to visit Snafu, I'm gone for a while.

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Jeffffey - Blood, you look at the information someone says, look over what really happened, and reply in a way that makes them realize what they were really thinking.
Mythrrinthael - Blood Lord, our local expert in interpretation of The Grim Tales from Down Below!
Fievel - Numerous campaigns and conquests, countless bodies decaying after the abandonment of victorious battlefields. Such is the life of Blood Lord.
Dusk_Imp - Blood Lord is like a celebrity here. Everything he does is pure awesome. ALL HAIL BLOOD LORD
Doctress Who - Why couldn't there be a Blood Lord in every forum? It would make life so much easier.
Snafu's Mercypostle.

Ah, I see. Well that is unfortunate, but good luck to you there. I'll be going to Guam for a couple years starting in November, but I'll have internet in a matter of days after arriving. Not a huge deal for me... unless either of my computers break. I would really hate to have to order a new motherboard or power supply because the weird climate of Guam fucks up the electronics. Add to that if I do order some parts or books or whatever and have them sent to Guam, they have to go through our FPO, and that can take upwards of months to get to me. Ugh. But it's cool... it's a nice place, and it's really close to Japan.

So I'm looking forward to going, anyway.

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I heard Guam is a pretty place. So that's probably a bonus.

Are you just going to be stationed there for a bit, or what are you doing?

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Jeffffey - Blood, you look at the information someone says, look over what really happened, and reply in a way that makes them realize what they were really thinking.
Mythrrinthael - Blood Lord, our local expert in interpretation of The Grim Tales from Down Below!
Fievel - Numerous campaigns and conquests, countless bodies decaying after the abandonment of victorious battlefields. Such is the life of Blood Lord.
Dusk_Imp - Blood Lord is like a celebrity here. Everything he does is pure awesome. ALL HAIL BLOOD LORD
Doctress Who - Why couldn't there be a Blood Lord in every forum? It would make life so much easier.
Snafu's Mercypostle.

Aye, I'll be there for a couple years. I'm gonna be on a Submarine Tender, so that's cool. I plan on taking several trips to Japan. Maybe by the time I come back from Guam I'll be completely fluent.

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you can teach me when we're roommates ha ah ha ha ha

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Puff Most Epic.

as per requests, we have added astericks to mark passage changes

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"We're quite aware of this. BR is no happy rainbow face man. He is simply our neighborhood best fucking poster." ~ Warbear
Puff Most Epic.

Dammit BR. I thought it was an update, you little tease.

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Jeffffey - Blood, you look at the information someone says, look over what really happened, and reply in a way that makes them realize what they were really thinking.
Mythrrinthael - Blood Lord, our local expert in interpretation of The Grim Tales from Down Below!
Fievel - Numerous campaigns and conquests, countless bodies decaying after the abandonment of victorious battlefields. Such is the life of Blood Lord.
Dusk_Imp - Blood Lord is like a celebrity here. Everything he does is pure awesome. ALL HAIL BLOOD LORD
Doctress Who - Why couldn't there be a Blood Lord in every forum? It would make life so much easier.
Snafu's Mercypostle.

Haha.

Well, here's a real update for you: We have enough material for the first two parts of chapter 3. We want to finish up the current arc before proceeding. So, once we finish that, we will more than likely have more frequent updates.

Also: A PME comic is in the works. We've hinted it before with all sorts of concept art on BR's dA page, but now it's starting to come to fruition. Something to look forward to.

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I ALSO THINK SO.

DON'T POST IN ALL CAPS. Also read the rules. Thanks for reading.

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"We're quite aware of this. BR is no happy rainbow face man. He is simply our neighborhood best fucking poster." ~ Warbear
Puff Most Epic.

BR, that's a bot. It advertises in its Sig. Kill it like the rest.

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I swear. he didn't have the sig when he posted. But alas, he is a bot. D:

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"We're quite aware of this. BR is no happy rainbow face man. He is simply our neighborhood best fucking poster." ~ Warbear
Puff Most Epic.

Hope this thread isn't dead yet because I've got to say, I really enjoyed reading chapter 2 of PME.

It was interesting, exciting, heartfelt, funny and so much more.

I've seen most of concept art and it looks like it's gonna be a truly epic comic.

Granted, there were a few short moments where I got a little lost in the story, but still, it wasn't completely too hard to follow.

I hope to find more of the story and see the comic in the future.

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Oh, there will be more.

THERE WILL BE MORE.

BR and I have decided to hold off on posting what we have until we're sure about the entire chapter. That'll probably be about the time we have half the chapter complete. Also, BR is staying with his Grandmother right now, and I don't think she has internet. So it's bound to be sketchy until he figures out his internet or gets a new place to stay.

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I have basic internet due to a cousin staying with her because of her parents' house's awful condition! AROOoooo

but chapter 3 shall be rather exciting i believe.

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"We're quite aware of this. BR is no happy rainbow face man. He is simply our neighborhood best fucking poster." ~ Warbear
Puff Most Epic.

PM me if you want this unlocked for future posting, Ruff. Or BeeAre can do it for ya. Either's fine.

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