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PostPosted: Mon Jul 19, 2010 7:01 am 
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-- hey guys. I'm still at the lowest points of my life where I'm at my own block, but somehow there's still a spark there in the dark that enables me to continue writing...so I shall write.

Before I'll write Chapter 1 (which will be on the next post the next time I log in), I'll introduce the summary.

So, um, yeah, here's the summary--

--Ilias Zion, age 21, had been home-schooled since birth to high school. After passing an entrance exam on a prestigious university, he bails to pursue his career as a photographer, going across countries to find the perfect shot. Though, what inspired his career is not simply because of his anger towards his incompetent and lazy of an ass parents, but because of his strange ability to see the world in a 360 degree vision, hence calling it his "third eye". Accidentally meeting with a carnivorous klepto-hippie who has claimed her brother was kidnapped by *dangerous characters*, Ilias is forced to abandon his career once again to save her brother. Meeting interesting people with even stranger abilities, Ilias hopes that what he had gotten himself into wouldn't stop him from still taking the best shot yet.

There. So, um, please wait for the chapter while I finish it. Thanks :)

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 20, 2010 10:23 am 
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Mathias wrote:
Deidre wrote:
lazy of an ass parents

Um, do you mean "lazy-ass"?


yes. but the dash in our keyboard is gone (literally). "of an" seems the least best thing.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 20, 2010 3:15 pm 
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 4:37 am 
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you can highlight text already existing and copy it and then paste it

writing structure has to appear to have purpose all the way through or it has the appearance of mistake

bending the rules can seem fun at first until you realize that the best people only bend the rules to demonstrate how clearly they understand them

a dangerous thing to attempt in even a preliminary outlook to the writing

i am interested as to where you go though :)

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 12:03 am 
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If you are using windows, there is a thing called a character map that you can use to insert symbols (and hyphens) into your writing. Here's a link showing you how to use it: http://tlt.its.psu.edu/suggestions/international/accents/charmap.html

And if you have an Apple: http://www.geekguides.co.uk/6/how-to-display-a-mac-os-character-map/

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 12:33 am 
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Sounds like it could be heavily anime inspired, but overall I think I'll watch for it when you update.

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And i love this sounds :)
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gerakliuss wrote:
And i love this sounds :)
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