InsideTheAsylum wrote:Well, it's um.. odd.
First of all, I'd do some formatting on it. I'm not really a literary critic, but nothing screams poem to me more than a few nice blocks of text.
InsideTheAsylum wrote:Second of all, I don't quite get your poems purpose...
InsideTheAsylum wrote:So, in other words, a jumble of words. Grats, you have the occasional brain fart just like me
And then comes the percussion. The gaping holes between you and the air.
InsideTheAsylum wrote:You make sense of that, my friend
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