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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Mummy Yuki!]

Postby akuma616 » Thu Feb 18, 2010 12:13 am

Hmm... I like your chibi's a lot, but your non-chibi stuff could do with some work....
Would you mind if I attempted to give you a little help with your non-chibi anatomy?
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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Mummy Yuki!]

Postby Jasthn » Fri Feb 19, 2010 11:35 am

I'd actually love it. Please, go ahead.
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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Mummy Yuki!]

Postby akuma616 » Fri Feb 19, 2010 8:43 pm

Yay, critique.

Okay, here goes. Let's see... I'll start by saying that the second one does look better than the first, but there's still a few issues I can see. Do you draw out skeletons for them before you draw in detail, or just draw? Skeletons and basic shapes are a good way to build the body and make sure you've got a good base to draw on.

Now the size of the head compared to the shoulders is a little bit of an issue. Even anime style usually follows most anatomical rules to a degree. The rule for shoulders is that they are about one heads width on either side of the actual head. This can be stretched a little bit, but you'll want to follow it follow it for the most part. Next try making the elbow at about the height of the navel, and giving the hands a little bit more definition from the arm. Also, when drawing girls, the hips should curve back out to about the same width as the shoulders, maybe just a bit less.

And, on the subject of female anatomy and building frames, you want to remember that breasts are round and if the shirt has a tight look like the one you have on her, the curve will go back inward at the bottom, instead of just directly down into the torso.

As for the face, you should make the chin a more complete line instead of breaking it in two. And make the eyes about one eye width apart. My final advice for the face is to add eyebrows. Just two simple lines can add a lot of humanity and emotion to the facial expression.

You're on a good start, just keep practicing.
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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Mummy Yuki!]

Postby Jasthn » Fri Feb 19, 2010 9:54 pm

I try my best with skelatons. On the Chibi's it's a simple skelaton, but it works. As for the non-chibi works, I have gone through several attempts to find a skelaton that works. The most recent one starts with the arms, and the one before that was just a regular skelaton. (Like circles where joints are and so on.)

I try my best at keeping the sizes right (I really do), like the head to shoulders, but I have a tendency to draw small because I don't trust myself with drawing big pictures excluding the chibi. So the result is a strange, incorrect sized hand to arm, head to body, and so on. Even when I do draw big though, it does turn out wrong either way. I guess It's just something I need to work on more or less. Hopoefully I'll get it over time though

I still need to find a way to draw eyes and eyebrows and the rest of the facial features, so I know that isn't as good as it could be. Same for the gender issue, I guess I just need to work on it a little more, although I'll keep the hip, and breast thing in mind because I never really could figure out how to fix it until you meantioned it.

Like you said, more practice I guess. It can get a little frustrating though when you can't draw something as good as you want it if you know what I mean. But thank you, I enjoyed reading that, and I will keep everything in mind on my next drawing. LOL

Thank you very much, I appretiate it.
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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Mummy Yuki!]

Postby akuma616 » Fri Feb 19, 2010 10:37 pm

Yep, I'm glad to have offered a little bit of help.

Also, if you're looking for a good skeleton, there's a tutorial with one that I usually use myself (not that that really makes it any good.) You can get that here: http://renshu.deviantart.com/art/Drawin ... N-13163223 (if you want to draw guys with a wireframe skeleton, just make the hips a little less wide.)
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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Mummy Yuki!]

Postby Jasthn » Fri Feb 19, 2010 10:41 pm

I'll give it a try. I normally don't use any tutorials off of the internet, seeing as it just doesn't seem right ot me. I just make my own styles as I go. LOL
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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Mummy Yuki!]

Postby Jasthn » Wed Feb 24, 2010 7:35 pm

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More of a quick sketch I decided to do in Bio. I decided to give her a new shirt. I like the older one though... Anyways, Candy and Willy and all their loving randomness.
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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Mummy Yuki!]

Postby Chuckledarkly » Wed Feb 24, 2010 9:52 pm

SNAKE KING OF THE FACE BALLOONS!
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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Mummy Yuki!]

Postby Engravement » Thu Feb 25, 2010 7:38 am

AWESOME Balloon is so AWESOME. 8D
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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Mummy Yuki!]

Postby Jasthn » Thu Feb 25, 2010 3:45 pm

LOL Thanks. I would love to add more random, and silly things to the art, but I can only do the characters. I would love to make a background as strange, and silly, and awsome as Asmodia's "Going Up" picture he made. I think that's what it was named.
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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Mummy Yuki!]

Postby Fievel » Thu Feb 25, 2010 6:01 pm

Love the way the balloon and the snake look, Jas.
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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Amazing balloon?]

Postby Jasthn » Thu Feb 25, 2010 8:52 pm

Thank you. :D

I still have to do some griffon looking creature for Blood though.
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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Amazing balloon?]

Postby Fievel » Thu Feb 25, 2010 8:53 pm

You mean the hippogriff?
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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Amazing balloon?]

Postby Jasthn » Thu Feb 25, 2010 8:56 pm

Yes. I still don't know how I got involved with it.
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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Amazing balloon?]

Postby Jasthn » Fri Feb 26, 2010 7:09 pm

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Candy has a rocket propulsion system inside that skirt of hers? Yes she does. Also, the WW1 flying ace, Snoopy!

Next on my list: Stufflikehearts birthday card, Hipposomethingorothergriffonthing.
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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Rocket propelled?]

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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Rocket propelled?]

Postby Doctress Who » Sat Feb 27, 2010 1:37 pm

The rocket picture made me laugh.
And snoopy! o.o I love you.
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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Rocket propelled?]

Postby Jasthn » Sat Feb 27, 2010 1:38 pm

Of course Snoopy. LOL

I love you.


I try. <3
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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Rocket propelled?]

Postby Jasthn » Sun Feb 28, 2010 9:43 am

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It's Stufflikehearts birthday! Go to EA forum and wish a happy birthday to her! :D
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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Happy Birthday Stuff!]

Postby Blood Lord » Mon Mar 01, 2010 4:01 pm

It kinda looks as if the words "OMG, I can't believe you drank that much" could fit in with this card.
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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Happy Birthday Stuff!]

Postby Princess » Mon Mar 01, 2010 4:07 pm

Hanyuu<3

You forgot her horns! But it doesn't matter cos I'm not supposed to be able to see them anyway... only Rika can see them ;D
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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Happy Birthday Stuff!]

Postby Jasthn » Mon Mar 01, 2010 4:09 pm

Blood Lord wrote:It kinda looks as if the words "OMG, I can't believe you drank that much" could fit in with this card.


Especially when you know she drank that much. XD

Stufflikehearts wrote:Hanyuu<3

You forgot her horns! But it doesn't matter cos I'm not supposed to be able to see them anyway... only Rika can see them ;D


D: I knew I forgot something.
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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Happy Birthday Stuff!]

Postby Jasthn » Thu Mar 18, 2010 12:25 pm

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I decided to try drawing some new clothes for Candy, seeing as it's getting warmer outside. What happens with these warm temperatures? Skateboarding of course. My season has finally come back.

I also attempted someting new. I tried making more of a body rather than a rectangle this time.
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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Welcome warm temperatures!]

Postby Doctress Who » Thu Mar 18, 2010 2:34 pm

Looking good! I'm liking the change in shape (as well as the change in clothes).
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Re: Jasthn's Doodle Domain!. [Welcome warm temperatures!]

Postby Jasthn » Thu Mar 25, 2010 6:35 pm

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She be a bug.

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Just another random new outfit.
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