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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Maxgate » Fri Dec 18, 2009 7:57 pm

It looks better than others. But I can't say I like it
You need to practice more and more (Me too :))
Give me a paper, a pencil, an eraser and a pen, I will show you MY STYLE
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Brax4 » Mon Dec 21, 2009 10:30 pm

I dunno', it's just my opinion, doesn't fit with the body.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Tue Dec 22, 2009 8:37 pm

Good news Every one (futurama)
I'll be getting the manga studio debut 4 program to help with my art
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Wed Dec 23, 2009 7:42 am

http://www.majhost.com/gallery/SimsterX ... ew0001.jpg just Thought I throw this out there not to "ANIME GO"!! I hope
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Brax4 » Sun Dec 27, 2009 6:06 pm

I do actually think it's looking a lot better.
It's all about taking time and practice practice practice.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Jasthn » Sun Dec 27, 2009 6:34 pm

Brax4 wrote:I do actually think it's looking a lot better.
It's all about taking time and practice practice practice.


Yes. Practice and time are the two best things.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Mon Dec 28, 2009 3:26 pm

THANKS ALOT
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:23 am

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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Sun Jan 03, 2010 11:10 pm

http://www.majhost.com/gallery/SimsterX ... on0002.jpg This one isn't shaded I hope it looks better than the crap I just posted.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Knight_Lancer » Thu Jan 07, 2010 2:49 pm

Hm, boy, that first reply certainly was harsh.

Anyway, judging from your drawings, I'd say you just...ah...draw...

Hrm, how do I explain it?

That you simply draw something without drawing its base components first, without considering the underlying structure. Rather, you just plop down the lines. Feel free to correct me if I'm wrong.

Here's a little tutorial on heads. There's probably better ones out there, but I suppose this'll do for now.

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You can look up lots of little lessons on YouTube and stuff. Just take what they say as a general outline, try to get the concepts ingrained into your head as you draw...
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Jasthn » Thu Jan 07, 2010 3:00 pm

Knight_Lancer wrote:
Hrm, how do I explain it?

That you simply draw something without drawing its base components first, without considering the underlying structure. Rather, you just plop down the lines. Feel free to correct me if I'm wrong.


I think you're completely right. Although I don't really use too much of that in my style, I do use some, and I'm sure if he can get that down, his drawings will change significantly and hopefully for the better.

I thought his arm and hand were good in the newest picture though.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Thu Jan 07, 2010 6:51 pm

Your both wrong if I were to rescan and highlight this picture the maximum you see the circle for the head the cross lines to tell me where place the eyes but instead of super highlighting everythingand showing all my eraser marks I went over my pencil marks with a black pen marker thingy and erased all traces of pencil. I will admit how ever that I don't do all that outlinning stuff with my bodies so I guess with them I do just draw.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby visi » Thu Jan 07, 2010 8:07 pm

    Then your lines are a tad... off...
    I'd say just get some refs from other artists, and just keep practicing.
    There's still a lot of anatomy and proportions that all of us need to work on.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Chuckledarkly » Fri Jan 08, 2010 4:04 am

It all comes with practice my art looked much like that when i was younger mine was usually "darker" tho <.< but ya. (by darker i mean scary)
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Dudeinmask » Mon Jan 11, 2010 12:13 pm

Keep working your geting better and better.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Mon Jan 18, 2010 2:14 pm

Practice makes perfect some one once said.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Sun Feb 28, 2010 10:40 pm

http://www.majhost.com/gallery/SimsterX ... rl0001.jpg been awhile since I did this hope it looks better then crap.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Brax4 » Mon Mar 01, 2010 12:44 am

Ah, no art is crap really in my opinion, the only thing I can see immediately is there seems to be no stomach to her.
I just say that because I took a peek and that seemed to be the biggest problem, other than that, looks pretty good, keep up the good work.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby DarkCrystal65 » Mon Mar 01, 2010 5:01 pm

They're decent. Everyone has to start somewhere and believe me I started in the "Very Horrible" section cause my first picture I made looked like crap compare to now. Just keep at it and learn from everything you do and you'll be fine. Take criticism for what they are criticism and it's up to YOU to listen to them or not.

Anyways here's an advice for you. Look up some human model and such on the web and try to draw your character in their poses. That might help you get a better feel for the proportions.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Thu Mar 04, 2010 10:30 pm

To answer your question... I'm not sure...I mean..I thought that I was doing good but then...I got a really big wake up call and now.... I'm just trying to make it not look like crap.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Teran » Fri Mar 05, 2010 1:44 am

Well, if it makes you feel better, there's a lot of progress when compared to your first drawings. However, you still need practice.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Brax4 » Fri Mar 05, 2010 7:30 am

Don't be so hard on yourself, your art is improving, everyone starts somewhere, trust me, my art suuuuuuucked. But people give advice, and you practice, and you get better, that's all there is to it. It's really important to NOT GIVE UP.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Chuckledarkly » Fri Mar 05, 2010 11:25 am

The trick is to be strict with yourself draw a little every day! especially if you don't feel like it! do it! you wont. DO IT! you wont.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Jasthn » Fri Mar 05, 2010 3:36 pm

Draw in your spare time. You can even doodle random shapes. I do that a lot, and I get a little something out of it.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Fri Mar 05, 2010 6:35 pm

Yeah I guess I do ,until I find a better version of it.
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