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Kratos

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Posted: Fri May 27, 2005 2:50 am

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[i][color=white][size=125] Sky Chronicles
The Tale of Azma

In an apocalyptic world where the ground is said to be cursed is a cityâ€¦â€¦not an ordinary city, Azma the city of the sky, set five hundred feet in the air it is the home to thousands.

Chapter 1
Jiâ€™ the ship cleaner

â€œJi, you bastard I told you to clean up the gutters!â€

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Hmm.. it's a good fanfic. But what does it have to do with the PPG?

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In chapter 2 he meets Utonium.

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I realise that, but I was wondering: do the PPG make an appearance?

It's a good idea, keep it up!

BTW, let me know what you think of my fic: viewtopic.php?t=5641

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I like it....I always wanted to know about Bell and X

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Griddles wrote:

I realise that, but I was wondering: do the PPG make an appearance?
It's a good idea, keep it up!

BTW, let me know what you think of my fic: viewtopic.php?t=5641

Yes they do.

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Cool. I look forward to it!

The fanfic I'm doing was inspired by an old work by Bleed.

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Chapter 2 will be up tommorow. Till then g'night!

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I won't update mine until someone else comments. otherwise it's just an edit to an old post...

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Why the bold?

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nice story, but you might want to add some more comma's here and there...
but its a nice story.

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[i][b][size=117]Chapter 2
â€œThe Professorâ€

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Cool chapter 2 was better than the first one I think.

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Posted: Fri May 27, 2005 11:57 pm

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Finished Chapter 3

ill post it monday (gotta read over and see if there are any problems)

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'Tis gettin' good!

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Post subject: Re: My Fan-Fic

Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 12:03 am

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Thank you!

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Don't forget to check mine for updates, too

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[i][size=109][b] Chapter 3
Dex V.S Mandark

Roswell, New Mexico (above the secret base â€˜dreamlandâ€™)

Mandark waited outside for an old reunion â€œhmfffff, Dexter boy Genius they used to call him, I tell you who is a genius me! â€¦â€¦..16 years ago we where fighting, I lostâ€¦this time will be different.
Dex held Utonion as the elevator moved up and up until finally they reached land and saw that they where not alone!

Sector 3 â€“ Dark LN. 10214 Avenue (Ji apartment)

The girls where on the floor with blankets over them, Ji had tried to get help but nobody believed him, I mean come on 3 naked girls fell from the heavens and there names are bubbles Blossom and Buttercup. Ji sat down and rested his eyes, he fell asleep after awhile and was close to falling off the chair, Buttercup got up and looked around she went towards Ji and put her lips towards his face and said â€œwhere the hell are we!!!â€

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I don't see how a samurai sword would be much use against an energy blade...

Still, good work

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Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 7:25 pm

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Ya he ends up getting a green lightsab----wait my big mouth!

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Thought he might...

*sigh* My fic'll go nowhere if peeps don't leave feedback...

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Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 5:07 pm

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[i][b][size=117]The saber slashed the sword into half, Dex now lying on the floor helpless about to die â€œDexter, use thisâ€¦.I customized it for youâ€

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, that was cool General Scar is an android now.

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Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 5:28 pm

Too good for you.

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Kratos, do ya have to type in such big letters?

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Kratos

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Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 5:31 pm

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Sorry....I wanted to make sure my typing was correct so I made it big for me to read.

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dude....this is too much...*brain overloadinmg, strylines crossing*

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