They're all pretty good. You might want to add some detail to the first one, but that's not half bad, the second page is pretty good on detail, but you may want to clean up your lines, and I think the legs are a tad short, the third isn't bad, it's actually pretty cool, but the sketchiness ruins it, the character on top would look cool all cleaned up.
I suggest you start using a mechanical pencil, it would look better, if you're not using one already? (Because it seems like you aren't.)
Good work, glad to see an update.

_________________
My dA http://elfei62.deviantart.com/

Not much else to say ^^ just keep drawing!

_________________
Check Out My Art

-----> viewtopic.php?t=23012Cheak <-----



Alice laughed: "There's no use trying," she said; "one can't believe impossible things." "I daresay you haven't had much practice," said the Queen.
Proud Member of BEOS

It's Tankmen, singular or plural.
Brax really said everything. Just keep practicing and you'll be getting better :D

_________________
999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999

YES! I SAID EVERYTHING! I AM OMNISCIENT!

_________________
My dA http://elfei62.deviantart.com/

And a few other things *Ahem*....

_________________
Check Out My Art

-----> viewtopic.php?t=23012Cheak <-----



Alice laughed: "There's no use trying," she said; "one can't believe impossible things." "I daresay you haven't had much practice," said the Queen.
Proud Member of BEOS

It's mechanical pencil alright, never touched an actual pencil for a long, long time. Probably because of the size, though. It was (scanned) way larger, I shrunk it down, and it still is larger than the actual one on paper.
*Kicks*

_________________

EPIC FAIL art thread | Updated 09/30/2009 | Rawbawtz
Vote for The Zombie Hunters now! Vote here.

What?
I'm pretty sure that's how it goes.

_________________
999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999

No, it's spelled Tankman or Tankmen, but they're both pronounced the same.

_________________
Twitter | Transistor Glamor | Tumblr | MAL

interesting... try making an unique line on the lineart.

_________________
My stupid DA: http://xxzegaxx.deviantart.com/

RAWR sneak peek.

_________________

EPIC FAIL art thread | Updated 09/30/2009 | Rawbawtz
Vote for The Zombie Hunters now! Vote here.

Such clean lineart. Pen tool?

_________________
999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999

Looks like flash.
Nice work.

_________________
My dA http://elfei62.deviantart.com/

Photoshop CS4E.
o3o
Student licensing is so awesome.
Brush. With lots of slow and painful cleaning. D:
Would be more painful if I'm not using a tablet lulz.

_________________

EPIC FAIL art thread | Updated 09/30/2009 | Rawbawtz
Vote for The Zombie Hunters now! Vote here.

ahhhhh
I totally dont remember you having a tablet

_________________
999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999

I smell mech!

Or something mechanical at the very least.

Also, lulz at painful cleaning. I don't roll with that shit any more.

_________________

lol, it's pen tool all the way for me. Once in a while I just use the brush and remind myself how much I hate cleaning lineart digitally.@_@

I can't wait to see the whole thing, though.:D

_________________

-- Sketch Blog -- My Art Thread -- DeviantArt --

I use the line tool, takes forever, but normally comes out pretty nice and clean.
The plus thing about that, no tablet needed. I only use my tablet to fill in colors.

_________________
My dA http://elfei62.deviantart.com/