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Postby Kratos » Fri May 27, 2005 2:50 am

[i][color=white][size=125] Sky Chronicles
The Tale of Azma




In an apocalyptic world where the ground is said to be cursed is a city……not an ordinary city, Azma the city of the sky, set five hundred feet in the air it is the home to thousands.

Chapter 1
Ji’ the ship cleaner

“Ji, you bastard I told you to clean up the gutters!â€
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Postby GridsNaranek » Fri May 27, 2005 2:53 am

Hmm.. it's a good fanfic. But what does it have to do with the PPG?
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Postby Kratos » Fri May 27, 2005 2:54 am

In chapter 2 he meets Utonium.
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Postby GridsNaranek » Fri May 27, 2005 2:56 am

I realise that, but I was wondering: do the PPG make an appearance?

It's a good idea, keep it up!

BTW, let me know what you think of my fic: viewtopic.php?t=5641
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Postby Kratos » Fri May 27, 2005 3:00 am

I like it....I always wanted to know about Bell and X

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Griddles wrote:I realise that, but I was wondering: do the PPG make an appearance?
It's a good idea, keep it up!

BTW, let me know what you think of my fic: viewtopic.php?t=5641
Yes they do.
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Postby GridsNaranek » Fri May 27, 2005 3:02 am

Cool. I look forward to it!

The fanfic I'm doing was inspired by an old work by Bleed.
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Postby Kratos » Fri May 27, 2005 3:07 am

Chapter 2 will be up tommorow. Till then g'night!
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Postby GridsNaranek » Fri May 27, 2005 3:09 am

I won't update mine until someone else comments. otherwise it's just an edit to an old post...
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Postby Yoshi » Fri May 27, 2005 3:11 am

Why the bold?
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Postby Crash » Fri May 27, 2005 3:12 am

nice story, but you might want to add some more comma's here and there...
but its a nice story.
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Postby Kratos » Fri May 27, 2005 7:24 pm

[i][b][size=117]Chapter 2
“The Professorâ€
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Postby Doujinshi X.2 » Fri May 27, 2005 7:26 pm

Cool chapter 2 was better than the first one I think.
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Postby Kratos » Fri May 27, 2005 11:57 pm

Finished Chapter 3 :) ill post it monday (gotta read over and see if there are any problems)
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Postby GridsNaranek » Sat May 28, 2005 12:01 am

'Tis gettin' good!
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Re: My Fan-Fic

Postby Kratos » Sat May 28, 2005 12:03 am

^_^ Thank you!
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Postby GridsNaranek » Sat May 28, 2005 12:17 am

;)

Don't forget to check mine for updates, too
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Postby Kratos » Sat May 28, 2005 6:46 pm

[i][size=109][b] Chapter 3
Dex V.S Mandark

Roswell, New Mexico (above the secret base ‘dreamland’)

Mandark waited outside for an old reunion “hmfffff, Dexter boy Genius they used to call him, I tell you who is a genius me! ……..16 years ago we where fighting, I lost…this time will be different.
Dex held Utonion as the elevator moved up and up until finally they reached land and saw that they where not alone!

Sector 3 – Dark LN. 10214 Avenue (Ji apartment)

The girls where on the floor with blankets over them, Ji had tried to get help but nobody believed him, I mean come on 3 naked girls fell from the heavens and there names are bubbles Blossom and Buttercup. Ji sat down and rested his eyes, he fell asleep after awhile and was close to falling off the chair, Buttercup got up and looked around she went towards Ji and put her lips towards his face and said “where the hell are we!!!â€
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Postby GridsNaranek » Sat May 28, 2005 6:52 pm

I don't see how a samurai sword would be much use against an energy blade...

Still, good work
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Postby Kratos » Sat May 28, 2005 7:25 pm

Ya he ends up getting a green lightsab----wait my big mouth!
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Postby GridsNaranek » Sat May 28, 2005 7:28 pm

Thought he might...

*sigh* My fic'll go nowhere if peeps don't leave feedback...
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Re: My Fan-Fic

Postby Kratos » Sun May 29, 2005 5:07 pm

[i][b][size=117]The saber slashed the sword into half, Dex now lying on the floor helpless about to die “Dexter, use this….I customized it for youâ€
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Postby Doujinshi X.2 » Sun May 29, 2005 5:27 pm

LOL, that was cool General Scar is an android now.
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Postby Acktoo » Sun May 29, 2005 5:28 pm

Kratos, do ya have to type in such big letters?
Too good for you.
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Postby Kratos » Sun May 29, 2005 5:31 pm

Sorry....I wanted to make sure my typing was correct so I made it big for me to read.
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Postby Mauser » Sun May 29, 2005 7:45 pm

dude....this is too much...*brain overloadinmg, strylines crossing*
I am NOT insane!

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