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Postby korikou » Thu Aug 06, 2009 5:58 pm

Hello I'm new here and wanted someone to see my best art work it's pretty good and you might like it so enjoy http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/6364/0artproject.png
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Teran » Thu Aug 06, 2009 6:12 pm

Dude, no offense, but that's horrendous. You need more practice.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Engravement » Thu Aug 06, 2009 6:18 pm

Welcome to the Snafu Art Realm.
Keep practicing Korikou.
Also, please limit your Art Threads to one.
I'll assume your other one will be locked.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Thu Aug 06, 2009 7:46 pm

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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:51 pm

And If anyone could help me on my quote "Horrendouss" art work I'd be grateful and also If some one could help me with my comic Idea that'd be great too
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Engravement » Fri Aug 07, 2009 2:51 am

I suggest you work on your Art(Ex: Anatomy) more before trying something like a comic idea.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Fri Aug 07, 2009 3:02 am

Well can you help me on my art then I'd like it to be good
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Thu Aug 13, 2009 4:59 pm

Can any one help me at all in any way other than critisism PLEASE!!!!!!!
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Thiamor » Thu Aug 13, 2009 6:32 pm

Sorry, but 90% will be nothing but that.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Jackstriden » Thu Aug 13, 2009 8:18 pm

you got it all wrong man. criticism is what makes you a stronger artist. For starters start drawing out gestures of your characters. by gestures i mean really rough sketching the body out. Try to imagine were everything on the body goes. When you think of the body as individual shapes and parts, thats when you really start to understand how it works. don't draw your characters fully clothed straight from the begining. draw out the gesture of a nude man or woman and then start adding little details here and there, then you add the clothes. A well formed body will fit a t shirt better than a blocky one. if i could suggest a book for you, go on amazon.com and buy "an atlas of anatomy for artists." oh and don't be discouraged if someone tells you, you suck. think the way i do and remember these words...

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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby dezagirl » Sun Aug 16, 2009 10:26 pm

Oh, dear...o_o;

The fabric folds seemed okay. That's all, though.

First of all, work on proportions. Don't worry about filling in the details, just the basic arm and legs, in the right size too. The head in all the drawings seem horribly huge, and the feet are way too small, seriously.

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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Mehoaido » Wed Aug 19, 2009 4:31 am

korikou wrote:Can any one help me at all in any way other than critisism PLEASE!!!!!!!


You shouldn't take critique as something to drag you down, but something that will help you getting better.
If you need any other help than critiques, ask your friend google for tutorials, they are very helpful sometimes.
Also look at other artists works and compare your work to it.
There are planty of artists in the art forum so you shouldn't have trouble finding one
It's not enough to have no thoughts.
You gotta be unable to express them.

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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Thiamor » Wed Aug 19, 2009 6:30 pm

I learned how to draw better by drawing what I looked at. The more I looked and drew, the better it became, and it taught me how to get the basic shapes in art down. After you've mastered that (mastered as in when you feel you're done) start using what you learned ( practice shading a bit, too) to draw what's in your own mind. Tracing helps teach you how to steady your own hand a bit, as well.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Sat Aug 22, 2009 6:39 am

I made a whole new way of drawing that you should see also thanks for the advice and by the way sorry for not posting anything I just moved and my dad won't hook up the printer soooooo yeah
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Thiamor » Sat Aug 22, 2009 3:58 pm

A new way...
Sure you did.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Sun Aug 23, 2009 8:04 am

I'll Prove it!!!........just as soon as I get my printer
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Thiamor » Sun Aug 23, 2009 2:49 pm

Nice. It'll be interesting to see.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Mon Aug 24, 2009 11:49 am

Will it look better if it's not on notebook paper like the rest
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Shoi » Tue Aug 25, 2009 1:54 pm

Yes, just grab some printer paper to draw on. Like everyone else said, it's best to be critiqued than to get ass-patted. People never learn from their mistakes if all they get is praise.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Tue Aug 25, 2009 7:19 pm

True dat
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Tue Dec 15, 2009 9:29 pm

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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Shoi » Tue Dec 15, 2009 10:31 pm

Still really wonky on anatomy and some of the folds are wrong.

Here's some sites you might like to study with:
http://www.posemaniacs.com/blog/ (anatomy studies, great for poses)

http://senshistock.deviantart.com/ (My fave stock artist ever! Once again, great for anatomy studies and sketching, I use her for practice)

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http://vishstudio.deviantart.com/ (AUH-MA-MA-MAZING male models, I once again use pics from here for sketching practice, but NEVER for anything finished. )
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Brax4 » Tue Dec 15, 2009 11:53 pm

Well, as everyone has stated is the critique is very important, and they already put their input in, so here's what I have to say, the second drawing you did was a lot better than the first one, even in small details, though he had the head of a freakin' watermelon, haha, but in seriousness, you did fix proportions a little bit in the third drawing posted. I think you're progressively improving, but at a slow rate. You don't always have to understand how the body works, but it does help a lot, trust me, I draw like you, where I don't take into account anything other than "I'm going to start it, and I'm just going to draw everything in", but that took a LOT of time, and a LOT of practice, and I still find it a lot easier to start yourself with some guidelines of what position the character will be in, the proportions, etc.
It's important to take critique, and don't let anyone bring you down, keep at it, and you'll be fine. Best of luck to you.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Wed Dec 16, 2009 6:39 am

http://www.majhost.com/gallery/SimsterX ... better.jpg heres something better hope you like it
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Brax4 » Wed Dec 16, 2009 12:39 pm

The face doesn't seem to go with it, work on that a little bit, and not so SUPER ANIME GO!
But a slight improvement.
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