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Name: Hyuuga Rai
Personality: Rai is an extraordinarily hard person to read and has a somewhat complex personality. There are times when he is friendly and tries his best to get along with people, but then there are others when he comes off as being cold and distant. It comes mainly from trust issues and feelings of inferiority that he has when around others. When he was younger he had a somewhat rebellious attitude, and although he had grown out of it for the most part, he occasionally has a moment or two when he acts cocky and show off. This attitude in his younger years caused his family to nearly disown him and also caused his status as a ninja to become somewhat tainted. He was very stubborn about himself and although his attitude prevented him from developing as a ninja, he still continued with it until he finally managed to graduate the academy. Since then several things had happened in his life, and although he still has some trust issues, the moment a person gains his trust Rai becomes a very good friend to have. He’s loyal and determined, dislikes it when people look down upon others because of status, and will always speak his mind even when he should hold his tongue. Though now when he shoots off his mouth he tries to be as respectful as possible with it.
Appearance: Like the rest of the Hyuuga clan, Rai has the trademark white eyes. These blank emotionless eyes show that he has the bloodline limit of the Byakugan. But this is the only part of Rai that resembles the traditional style that the Hyuuga clan normally boasts. His black hair is kept fairly short, messy around the sides and back with a few locks that spike up on the top of his head. Other than his untidy hair, he keeps his face well kept and is considerably handsome in the eyes of most people. Normally he lets his forehead protector hang around his neck, he doesn’t really pay much attention to the thing unless he knows he’ll need the extra protection. Rai even has a large scar running across his forehead from a battle he once had, but is too stubborn to ever place it where it should be.
His clothes also don’t resemble the normally traditional robes worn by the Hyuuga clan. Rai has a loosely fit gray and black t-shirt, that is left wide open in the front. Underneath his shirt, he is only wearing several white bandage esque wrappings that cover his entire chest up to the neck. On his right arm he sports the same bandage looking cloth, only for the most part you can’t see it. Over top of the bandaging, he has a long black and fingerless glove that reaches all the way up to his elbow. The glove is mostly leather but has several metal bracings along it. Rai has his honorary sand forehead protector strapped onto the glove. His left arm only has the bandages going down it, and is absent of the black glove. His pants are the same gray and black color as his t-shirt, and are also baggy enough to allow for free movements.
Byakugan- A bloodline limit that is passed down through the Hyuuga clan. It allows the user to see through certain objects, and is capable of seeing the inter chakra networks of living beings. The person using this ability also gains a certain “second sight” that makes them capable of sensing anything around them in a 50 meter radius. Another ability that is gained from the Hyuuga clan is the fact that he can use the gentle fist style of fighting. This style of fighting targets a person’s tenketsu, and attacking the inter chakra networks, dealing massive internal damage to opponents. It allows the person to release chakra through their body and into the opponent, either shutting down or overdriving a person’s chakra system.
Full body strike- This is the self developed form of Taijutsu that Rai uses. It is a well balanced blend of his family’s gentle fist style, with his own unique style of normal taijutsu. The normally used gentle fist style, heavily relies on the hands and dealing internal damage to opponents chakra systems. But Rai decided that it just wasn’t enough to attack a person like that, he wanted a more blunt way of dealing damage with immediate effects. His form that he developed on his own, is the near opposite of the gentle fist style. Instead of dealing internal damage with his fists, he uses his feet to attack and defend, causing the opponent external wounds with blunt trauma and strength. It is a well balanced form that uses all of his taijutsu abilities with very good results.
Divination Whirl- Rai has not yet mastered this defensive technique. It is an ability that uses his chakra control to spin and defend any oncoming attacks. This is an absolute defense because it has a 360 radius, and is extremely effective when done correctly.
Spread Shot- Normally Rai releases his chakra through touch into his opponents, but he does have one range attack that he sometimes uses as his trump card. His spread shot ability sends the chakra points in his hands into overdrive, allowing him to expell an excessive amount of chakra through his fingers all at one time. It makes his chakra temporarily visible, and it shoots out from his hands giving it a long range of attack. Depending on how he uses this technique, he can either concentrate it heavily onto one point, dealing massive external damage along with the internal damage. Or he can spread it into a wide ranged attack, only dealing some physical damage while hitting multiple chakra points. Either way it leaves him drained of a large amount of chakra, and normally he is unable to expel anymore chakra in the arm he used for some time afterwards.
Rapid Shot- This ability is a variation on his spread shot and focus shot. Much like the other two, Rai shoots his own chakra from his hands, and is capable of sealing points and dealing damage at a distance. But this technique is much more conservative of Rai’s chakra, it only uses a small amount every time he uses it, and this gives him the capability of using it for extended periods of time. It only uses up as much chakra as he’d normally put into a needle, so it isn’t devastating to his body when he uses it. This ability is far less powerful than the other two, it’s only capable of sealing one point at a time, but it must strike the same spot more than once and can only deal slight physical damage. He's seldom able to actually seal a person's point with this technique, but the damaging effects of his chakra can still be very painful regardless.
Chakra Needles- Like the spread shot, these needles allow Rai to attack an enemy’s chakra system at a ranged distance. Unlike the spread shot, this technique consumes very little chakra, but is considerably less effective. Only a direct hit to a person’s tenketsu will allow for a successful release of chakra, and since the needle’s points are so thin, this makes it even more difficult.
Chakra Bomb- This is a newly developed technique that Rai had created on his own. He forms a massive charge of chakra into his hand, one that drains a good amount of his energy and grows to a size proportionate to that of how much is drained. This ball of energy is extremely heavy, so much so that it becomes difficult for Rai to move with once he has activated the technique.
He can do two things with this attack, one being he can simply throw the ball of energy, having it explode upon contact with anything that it strikes. But the most deadly aspect of this technique, is that he is able to store the charge into any object that he sees fit. This allows him more mobility, and gives his attack more of a surprise effect to it.
By being able to store it into items like chakra needles, the ground, or people, he can detonate these items at any given time, and can even save the charges to be used at a later point. The more charges that are used at once, the more powerful the explosion becomes, also, the amount of chakra placed into the charge determines the power of the explosion as well.
Equipment: The only equipment that he carries with him and uses frequently are his chakra needles. These needles absorb his chakra into the tips. And much like his Spread shot technique, this allows him to disable chakra points at a distance. Aside from the needles is also a very short kodachi, the blade being well under two feet in length.
Background: Rai was born into the head family of the Hyuuga clan and much was expected from his noble upbringings. But Rai never liked being told what to do, he almost instinctively liked to go against the grain. Despite the fact that he was raised to be respectful and a high classed person, he always fought his teachings and did as he pleased to do. This resentful attitude towards his family methods made him somewhat an outcast from his own clan. They of course didn’t disown him or anything, but he was given very harsh treatment nonetheless. But he never minded, he much preferred having things harder on himself. He believed that having things tough would only make him stronger. His beliefs were indeed the truth, and through his harsh training he only became stronger and more resentful of those people around him. Many people saw him as being a no class punk that was only good at fighting, and in many senses that was the truth. In fact, his family denied him from taking the chunin exams several times because the believed that he did not have enough respect to become the next level ninja. But eventually as the years passed, and he became stronger, they finally allowed him into the test.
Rai was given a special mission one year ago, and it was to act as a sort of emissary for Konoha. It was given to him by the Hokage himself, and Rai was sent out of the village on his important mission. In his time away, Rai has done nothing but push his body to its breaking point. He’s done a great amount of traveling and ended up in the wind nation. Rai had done most of his training on his own, but he picked up a few things from the sand village during his stay. He’d even gone so far as to helping them through several missions, earning his right to become an honorary member of their nation.
Health/Chakra Pool: 6
Chakra Control: 7