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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby UniversumProfugus » Thu Apr 02, 2009 2:56 pm

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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby Rough Giraffe » Thu Apr 02, 2009 5:20 pm

I do like Naruto; some of it's pretty silly, but that's called Character Development.

And speaking of which:

Name: Hokiro "Kuro" Anzen
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Ranking: Genin

Personality: Dark. Hates sunlight and flowers of any sort, as well as any sweet fragrances. Mirth is unknown to him. If he's told to do something, he feels he has to rationalize his actions with a purpose; he won't just do anything because he was ordered to. It has to be beneficial to either him or someone he doesn't hate; there are very few of those people. Those who work in a team with him are generally at risk of falling on his bad side, especially if they are high-spirited.

Appearance: Wears all black clothing. Only his eyes are uncovered; a deep scarlet, though he keeps his eyes closed more often than not. He is pale due to his aversion to light. His outfit consists of very loose clothes that are tied off around his feet and wrists; he looks like a traditional ninja, but his clothes are too baggy. His forehead protector is made of a black metal, and he wears it around his waist. He wears fingerless gloves. Consequently, his fingers are the only parts of his body that show any sign of color.

Justu/Skills: Can see extremely well in the dark. Where others would think it's pitch black, it's like sunset to him. Conversely, he relies on sound to get around during the day, or wears a dark cloth over his eyes; he can see through it, but it gets in the way during a fight.

He has good enough control of his chakra to make his clothes cling to his skin as he moves so they do not flap around and make noise as he moves to strike.


Blind: A genjutsu technique that creates a quick flash of darkness that makes the target believe that he has been blinded. It is activated by two seals (I can't remember what all the seals are--I'll have to come up with that later) and a snap of his fingers. Those who do not have their eyes open when the user snaps his fingers (even if they are simply blinking at the exact moment), are not affected. Requires a small amount of chakra.


Black Flash: Close-range ninjutsu technique requiring a great deal of concentration. Its effective range is inside 4ft. This technique basically fires a black beam of "hot" chakra from his palm that has high armor-piercing capability. It does not actually "destroy" armor, but simply bypasses it.

At 1.5m to 2m, the attack would only create a red mark on the target's skin, sorta like a really small sunburn, but would be closer to being a "chakra burn." At point-blank range, the attack would penetrate all armor and create a "burn" through the inside of the person's body, which causes damage to internal organs; the damage is moderate, but extremely painful.

The attack itself has a low accuracy, even at point blank range, so it is difficult to choose in what direction the attack passes through its target. It is not lethal, unless you manage to hit a vital area (such as the head or heart), but that is also not a 100% chance to kill. This consumes a moderate amount of chakra all at once, and requires a cooldown (about 60 seconds?) otherwise you will fry the nerves in your hand.


Bloodline Limit: "Void" - This has three stages (only the first of which he has been able to use so far). The first, called "Shadowmeld" (yes, I know, WoW. Bite me), which allows him to slip into the shadows, bending light around him, making him completely invisible to the naked eye. However, this prevents him from using most complex chakra-related moves, such as those involving seals, etc. He can still do simple things, like climb trees using just his feet, etc. This consumes a moderate amount of chakra.

The second, called "Solar Eclipse," allows the user to engulf himself in darkness and creates illusory copies, that seem to act independently of his will, but do no damage and take no damage. This consumes a higher amount of chakra, but allows the user to use other chakra-based techniques; however, he can be drained very quickly in doing so.

The third, and most powerful--"Dark Moon"--allows the user to cast a wide area in a dome of utter darkness (about 200 meters in diameter), which nullifies all light, and muffles sound. Due to the amount of chakra that fills the area to distort light, it is nearly impossible to track the user by any non-physical means (chakra-based techniques will be almost useless). As has been suggested, this technique consumes nearly all of the user's chakra, assuming he can even use it. The darkness lasts for about 6 minutes.

Equipment: Kunai, wire (garrote), shuriken, daggers. Also carries a small pack of bang-snaps (small bits of flint and gunpowder wrapped tightly in thin paper that create a loud, snapping nose when thrown at a hard surface) for distraction purposes.

Background: His parents were killed when he was five years old. Also at the age of five, he took his first life: his parent's killer. He was picked up, half dead from dehydration by a traveling merchant, who took him to Konoha for further treatment. He still remembered his name, and they took him in, not knowing much about him, or how he would turn out. He still lives in Konoha, and has not killed again, though his dark personality excludes him from most groups. He gained a moderate respect for his teachers, who try their best to ease his gloom, but to no avail. Those who know him call him Kuro, a nickname of sorts. Still, his teachers all taught him to the best of their abilities, and he learned much from them. He has still yet to find his calling; he may either become the type that tries to snuff out all happiness from the world, or the type that tries to kill only those who he believes are truly evil, thus preventing more lives like his. Young, his paths have yet to be traveled, and he has yet to choose his fate.

Stats :
Health/Chakra Pool: 3
Chakra Control: 5
Taijutsu/Tools: 2
Ninjutsu: 6
Genjutsu: 4
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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby Iris » Thu Apr 02, 2009 5:28 pm

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Name: Atsushi Mekura
Short name: Ats

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Ranking: Genin
Personality: Quiet and resourceful, Ats prefers to listen and wait before making a decision. Often this makes him look like a coward but he has long since ignored what others think.
Ever a gentleman however, Atsushi remains polite and loyal to his friends.

Appearance: Ats is a little more than 5”11 with very short, unkept dark brown hair.
As it is tradition in his clan, he wears the village’s headband over his eyes to shut out as much of the world as possible until he reaches maturity, no one is sure what his eye color is.
Due to his inability to see, he rarely changes his outfit. During a mission he wears matching dark green pants, a black shirt covered by a brown and green jacket, as well as the normal ninja footwear.
Unfortunately, this is the same clothing he wears when he goes to any casual meet-up or event.

As he isn’t able to distinguish terrain like other ninja, Ats has difficulty walking and relies on a wooden walking stick.
Running/jumping isn’t a problem as the noise allows his kekkei genkai to act like echo location, allowing him to see the path a head of him.

Justu/Skills:
Kekkei genkai; Sound interface (I may need a hand with making a proper name for this, could you give me any advice?).
This defensive kekkei genkai is unique in two ways, firstly it alters the brain development in such a way that the user is able to hear sound and then create a mental image of their surroundings but at the cost, the user’s eyes develop at a much slower pace and are often only able to see at the age of 20, even then they tend to be short sighted.
Many have akined this kekkei genkai to echo location and have also noted that a well trained member of the Mekura Clan can also ‘hear’ chakra. This has allowed them a slight advantage over genjutsu that effect the eyes but has made them suspect to any jutsu that effects the ears.

Secondly, this kekkei genkai has been known to jump whole generations. Those born with the kekkei genkai are always born with colorless eyes. Only once they have ‘matured’ do their eyes gain color however if their eyes are exposed too early, there is a high chance that they will never be able to see at all.

Defensive Taijutsu specialist: Ats lacks the skill to use Genjutsu affectively and has often been forced to rely on his taijutsu to see him through a battle.
Coupled with his kekkei genkai, Ats can determine were his opponent will attack from simply by listening to his body movements and his heart beat.
His preferred weapon is the staff (often it’s substituted with the walking stick).

Equipment: Standard ninja equipment save for the walking stick.

Background: Like all those who are born in the clan, their eyes are always checked for the bloodline limit. Those that have it must immediately shut out all light as it may forever rob them of the possibility to see the world.
Ats learned as much as possible from his aging grandfather, considering his age it was deemed not necessary to teach him all of the advanced techniques only the basics.

During the start of his ninja schooling, many picked on him often stealing his walking stick leaving him completely unable to see anything that was a head of him. After several pranks on him, Ats dropped the gentleman act and defended himself to prevent them from stealing his property. The scuffle was brief and painless as Ats was easily able to move out of the way or deflect any blows the kids threw at him without having to strike back.

In classes, he is always given pages with Braille. This way he can still keep up in classes although there are times when he has to ask a fellow student where they are up to since Ats has to feel the words and can get lost.
This hindrance meant that Ats was at a disadvantage when it came to theory but in practice he made his own improvisations to make of for that.


Stats
Health/Chakra Pool: 6

Chakra Control: 6

Taijutsu/Tools: 5

Ninjutsu: 3

Genjutsu: 0

Lol, I'm kinda surprised at the similiarities with the post above.
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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby Rough Giraffe » Thu Apr 02, 2009 5:34 pm

Wow, that's... freakishly coincidental... o.O

I really don't want to have to start over... o__o

Edit: But hey, if the story goes the right way, they might place the two of us in the same group. Wouldn't that be like the blind leading the blind? lol.
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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby BG07 » Thu Apr 02, 2009 5:45 pm

Yes people please take it easy on the 'sound' blood limits and abilities guys... there's a reason why I made the bad guys the Sound Village ^_^'


Ruff it looks good, just give him like... nightvision instead or something...

Plus change 1 mi. to 100 m -.-

1 mile is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy too big
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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby Timer » Thu Apr 02, 2009 5:46 pm

Wind element FTW :D no silly tricks with smoke and mirrors ! just brute force for us K THX lol
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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby Dorian » Thu Apr 02, 2009 5:49 pm

Only one person has any points in Genjutsu? I suppose I'll make someone that focuses on that sort then. No one steal this plan, damn it!
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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby Iris » Thu Apr 02, 2009 5:51 pm

Hehehehe, I know ruft, it really is freakish. But I think it would be quiet good if we were put together since we'd be good trackers/bodyguards.
And I don't think we'd need to change our characters, after all our guys are very different. Ats relies on sound completely while your gifted with sight, although I just read through it again... yep it really is 'the blind leading the blind' I wonder how the thrid member would feel if they put us together.

I was hoping we'd be fighting sound ninjas, it would make the fights a lot more challenging!
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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby zenieth » Thu Apr 02, 2009 6:04 pm

I have a question if characters from the series can be referenced in the history?
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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby Timer » Thu Apr 02, 2009 6:11 pm

can you still dispel a Genjutsu without use of them..

i suppose you can cause naruto can do it (I watch shippuden :P never been a fan of manga books :P)
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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby zenieth » Thu Apr 02, 2009 6:12 pm

dispelling genjutsu does not require knowledge of how to use them. basically you need to over flood the enemy chakra that enters your brain or have another do it for you.
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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby Ro Wong » Thu Apr 02, 2009 6:16 pm

Or you can stab yourself to redirect signals and shock yourself out of it.
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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby BG07 » Thu Apr 02, 2009 6:17 pm

@ Zenieth: No, I'd prefer if you remained ambiguous about people's names in the past and any 'major' historical events

@Timer: What Zenieth said, but depending on the level of the genjutsu you might not be able to dispel it easily. What Ro said can work... but not all the time =P
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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby zenieth » Thu Apr 02, 2009 6:18 pm

that part is a bit more tricky as you need to know the genjutsu is coming to prepare.

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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby Timer » Thu Apr 02, 2009 6:24 pm

i thought so.. i think if we get more points some time i will put a point in it just so i have a little more aptitude to stop them...
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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby Rough Giraffe » Thu Apr 02, 2009 6:34 pm

BG07 wrote:just give him like... nightvision instead or something...

Edited, pending your approval.

BG07 wrote:Plus change 1 mi. to 100 m -.-

1 mile is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy too big

Well, putting it at 100 m would be like 150 feet on either side of him. The dome is static, meaning it does not move with him, and if he can navigate using sound, then he can prevent someone from escaping. Also, no solid objects are displaced in making this field, making it a very useful skill in a heavily-forested area. So, I shortened it to 300 m, which puts it at about 990 ft in diameter. Is that okay?
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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby zenieth » Thu Apr 02, 2009 6:35 pm

CS:

Name:Kaguya Kousa

Age: 14

Gender: male

Ranking: Genin

Personality: A teen of unstable nature said to be due to his clan traits. he's often moody and unsocial however seems to be able to keep a composed attitude during missions. His mood however cause him to be both reliable and unreliable at times either causing interaction with him to always be different for certain people

Appearance: slender in build, Kousa is a relatively agile person. He where's a green kimono with red spirals over his clavicles. He also adorns white pants with two silver bells tied to each of his wrist. They make no sound however he delights in their look as it calms him. his hair is relatively long and usually split into two ponytails with jade colored ribbons ,however on occasion is left out. The most standout feature for him however is his turquoise which seem to ensnare onlookers.

Justu/Skills: Shikotsumyaku/dead bone pulse (drilling finger bullets, dance of the camellia,) Hidden mist jutsu, water clone technique.

Shikotsumyaku : (Literally meaning "Dead Bone Pulse") is the Kekkei Genkai of the Kaguya clan, which gives them the ability to manipulate their own skeletal structure. They have free control over the cells responsible for bone growth and replacement, allowing them to manipulate their bones at will. They can protrude their bones out through their skin with any injuries that would be received during this process healing instantly, change their bone density, and can even completely regenerate a lost bone. An example of this is seen with the Finger Bullet Drill (Teshi Sendan), which fires the user's fingertip bones like bullets. All this makes their bodies virtually indestructible, and any point of contact on the body could become as sharp as a spear tip, giving them a nearly perfect defense.

drilling finger bullets (Kekkei Genkai technique) - A Kaguya releases his fingers as projectiles toward an enemy. They are extremely fast however only have a distance of up to 10m

dance of the camellia - allows a kaguya to manipulate their humerus bones of either arm into short hilt-less blades that are stronger than steel.

Regular jutsu
Hidden mist jutsu - (Rank D) This jutsu envelops the surrounding area in a dense mist, reducing visibility within the affected area. The density can be controlled by the user, allowing them to create a mist so thick that even they can't see through it.

Water clone technique - (Rank C) The water clone technique creates solid clones from water. Like the other solid clone techniques, the clones can be used to preform tasks the user is unable or unwilling to do for themselves. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel very far from the original body. Like other clone techniques, if the water clones are injured enough they will revert back to normal water.


Equipment: smoke bombs are his tools of choice as they aid him by allowing him to get up close to enemies undetected to dispatch them as his skill is primarily based around close combat. These are usually only used when there is not enough water around for the hidden mist jutsu to be performed.

Background: A remnant of the Kaguya clan. His clan was majorly decimated by a illness that ravaged their area. He believe this a blessing however as most who desired to attack the mist village were killed off before any true plan could be set out. he now resides as one of the few remaining members working diligently to repair his clan. he is a member of Konoha but always placed his clan before everything else

Stats

Health/Chakra Pool: 5

Chakra Control: 5

Taijutsu/Tools: 6

Ninjutsu: 4

Genjutsu:0
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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby Timer » Thu Apr 02, 2009 6:38 pm

Shouldn't you put the Shikotsumyaku on the cs if your from that clan?
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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby zenieth » Thu Apr 02, 2009 6:39 pm

is the very name of the bloodline trait needed in the jutsu section?
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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby Timer » Thu Apr 02, 2009 6:41 pm

ye Shikotsumyaku is the blood line limit "Dead bone pulse"

i just thought it had to be stated on the CS if you had one
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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby zenieth » Thu Apr 02, 2009 6:42 pm

very well shall edit

done.
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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby Rough Giraffe » Thu Apr 02, 2009 6:43 pm

Um, just thought you might wanna notice: IN YOUR OWN POST, you left in the instructions for distributing stats; might wanna read it over AGAIN, and then look down at your stats.

There's a big NO-NO right there that you violated.
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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby zenieth » Thu Apr 02, 2009 6:45 pm

really should of went over that more thoroughly. thank you for pointing out the mistakes.
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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby BG07 » Thu Apr 02, 2009 6:50 pm

Ruff you drive a hard bargain... but since it doesn't move around like I thought it did... make it 200 m and you're good.

Just think about how big that is...

@Zenieth: Yes please mention the Blood line limit, as well as put more of a description of your jutsu for those who aren't familiar with them.

Also, you still need to explain to me why Konoha would allow him to help them out in their missions...
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Re: Naruto OOC: Sign Ups

Postby Ro Wong » Thu Apr 02, 2009 6:54 pm

Alternate universe, BG. The clan could live in the Fire Nation here. XD
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