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Postby DinosaurPirate » Wed Feb 28, 2007 11:49 am

Hello, all. I'm new to the forums. My username's DinosaurPirate but you can call me William, Will, or Mitsukai.

I've been working on a comic for many years. Unfortunately, I've had to restart it about 6 times due to it sucking. Now I've finally reached a point where I'm happy with the way it's going.

It's a fantasy comic called Elementia Chronicles. I'm going to make a site for it once I'm at least 25% done with it, due to my habit of not doing things when I'm under pressure. Anyway, I'd like to show what I've got so far.

One more thing to note... some pages will look worse than others. This is because I used what I could from the old version (from over a year ago) while adding in new pages/panels. Any advice will be greatly appreciated!

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Postby Elend-X » Wed Feb 28, 2007 12:10 pm

Nice!!!!! :D It sounds nice!
Although you should check the rules cause I don't want this to be locked! :)
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Re: Elementia Chronicles

Postby DinosaurPirate » Wed Feb 28, 2007 12:19 pm

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Postby DarkCrystal65 » Wed Feb 28, 2007 2:23 pm

you might want to rename your thread so it has your username in it. Part of the rules.

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Re: Mitsukai's Elementia Chronicles

Postby DinosaurPirate » Wed Feb 28, 2007 2:31 pm

Alright, I've included my name in the subject. Out of curiousity, what's the max number of pictures per post?

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Postby DarkCrystal65 » Wed Feb 28, 2007 2:43 pm

ehh I suggest if you have like 10 or so then I split it but there is no set max. Oh yea I meant your username since it's the one that most people would recognized.
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Re: DinosaurPirate's Elementia Chronicles

Postby DinosaurPirate » Wed Feb 28, 2007 4:50 pm

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Postby Shoi » Wed Feb 28, 2007 8:13 pm

Nice comic so far! Needs more backgrounds, but other than that, it looks quiet promising! :3 Keep at it.
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Postby ROCKWELL » Wed Feb 28, 2007 10:20 pm

hmmm...it just seems so simple. Id say your fairly good, It just lacks flare.

just work on everything.
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Postby FrozenDream » Wed Feb 28, 2007 10:58 pm

oo evry nice comic

but i thnk u shouldmaybe add a bit more details in it
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Re: DinosaurPirate's Elementia Chronicles

Postby DinosaurPirate » Thu Mar 01, 2007 6:12 am

the backgrounds get better later on... most of chapter 1 was drawn over a year ago.

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Postby Emerald Emblem » Thu Mar 01, 2007 8:00 am

Pretty sweet comic, these pages are a year old huh? sure you improved alot huh?
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Postby Elend-X » Thu Mar 01, 2007 3:20 pm

It looks really good and the plot is great! Although I think that you miss the proportions in some parts.... I can't think of anything else though....
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Re: DinosaurPirate's Elementia Chronicles

Postby DinosaurPirate » Thu Mar 01, 2007 5:38 pm

yeah, along with backgrounds I have trouble with consistency.

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Re: DinosaurPirate's Elementia Chronicles

Postby llleung » Thu Mar 01, 2007 7:54 pm

ease up on the blur and if you have some computer tools use em to clean up you images makes it more pleasing to view. aside from that its good as long as you know you kinks and you work em out thats cool
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Re: DinosaurPirate's Elementia Chronicles

Postby DinosaurPirate » Thu Mar 01, 2007 9:23 pm

Here's a few character designs, all of which will appear later in the comic.

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Postby FrozenDream » Thu Mar 01, 2007 10:31 pm

very nice..it seems like u av improved wuite a bit over the years ^^
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Postby Makoto_Shinobi » Thu Mar 01, 2007 11:18 pm

Great drawing, Dinoplanet (mind if I call you as a nickname?).
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Postby Elend-X » Fri Mar 02, 2007 6:52 am

Indeed you can see the improvement ! And the story goes one really good! ^_^
He's BLUE!!!!!! :P
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Re: DinosaurPirate's Elementia Chronicles

Postby ROCKWELL » Fri Mar 02, 2007 2:40 pm

DinosaurPirate wrote:yeah, along with backgrounds I have trouble with consistency.

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see how acward that looks.

the backround perspective doesent match the perspective of the people. either the eye view of the backround is lowerd or the perspective of the people is risen.
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Re: DinosaurPirate's Elementia Chronicles

Postby DinosaurPirate » Fri Mar 02, 2007 5:53 pm

Actually I wasn't trying to make them look risen, but the way I draw often has the pant legs flare out more towards the bottom.

Anyway, here's two more pages, and sketches of the characters done two years ago so you can see how they've evolved over time.

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Yes. He used to have a katana (which can still be seen in some of the earlier pages). You see, I used to call the comic a manga, the sound effects used to be in (most likely incorrect) japanese, and the character's names were more japanese sounding (except Riser, who was called William at the time). However, I realized that I was becoming wapanese, and started the entire comic over. However, the first page, which is the best in my opinion, was drawn two years ago, back when I still sucked!
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Re: DinosaurPirate's Elementia Chronicles

Postby DinosaurPirate » Mon Mar 05, 2007 5:08 pm

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Postby Elend-X » Tue Mar 06, 2007 7:51 am

What a relative! Giving him a smoke! :P
lol The one before was so hilarius with those eyes! lol
Keep up! I can't wait to see the more recent pages :)
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Re: DinosaurPirate's Elementia Chronicles

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