Hello, all. I'm new to the forums. My username's DinosaurPirate but you can call me William, Will, or Mitsukai.

I've been working on a comic for many years. Unfortunately, I've had to restart it about 6 times due to it sucking. Now I've finally reached a point where I'm happy with the way it's going.

It's a fantasy comic called Elementia Chronicles. I'm going to make a site for it once I'm at least 25% done with it, due to my habit of not doing things when I'm under pressure. Anyway, I'd like to show what I've got so far.

One more thing to note... some pages will look worse than others. This is because I used what I could from the old version (from over a year ago) while adding in new pages/panels. Any advice will be greatly appreciated!

Nice!!!!! :D It sounds nice!
Although you should check the rules cause I don't want this to be locked!
Oh and welcome to the forums!

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you might want to rename your thread so it has your username in it. Part of the rules.

Good comic by the way it looks good.

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The Darkness in our Hearts....
Improving myself in every picture but I need critics so please comment.

My Art Thread

Alright, I've included my name in the subject. Out of curiousity, what's the max number of pictures per post?

ehh I suggest if you have like 10 or so then I split it but there is no set max. Oh yea I meant your username since it's the one that most people would recognized.

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The Darkness in our Hearts....
Improving myself in every picture but I need critics so please comment.

My Art Thread

Nice comic so far! Needs more backgrounds, but other than that, it looks quiet promising! :3 Keep at it.

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My Art thread
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hmmm...it just seems so simple. Id say your fairly good, It just lacks flare.

just work on everything.

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oo evry nice comic

but i thnk u shouldmaybe add a bit more details in it

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the backgrounds get better later on... most of chapter 1 was drawn over a year ago.

Pretty sweet comic, these pages are a year old huh? sure you improved alot huh?

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It looks really good and the plot is great! Although I think that you miss the proportions in some parts.... I can't think of anything else though....

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yeah, along with backgrounds I have trouble with consistency.

ease up on the blur and if you have some computer tools use em to clean up you images makes it more pleasing to view. aside from that its good as long as you know you kinks and you work em out thats cool

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Here's a few character designs, all of which will appear later in the comic.

very nice..it seems like u av improved wuite a bit over the years ^^

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Great drawing, Dinoplanet (mind if I call you as a nickname?).

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Indeed you can see the improvement ! And the story goes one really good!
He's BLUE!!!!!!

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see how acward that looks.

the backround perspective doesent match the perspective of the people. either the eye view of the backround is lowerd or the perspective of the people is risen.

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Rockwells arts n comics
"Lord Soth"--It's just so bland without you here. Spam forum without Rockwell is not win.
"krimson-Death"--...Ur probably one of the best artists ive seen on snafu...
"ZoulArt"-- I've read your comics and your a super mega awsome comic artist...Your getting better and better at what you do so keep it up!
"teran4ever"--No one cares if you are a skilled artist, you are a total douche.
"Brax4"--Rockwell, seriously, your comics rock, probably one of my favorite artists on the site...
"EagleMan"--Congratulations rockwell. You have become a legend to these people...
"whispersoul"--Woah, Rockwell. Awesome works. It's been a while since I've seen your arts. and I'm glad that your talents are still the shit.
"Boymonkey130"--Rockwell....Your crap flies forth at mach speed. It destroys all in its path, and... then catches fire, obliterating those who oppose you. I WORSHIP your crap.

Actually I wasn't trying to make them look risen, but the way I draw often has the pant legs flare out more towards the bottom.

Anyway, here's two more pages, and sketches of the characters done two years ago so you can see how they've evolved over time.















Yes. He used to have a katana (which can still be seen in some of the earlier pages). You see, I used to call the comic a manga, the sound effects used to be in (most likely incorrect) japanese, and the character's names were more japanese sounding (except Riser, who was called William at the time). However, I realized that I was becoming wapanese, and started the entire comic over. However, the first page, which is the best in my opinion, was drawn two years ago, back when I still sucked!

What a relative! Giving him a smoke!
The one before was so hilarius with those eyes!
Keep up! I can't wait to see the more recent pages

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