This is Directly C&P'd from a Hamtaro fanforum site.
Another quick test of my Story skills.
Less pervertedness in this one, too. That way people might actually comment on it
Raive Feathertouch- A cute little hamster with black fur and white patches. Small black ears with a patch of brown on the left ear. Has big blue eyes. Is dating Aniya.
Aniya- A small female hamster, white fur with one big black patch on her right side, 2 round igloo like ears. Small green eyes.
Raive and Aniya where enjoying a small dance wth there best friends, Micah and Lenny, in the cavern hole of the town Sunnyvale. But a big storm rumbled in and the Shadow Lizards came. The shadow lizards are evil fools that are lizards, but made of shadow. They all have a small crystal in the middle of them. Destroy the crystal, and you will destroy the lizard.
Raive swung Aniya round and round in the cavern hole. A huge hole underground, it used to be the home of a large rabbit who had moved into heaven after dieing of cancer. It was large and was bare. It only had one huge cabinet for food, the rest was just floor and chairs. Aniya was dancing with Raive, on the day of the High Rose. The day of the high rose was the day that Sunnyvale was founded, and was called that because of the huge rose that was growing on the beach the founders landed on. Raive danced with Aniya, and a huge storm came in..
"Oh no, Raive. Ive got to get home to Ketsuko! She'll be rushing home soon!" Aniya Said.
"Dont leave yet. we arent finished dancing!" Raive said. Than it occured to him they had no choice, but to leave.
"Yeah man, just stay here and dance, she wont notice." said Micah.
"But she'll notice, I know she will!" Aniya scurried off to the hole leading up to Her house. One of the 3 holes there, it lead to A. Trainer Pepu's home, the old sage who helped all of the creatures of Sunnyvale. B. To Aniya's human master's house.
Sigh.."Dont bother, lets just go home guys" Raive said. Than he heard Aniya scream! He rushed off into the tunnel, ignoring anything and everything. He tripped over a chair, but fixed himself up really fast and ran up. Aniya was being attacked by a huge snake-like monster who had no body, only a small light protruding from its shadow body. "GET AWAY YOU MONSTER!" Raive yelled, than ran up to the beast. He smacked its head, but his paw just ran through the beasts head. He kept hitting everywhere, and finally hit its crystal center, which made it dissipate. "ANIYA RUN! Get to Pepu!" he yelled out.
"BUT!! Ketsuko.." she replied.
"Either go home and die or run to Pepu and live! Ill come with you." he said to her.
"..Fine!" she scurried off to the side of the cavern tunnel that lead to Pepu's home. Raive Followed.
Chapter 1. Finished! Added after 46 minutes:
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