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Postby BG07 » Sat May 13, 2006 10:32 am

Soooo many chapters :shock: ! Words can not express how sweet this is, I haven't finished reading all of it yet, but everything so far = total ownage over all awesomeness , truly a great fic
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Re: (Fanfic) "Leeching the worlds"

Postby Darkness_calls » Sat May 13, 2006 2:54 pm

I thank you for your most kind words ^_^


Next update:



Everything was illuminated with dark red light.
“What the hell is going on?” Dr.X asked, mainly wondering for himself.

“I am going on” Said the owner of the dark laughter.

Dr.X, Bop and Tina quickly turned to face the owner. It was Boogieman,
he smile most deviously and leaned on his staff with both hands.

“Who … what are you?” Dr.X asked, never before has he seen such a
creature and the horrible aura around the creature chilled his every bone,
almost freezing him in place.

“I am the king of nightmares, the supreme lord of fright. You may call me Boogieman”

“That is such a cliché name” Tina though out loud.

Boogieman pointed his staff towards Tina and something in her mind
snapped, a bright flash. She opened her mouth in awe, frozen in fright
and she shivered, unable to comprehend the thing she was staring at.

Her lord … it was her lord, the first leech. He began to speak:
<<<You’ve failed and know you will die>>>

Tina fell backwards; she shivered and began to crawl away, still facing her lord.
“No wait, I didn’t fail you … why are you here!?” Tina yelled

<<<Your time is now!>>> he yelled and jumped towards her, ready to
strike her down with his weapon and just before impact, he suddenly vanished.

Boogieman stopped pointing his staff at her. Tina still sat on the floor,
totally shocked. Bop and Dr.X didn’t know what happened. They saw
nothing, but Tina suddenly started screaming and begging.

It must have been something Boogieman did Dr.X though and peered his eyes.

Boogieman smirked and said with his normal dark voice:
“I am not called the supreme lord of fright for no reason”

Boogieman noticed Bean, Berry and Samantha lying on the floor, he
began to stretch down and open his palms, just like he was going to pick Berry up.

“Leave them alone!” Bop yelled and flew towards him with great speed,
she seemed to simply blink right near him and such was the greatness of her speed.

But Boogieman wasn’t a simple powerless creature. In a perfect timing he
flung with the skull end of his staff and hit Bop right in the stomach, as
she appeared and pinned her to the wall, making a crack in it. The impact
forced Bop to cough up blood, she then started to look around and
scream, staring at something horrible, but not visible to the others.
Boogieman was making her go through greatest fears, just like he did to
Tina. She yelled and tried to struggle, but in complete vain. Tina stood up,
finally gotten over the visions. Her eyes were beaming red, though you
can’t really tell because of the dark red light around them, and she shot
two eye lasers towards Boogieman. It was like Boogieman had 6th sense,
because he simply waved his hand and created a pitch black wall around
him. The lasers soared through the air and hitting the black shield, but
they only bounced away.

“Why daddy, why did you kill them? Don’t you love us anymore” Bop suddenly called.

A sentence echoed in Dr.X’s mind, Bell’s voice seemed to be reading the sentence:
Why didn’t you help him, why did you kill him? I hate you!

Bop’s vision broke off and she came back to reality, the first thing she
saw was fire. She fell on the floor and looked around. She noticed
Boogieman backing away and Dr.X was on fire … literally. His skin
seemed to be soaked with fire, not just his head like usual.

“What is this!?” Boogieman yelled

“This is you end!” Dr.X yelled back.

Four flaming tentacles seemed to spring forth from his body, quickly flying
through the air. Boogieman waved his hand and the dark shield came
back on. The dark mist and the flaming tentacles collided and they ate
each other up. The air was now extremely hot. A fireball flew from Dr.X
and hit Boogieman, sending him flying at the concrete wall. Boogieman
stood up, nothing seemed to be wrong with him, even his clothes were
unharmed and the only thing missing was his smirk.

“I noticed that you depend on your opponents fear to win, but you have to
be close so it can be effective” Dr.X said.
Boogieman’s fist shook and his mouth deformed with anger. But Dr.X continued:

“Now I’ll just keep you away, until you become too tired to hold your shield up”
Boogieman burst into laughter, the laughter gave Tina a chill down her spine.

“You really think that I am that easy, you disappoint me” Boogieman said.

Boogieman faded into nothing and appeared less then a second later right
in front of Dr.X. He threw a punch at Dr.X and the impact made him fly
into a wall. Tina tried to use this opportunity and charged into
Boogieman’s back, but like once stated, it was like Boogieman had 6th
sense, he turned around and grabbed her leg. He flung her body down
into the hard iron floor, bending it. She was barely conscious, Boogieman
raised his staff and it formed into some kind of dark blade. Suddenly Bop
charged at him with her fist raised for a punch. When the punch came, he
opened his palm and grabbed her small fist.

Tina yelled in terror when she saw what was about to happen. Boogieman
plunged his dark blade trough Bop’s chest, right below the heart. Blood
spat out of her small body, as she fell to the ground. She was still
breathing, but for how long? Tina screamed in anger and jumped at
Boogieman, he expected her to do that and she jumped right into his
blade. It stabbed through her just like it did with Bop. Tina fell down on
the floor; Boogieman turned around and walked towards Dr.X, whom was
fighting to stand up in another room.

Tina felt her vision blurring and unconsciousness taking over; she noticed
that Bop was still alive. Using her last strength she pulled up her white
ring (which seemed to be red because of the light) and pressed few
buttons on it, turned it and placed it on Bop’s finger. Tina smiled and past
out. A bluish fog left her motionless body and formed into a boy, with blue
eyes, blonde hair and black military uniform, a RR sign on it. Then the
fog vaporized into thin air. Something was wrong; Tina’s wound didn’t heal
up like it should be.




Somewhere in Nevada…
Boomer was punching a dummy, training like usual.

“Poor guy” Brick whispered to Butch.

Boomer heard it, still after all this training; they didn’t want him to come
with them on missions. He was given “special” missions. He thought that
they were embarrassed with him. The truth is that Brick and Butch were
scared that he might get hurt and even die because he didn’t have his
powers anymore.
With all his strength he punched the dummy, to their surprise it blew up in blue brilliance.

“What the …?” Brick and Butch yelled in surprise at the same time.
Boomer felt different, he felt like his old self.

“Guys I think I got my powers back” Boomer jumped in total happiness.

“Then lets use this chance to get even with that girl” Butch said

“What about Brisbane?” Brick said slowly not really caring about Brisbane.

“Screw him and let’s get the girl and the powerpuffs” Boomer yelled

“Like spoken out of my own mouth” Butch said.

Brick smiled and they three flew through the ceiling, blasting through it
and headed towards Megaville elementary.
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Postby BG07 » Sun May 14, 2006 12:33 pm

Yay I finally finished reading your fic, now on to Griddles'... o.O
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Postby Grey » Sun May 14, 2006 12:34 pm

I really like it. ^_^
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Re: (Fanfic) "Leeching the worlds"

Postby Darkness_calls » Mon May 15, 2006 7:27 am

I thank you both ^_^
Here is another update. I'm not really happy with this update :unsure:
But whatever, here it is.

next update:



“What … did you say!?” Barasia hissed.

<<<I was only wondering why you were crying because of something dying>>>

Barasia stood up, her beaming hatred fixed on the newcomer. Everyone
else that was there had no idea how to react. Then out of the blue Barasia
lunched herself towards the monster. She clenched her hand, forming a
fist, which she plunged towards the creature’s head. When successful hit
seemed imminent, the creature moved his weapon in the way. Barasia’s
strike didn’t even shake the weapon.

She didn’t really notice, mostly because she didn’t rest to see, instead she
threw punch after punch and kick after kick. All attacks were easily
dodged, sidestepped or deflected. Then with all her strength she laid out a
yell and punched the creature. An explosion of black brilliance came
when she hit … his finger!?

Barasia couldn’t believe what she was staring at. The creature used one
finger to stop the punch.

<<<It is so pathetic when weaklings try to win>>> said the creature

Then he flung his hand to the side, an invisible force threw Barasia in the
same direction. She collided with a tree, smashing it to pieces. It only
took her a second to stand back up, ready to fight. Out of her popped her
laser cannon, she took aim at the creature and just before she shot the
creature’s eyes flashed red for a brief moment. For some weird reasons
Barasia’s arm moved towards the powerpuff girls. Her cannon shot a
bright beam of compressed energy; it swiftly headed towards the
powerpuff girls. They on the other hand were too darn surprised to notice
just in time. The laser hit Bubbles right in the arm, digging into her flesh
just before it gave a small explosion, ripping Bubbles lower arm right off.
The pain choked the yell she formed in her throat, so she only moaned.
Bubbles fell to the ground, writhing in pain. The blood spitting out of her
severed arm.

“What the hell was that for” Yelled Buttercup angrily at Barasia.

Barasia didn’t answer, mostly because she was so shocked but also
because she wished the powerpuff girls dead.

<<<You should all take vengeance on this backstabbing girl>>> the
creature pointed out. His words aimed towards the powerpuff girls.

“Just what I wanted to hear” Buttercup growled and sprung forward

Barasia, Blossom was too angry to think this over so she followed Buttercup.
Barasia embraced herself to fight the powerpuff girls, but made sure she
never lost sight of the monster. The creature on the other hand ignored
them and walked fast towards Bell. Bell had stood up and was staring at
Buttercup, Blossom and Barasia fight and then she noticed the creature
heading her way.

“Go away!” she yelled.

<<<I need you>>>

She tried to fly away but the creature did something, he seemed to be
grabbing the air, as he did that an invisible force moved around Bell’s
neck and held her down. Bell was slowly suffocating and she tired to fight
it but failed. He moved close towards Bell. Finally he was got to her.

<<<I need you to teleport to your base and take me with you>>>

“I can’t, something is wrong and I’m unable to go there”

The creature seemed to be checking her face her any signs of lies, then
he let go of her and she dropped down to the ground, breathing fast.

<<<Then I have no use for you>>>

The creature lifted his weapon, ready to cleave Bell.




In Black Eden, Bop lay on the ground. The ring which Tina gave her
seemed to be glowing; the glow wasn’t illuminated red like everything
else. Bop’s body hovered up, her eyes closed and her body lifeless. Then
with a white light, all her clothes were ripped off. A white liquid of some
sort, stroke her soft skin and seemed to form armor on her. The liquid
took many forms but in the end vanished and revealed a white glowing
metal of some sort, the metal itself didn’t weight anything at all. The
armor didn’t cover her up really well. Her leg was completely hidden
inside this strange white armor, the lower half of her body only had some
kind white silky fabric to cover it, unlike the upper half, that was
completely covered in this white metal. On the shoulders were small white
shoulder plates. The upper arms didn’t have anything for protection, but
the lower part of the arm did. She was wearing strange kind of claws on
her hands. On Bop’s head rested the helmet, it had now “eyes” where
they should be, on the forehead of the helmet was a red diamond of some
sort, it seemed to be the “eye” of the helmet, but you couldn’t possibly
see through it unless you had an eye on your forehead.

Bop’s wound completely healed up and she slowly opened her eyes. She
became really shocked, she didn’t see like normally. Instead she seemed
to be looking from above her and she was able to sense the surrounding
around her somehow. She noticed, thanks to this strange vision, her
armor, I looked really good on her. It was rather too big, no wonder it
was made to fit Tina, not herself. She looked at Tina, whom still lay
motionless on the floor and with a large cut wound through her chest.
Berry, Bean and Samantha were still unconscious. A scream was heard; it
echoed through the silent base, Bop could hear that the screams
belonged to Dr.X. She somehow sensed that going through the wall would
be the quickest way to get to him. She raised her arm, ready to punch a
hole into it. When the fist hit the strangest thing happened. The impact
blew up the wall and the debris blasted into the next wall, blowing a hole
into it as well.

What is this strength? She though, suprised.
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Postby Frostmork » Mon May 15, 2006 9:41 am

Cool update...
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Postby Aeris » Mon May 15, 2006 10:36 am

Yay! Finished readinnnngggggg^^
So far I recognize every character except (of course) the leech (Tina), Shad and Barasia.
The new character is too powerful, take him down! XD
Allowing him to block a curled fist with but a finger is... outrageous! Grrr!

*Goes around in the room hitting any objets in her way*
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Postby Darkness_calls » Mon May 15, 2006 10:38 am

Aeris wrote:Yay! Finished readinnnngggggg^^
So far I recognize every character except (of course) the leech (Tina), Shad and Barasia.
The new character is too powerful, take him down! XD
Allowing him to block a curled fist with but a finger is... outrageous! Grrr!

*Goes around in the room hitting any objets in her way*


He is a bad guy, The powrhouse of all leeches.
It is their Lord. If you read the summary you know hos powers
But there is one to challange him.

Thank you for thank you fot taking the time to read my story and also thank you Frostmork for the comment ^_^
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Postby Comic Kitten » Mon May 15, 2006 10:47 am

Your's is better than mine! Your's should have more comments than mine... Very well done! ^_^
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Postby Darkness_calls » Mon May 15, 2006 10:49 am

You really flatter my with those words Ck :ogle:

Thanks ^_^
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Re: (Fanfic) "Leeching the worlds"

Postby Darkness_calls » Tue May 16, 2006 10:09 am

Here comes an ultra short update >.<
This is only a filler to the next chaper.

Next update




In the darkest corners of Black Eden, walked a silver haired boy. Shad,
but he wasn’t quite normal, he walked as if he was being dragged
forward. Strange glowing runes were on his forehead. He walked until he
reached a large open area. The air was really damp and a hammering
sound of some sort filled the air. In the middle of the black sogen was
some kind of signs. A large circular sign was the most obvious one of all
the signs. From above it seemed as all of the lesser signs were drawn to
the circular one. Shad wasn’t alone; he held Tina’s motionless body on his
shoulders. He had been hiding in the darkness the whole time, waiting for
the opportunity. It finally came when Bop turned into that glowing thing.
He slowly put Tina in the middle of the circular sign. The signs lit up and
the hammering sound became louder. Lava seemed to come out of the
earth and flow around the area. It never passed the circular sign, so Shad
and Tina were safe from the lava. The air was now extremely hot. Then
an earthquake, which shook all Black Eden. The circle seemed to crack,
then finally break. Shad and Tina fell down the endless pit that formed, as
the sign broke, but they didn’t fall for long, because something seemed to
grab then on the way down. Something huge came up from the pit. Not
much was seen of that monstrosity. The huge creature seemed to look
around then he yelled:

“Finally free!”




There was nobody left in the elementary where the powerpuff girls were
fighting. All the children and teachers had fled, Dexter had left when
Barasia came and he went to get Jack. Dexter had no idea of the superior
creature now fighting there. The police force was too scared to do
anything, knowing from personal experience to not mess with heroes
work. But the army was on its way. Few hundred men, tanks and even aircrafts.




Flying to Megaville were also the Rowdyruff boys, having no idea of the
battle taking place there. There were even other heroes from many
countries gathering there, most of them felt a strong presence of
something extremely powerful. This was going to become a large battle.

End of Chapter 14
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Postby Aeris » Tue May 16, 2006 11:12 am

Poor Tina. *Sob* *Sob*
Why does she have to get my compassion? (T_T)
It is hard for me to connect between this and the last chapter (maybe my brain is disfunctioning because of the excessive work of school :fuckedup: ).
Anyway, nice chapter^^
It would be more of a reminder than a chapter, though, trying to clear things up: Who is where and doing what (That's right, I wondered Dexter was XD)
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Re: (Fanfic) "Leeching the worlds"

Postby Darkness_calls » Thu May 18, 2006 10:51 am

The problem is that between updates the view point switches (usually I mark it with 4 spaces and then descripe where the story is now) but between chapters there is almost always time differance.
Here is the beginning of chapter 15.

Shadowed State of mind's true idendity is revealed ;)

Next update:




Chapter 15
“Battle of the Titans”

In Black Eden, where lava has gathered stood the overly large creature.
Shadowed state of mind, it called itself. It looked like a large dragon or
demon made entirely out of stone. It had the smell of drowned coals and
had some kind of shield, like the darkness itself bent around it, covering
most of it. In its left hand he held his puppet, Shad and in his right hand
he held a certain brown haired girl, Tina.

“After three thousand years, I … I am finally free” The giant monster
roared, shaking the dark trees around him.

Shad still had the runes on his forehead. There is a reason why the rock
monster called him a “puppet”, generally Shad was under the command
of that creature.

“Wake up … friend” Whispered the creature and lifted Shad so they stared
eye to eye. The runes on Shad’s forehead vaporized and he snapped back to reality.

“Who … what are you!?” Shad yelled in fright as he woke up in front of the
monster, not really a pleasant wake up.

“Of course, I forgot that I altered your memory” The giant demon laughed.

The out of its eyes, a small energy particle hovered and landed on Shad’s
head. Shad screamed with agony, as his brain was being torn to locate
forgotten memories. Then within a blink Shad remembered all, the eternal
life Shadowed state of mind promised him, the ritual he undertook to
become the demon’s servant, his entire plan, the time he was tripped by a
cat or rather betrayed by the demon and most of all the demon’s real name.

“You betrayed me … Balrog!” Shad yelled at the demon.

“Of course I did. You see I am a demon lord and you … are a pitiful
human. You really think I would waste my power at an insect like you
self?” Balrog said with most devious voice.

“You are a wimp not a lord!” Shad yelled, angrier than ever.

“Care to repeat that” Balrog hissed.

“You were defeated by a bug long time ago you sorry excuse for a
demon” Shad knew that even if he hadn’t said those things he would have
still been killed.

“That vampire overgrown organ only surprised attack me!” Balrog roared.

Something inside Balrog wakened up, the darkness around him vanished.
He seemed too lit up, like a light bulb when off then suddenly turned on.
Actually it was lava that seemed to fill up inside Balrog, making him glow
and fire burst out of his skin. This was a terrifying sight to behold, but
Shad only smiled and gave Balrog the “I’m not amused” facial expression.

“Your service is over” Balrog growled and let go of Shad.

It was a long way down, at the bottom was the still active lava. The lava
was actually really deep but Balrog seemed to be walking on top of it. On
the way down, Shad whispered something to himself, too low to be
heard. Around Shad came a dark aura. It seemed to consume him, just
then he fell to the lava and instantly sank into it. Balrog stared at him sink
into the lava and then he looked at Tina’s body.

“You are pretty much dead, but just for the fun of it I’m going to bring you along”

Balrog bent down, readying himself for a jump. Then with much noise he
jumped up, his wings sprang forth and flapped with no trouble at all.
Balrog flew high in the air, just above him appeared some kind of portal.
Balrog flew into it and vanished from Black Eden.





Dr.X was on the floor completely beaten up. He had no change of victory
after all, Boogieman stood in front of him, the white suit, ripped and burned.

“I killed those two girls and now I’m gonna kill you. After all this I’m going
to turn this place into nightmare paradise, completely free of all light”
Boogieman said, not really talking to Dr.X.

“Soon my backup power system should kick in, then this place will light up
and even the cluster soldiers should reactivate” Dr.X growled, not really
sure if it would happen at all.

Boogieman gave a low laughter then hissed at Dr.X:
“I am the master of darkness, I’m using my power to stop the power from
coming back” he raised his blade, ready to give Dr.X the final blow.

That is why it hasn’t activated Dr.X though.

He was too weak to move away, so he sat there ready to take the blow.
Everything seemed to slow down and hundreds of images burst into his
mind. Filling him up with long forgotten memories.
He saw his childhood, when he was raised all the way to when he created Bell.

Bell! Dr.X thought

Bell I am so sorry, all the things I forced you to go through and for what
… nothing, here I am to die and all I can think of is how I wasted my time.
I should have given you more love, like normal fathers. I swear if for
some reasons we both survive … We will start a new life. A happier one.


A tear came to Dr.X’s eye and he braced himself for the end. But just as
the blow was about to hit a bright white light mixed with amber color,
busted through the wall and hit Boogieman with full force: The impact
obliterated Boogieman’s shield and threw him nearly fifth teen meter
away, crashing into a wall and making a hole in it. Dr.X slowly looked at
his savior,

Bop!? He thought
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Postby Comic Kitten » Thu May 18, 2006 10:59 am

Woa! :ogle:

Please continue! I'll be waiting here at the edge of my seat. ^_^
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Postby Darkness_calls » Thu May 18, 2006 11:04 am

Thank you CK :)

I had it planned since the beginning to have Shadowed State of Mind as the Balrog. He was shocked when I asked to use him in my fic and I hope He'll be more shocked when he sees what he is lol


Now I'm currently trying to puzzle all my ideas together :P
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Postby Shadowed State of Mind » Thu May 18, 2006 2:59 pm

Wait a...I'M WHAT NOW?!?!?! :shock:

And I notice that you've been giving Bop more attention then Bean and Berry. They're not dead are they? (cause if they are......)
The Life and Times of Shad Staydamind PPG fic; finished. part 1/3
Dual Minds Think Alike PPGD fic, part 2/3; finished (trilogy is on an indefinite hiatus)
Hidden Angels Original, ongoing fiction. (also hiated. Stupid college!)
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Postby BG07 » Thu May 18, 2006 7:54 pm

Oh I'm loving your fic CK, very nice, things are really heating up, can't wait for you next update ^_^
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Postby Darkness_calls » Thu May 18, 2006 7:55 pm

Shadowed State of Mind wrote:Wait a...I'M WHAT NOW?!?!?! :shock:

And I notice that you've been giving Bop more attention then Bean and Berry. They're not dead are they?


Yes I was able to suprise you ^_^
NO they aren't dead ... only unconsious or knocked out :P
The attention thingie ... I randomly chose one creampuff to become "friends" woth Tina ... Bop was the chosen one ^_^

(cause if they are......)

Is that a threat lol
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Postby Darkness_calls » Fri May 19, 2006 10:47 am

BG07 wrote:Oh I'm loving your fic CK, very nice, things are really heating up, can't wait for you next update ^_^


Wrong fic my friend ;)
Note this update and the last one are "connected"

Next update:




Bop entered the room, it illuminated with bright light, which shone from
the armor Tina loaned her. Bop didn’t seem to walk, rather hover just
above the ground. If she would have feathery wings then she would look
like an angel.

“What the hell is this!?” Boogieman hissed while trying to stand up.

We didn’t have the change to stand up; because Bop thrust her hand
forwards and out of her open palm blasted forward an amber spearhead.
It soared through the air; white sparkles sprang from the spearhead. It
hit Boogieman right in the chest and forced him to the ground again.

“This is your end, king of scary things” Bop growled.

Dr.X sat there completely speechless. Boogieman had no idea what to do.
For the first time in his life, he was actually worried. Bop hovered higher
in the air, until she was able to look down on Boogieman. The air around
her seemed to be kind of blurry and sounds of energy distortions of some
sort filled the air. The bright light surrounding Bop lit up more than ever,
it changed colors, now it was amber colored. She held her hands over
herself and gathered all the energy she could muster. The armor she was
in began to crack; it wasn’t able to withstand such power, as Bop had
gathered. A wave rushed through Bop’s body, it tickled and somehow
made her feel … happy and with a yell of pure strength, she threw her
arms towards Boogieman. A giant amber beam of pure, untouched energy
shot from her hands, like a wild beast. It completely obliterated all in its way.

“It wasn’t supposed to end like this!” Boogieman screamed, just as the
beam hit him with full force.

The beam ventured through him like he wasn’t even there, he turned into
a shadow and with a yell of agony he vaporized into thin air. His pain
screams echoed through all Black Eden even after he vanished. The light
vanished, reviling a nearly bottomless pit where Boogieman once stood.
He was dead, not part of this world anymore. In the air hovered Bop,
completely naked, the armor had broken and vanished also. She hovered
there for a moment and then she fainted and fell down. Dr.X somehow
was able to muster enough strength to jump up and grab her. He took a
blanked, which for pure luck was in that room and enwrapped Bop in it.

That armor … if my guesses are correct, then it multiplies the wearer’s
strength but it wasn’t able to with stand Bop’s full power and broke
Dr.X wondered.

“*cough* so it is over?” Samantha asked while she entered the room,
only being able to stand because Bean and Berry were supporting her.

Dr.X hadn’t noticed that the dark light was gone and the normal light had
now returned. Deep within the base a large shadow seemed to vaporize,
reviling a machine. The machine was really the secondary power core for
the entire base. Now with that unfamiliar shadow gone, the machine
reactivated and returned power to the base once more.




Back in Megaville elementary.
The monster’s large weapon fell down, ready to cleave Bell into two
pieces. Bell didn’t move, not because she was injured, rather some
unknown power held her down. Scared for her life, she shivered and a
single word came to her head:

Daddy!

Just before the inevitable impact, she closed her eyes, tears running down
her cheek. Then a sound of something breaking, something, made out of
metal. Bell reopened her eyes; her first vision was of that monster
staring at his broken weapon. With great anger he turned around to face
… Bubbles!?

Bubbles was standing there, she had ripped her own shirt apart to tie up
her arm wound, it still bled but not nearly as much. Using the Null energy
reformer she created, she was able to form a shield around Bell. This
shocked Bell greatly, why would Bubbles help her?

<<<Why are you helping this creature? >>> The monster asked and pointed at Bell.

“Though she is my enemy, I still dislike your reason to kill her. Just
because she is of no use to you! That is the worst reason I’ve ever heard
*Bubbles went into fighting position* and I’ve heard all of them”

<<<Your interruption will cost you your life>>> the monster hissed.


Not long from Bubbles, Bell and the monster.
Buttercup kicked, Barasia’s used knee to deflect the kick. Blossom threw
series of punches, all blocked with ease, by Barasia’s right arm. Barasia
jumped up into the air and with darkish energy she banged back down,
causing an explosion. The explosion threw Blossom away but Buttercup
was able to withstand it. Buttercup used the opportunity and flung her leg
downwards; hitting Barasia’s calf and forcing her on her knees, but
Barasia punched sideways and hit Buttercup in the stomach, right where
the navel should have been. But of course the powerpuff girls don’t have
a navel, because they were created not born.




Four groups were flying towards Megaville elementary.
One of the groups were the Rowdyruff boys, the other ones were Jack and
Dexter (Dexter had a jetpack and held Jack), three American F-16
fighters and lastly the most famous hero group in the world, the Justice League.
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Postby Girguy » Fri May 19, 2006 5:12 pm

Wow!Good story!
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Postby Aeris » Sat May 20, 2006 6:21 am

Nice^^
Go on... :D
(Bop seems super strong... xD)
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Postby BG07 » Sat May 20, 2006 11:38 am

Bravo, good work DC :snoogins:
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Re: (Fanfic) "Leeching the worlds"

Postby Darkness_calls » Sat May 20, 2006 7:31 pm

I thank you all for the comments ^_^


(Bop seems super strong... xD)

she is strong ;) but thanks the the armor her strength is multiplied by 3 (now that is strong lol ... maybe too strong, because the armor couldn't handle it ;) )



I'm sorry to say that there will be no update today ... but it will be tomorrow ^_^

Instead here is an art I made of Tina in her Mark IV armor (not the armor Bop is in)

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Re: (Fanfic) "Leeching the worlds"

Postby Darkness_calls » Sun May 21, 2006 10:47 am

Nothing to say ... so ...

Next update:



Bubbles couldn’t do anything else then scream, as the monster charged
lightning fast at her. She panicked and therefore was to slow to react. It
took him two second to get to Bubbles. He threw her a swift punch, she
was quick enough to raise her hand, but it was completely futile as the
impact was powerful enough to ignore defense and throw her couple of
meters away. Before she landed, the monster was already there and
kicked her in the back as she flew towards him. She crashed down and
left a small crater. Bell stared at the fight completely puzzled.

Why did she save me? I’m her enemy! Bell though with a puzzled expression.

My father wanted me to destroy them, but … Her puzzled face
changed and was now filled with determination.

Forget him! I’m not allowing that monster to destroy her.

With those thoughts she stood up, not caring if she was only in her teddy
underwear. With all her speed, Bell blasted towards the monster.

Bubbles had hard time breathing; the monster stood before her and held
her down with his leg. The monster lifted his hand; he held his open palm
above Bubbles head. Slowly he made the palm form into a fist, as he did
that Bubbles could feel her Null energy reformer compressing and slowly
crunching her head.

Bubbles yelled in pain, but she noticed Bell suddenly appearing and
throwing a power punch at the monster. The punch missed because the
monster jumped away and landed not long away. Bell helped Bubbles to
stand up.

“Thanks” Bubbles said to Bell, as she helped her up.

“You saved me; it is only fair that I save you. Besides I don’t like that
monster” Bell smiled, she felt somehow … good inside, like this is
what she wanted to do.

Bubbles smiled back, and then they both went into their fighting positions,
facing the monster.

“Team work?” Bubbles asked Bell.

Bell glared at Bubbles, the emptiness in her eyes was gone. Bell felt all
warm inside and then she nodded at Bubbles.

“Team work”

But monster stared at them both and then out of nowhere he burst into laughter.

<<<You little beings really think you stand a chance against me!?>>>

Bell and Bubbles got even more focused.

<<<I’ve only been playing with you, here I’ll prove how much I like … playing>>>


The monster eyes turned bright yellow. Bell wasn’t able to move at all,
Bubbles lost all control of her arm, she raised the arm.

“What is going on!?” Bubbles yelled.

Then out of the blue, Bubbles spanked Bell once. They both got control
over their bodies again and both blushed a little. Clearly the monster had
more powers then they could stand against. Then they noticed that the
creature seemed to be staring into the air.

<<<Finally he is coming>>>


Not long from there …
Buttercup held her stomach; the punch had been a powerful one. Barasia
stood before her, smirking at the pain she had caused. Blossom came
from behind and kicked Barasia in the back, sending her flying. Barasia
stood up, she had her cannon raised and she shot at Buttercup, knowing
that Blossom was in a much better position to dodge it. But to Barasia’s
most annoyance, Blossom was able to grab Buttercup and flying away
from the blast. Buttercup had recovered from the punch and now flew for
herself. Blossom and Buttercup charged Barasia. Buttercup kicked
downwards aiming for Barasia’s head while Blossom tried to tackle her.

Barasia isn’t that easy. She jumped up and landed on top of Blossom,
forcing all the air out of her lungs and then Barasia’s nails lengthened,
forming five mysterious black blades and cutting deep wounds in
Buttercup’s leg as she tried to kick Barasia. With a yell of pain Buttercup
landed and held her leg, these dark nails seemed to make the pain worse
than it should be.

Barasia then sat down on Blossom and held both of Blossom’s arms with
her bladeless hand. Now Blossom was pinned down. Barasia seemed to be
enjoying this, she lowered her head and whispered into Blossom’s ear:

“You killed Bulldog”

She raised herself and used her dark blades to cut a hole into Blossom’s
school uniform, right where the heart is.

“I’m going to take your beating heart away”

Barasia raised her hand ready to stab Blossom. Blossom’s eyes widened
with terror, as she tried to struggle but Barasia had her pinned down. She
knew that her eye lasers couldn’t help her.

At this exact moment, Bop killed Boogieman.

There was some kind of screech and a shadow figure seemed to leave
Barasia’s body. Her dark blades vaporized with the departure of the
shadow figure. Most of her power, she had gained from Boogieman and
with his death, she lost her most of her powers.

“No!” Barasia yelled

Buttercup noticed this, she stood up (the pain in her leg wasn’t nearly as
much now) and she kicked Barasia, sending her crashing into a tree.
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Postby BG07 » Sun May 21, 2006 11:10 am

Barasia = is screwed , awesome I like the new update
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