I don't like their new attack... it looks like big trouble... aww poor Goliath... so much goodness... Great job DC

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Fighting and drama ... I need more comedy

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“I see you are as merciless as ever” Balrog growled, his best change to
destroy E-100 was dead, of course he didn’t know that leech’s can
regenerate themselves by giving up a random power they have stolen.

<<<They are worthless, so it does not matter and besides she was a threat>>>

Balrog and E-100 quickly charged at each other, dealing punches, kicks
and other kinds of attacks. Balrog’s furious claw made a dent into the
overly large hulk of E-100, while E-100 jumped up and tried roundhouse
kick Balrog in the head but Balrog lifted his hand in front of his head to
deflect the blow. As soon as E-100’s foot made contact with Balrog’s hand,
they both punched and their fists hit each other in the chest. Both of them
staggered backwards.

<<<Besides, it’s not like you would show mercy. I don’t even think you
know what that word means>>> the lord said with a low chuckle.

“For once you are right, that is why I’m going to kill you” Balrog hissed.

Again they rushed at each other, Balrog punched E-100 in the shoulder
and he got it paid back with a kick in the leg. This went on just like they
had rehearsed it many times. Each kick and punch seemed to do no
damage at all. Balrog every now and then spat fire or lava at E-100
though it seemed to do nothing at all.

After ten seconds they stood against each other again and their word
fencing continued like they had never stopped.

<<<Face it, you can’t win me>>>

“Ohhh… but I will”

Before he even finished speaking the last word, Balrog jumped at E-100.
Who was too surprised to react. With all his strength, Balrog thrust his fist
into E-100’s control room, luckily the leech was quick enough to raise his
hands to deflect most of the blow but the impact still made him fall
backwards.




Boomer was sitting on the ground not long from where E-100 had punched
Tina into the ground. The dust was clearing and he could see Tina lying in
the middle of the crater. His throat became unnaturally dry as he flew
down the crater and landed besides Tina. He didn’t know what to do, after
a while he put two of his finger on her neck to check the pulse. He looked
at Tina’s face with upmost sadness when he didn’t feel any pulse. She
was dead; there was no doubt about it.

Then out of nowhere he heard a loud yell, two yells to be more exact. It
was the yells of his two brothers and he recognized that kind of yell.
Boomer quickly flew up to see if his dreaded suspicions were correct.

“Damn morons!” Boomer whispered, as he saw them use the Forced power trick.

Last time they almost died from it and he cared too damn much to see
them kill themselves and … … Bubbles. He had to do something. For the
last time he looked over his shoulder at Tina, then he flew towards his
brother.




Butch yelled as he came at Bell, she was ready to deflect his attacks.
Butch flung his fist at Bell, but she easily deflected it with her arm. Soon
as Butch’s fist impacted into Bell’s hand, a small red and green electrical
surge moved from his fist into her arm. Bell screamed in agony as her
arm muscles blew up (not literally) and ceased to work. Then out of
nowhere Brick came to her side and kicked her in the stomach, which sent
her bouncing away. Brick and Butch nodded at each other and sprung
towards Bell, they were going to deal the last blows before they lost
control. On the way they heard a yell of utter anger and power.

Everything seemed to go slow-motion; Brick looked in the direction of the
yell, his eyes widened with terror when he saw Bubbles flying towards
him. Her usually cheering and jolly looks was gone, her eyes showed
thirst for bloodlust and her smile had nothing to do with happiness, rather
complete malice and a strange blue colored fog seemed to be entering
her body, moving through her clothes and skin.

Is that … Bubbles? Brick though as he stared at the blood thirsty fighter charging at him.

That though ended quickly, as total agony took its place. Bubbles kicked
him in the side and sent him flying to Butch, that impact made the
electrical sparkles rip through their skin and tear their clothes up. They
both landed forcefully on the ground, they were able to sit up but nothing
more. Bubbles landed few meters away from them. She held her arm
sideways as an energy sphere of bright blue glowing brilliance formed in
her grasp.

“And now … you two will pay” She said with a serious
She moved her body like she was going to throw a baseball.

“And that payment is your life!” She yelled and began to throw the sphere.

“Bubbles don’t!” Yelled Boomer, as he suddenly landed in front of her.
Bubbles didn’t throw the sphere but held it in her hand.

“And why shouldn’t I!?” Bubbles growled.
She began to walk slowly towards Boomer.

“Because they will die if you do” Boomer slowly told her, he tried as he
could not to shake under her gaze.

Bubbles grabbed his neck with her other hand, hence the one not holding
the sphere, moved his head until it was an inch from her own and hissed at him:

“Why should I care, they tried to kill us. You are the same as them you
don’t care about us at all, I should just…” She stopped talking as Boomer
quickly moved his head forward and kissed Bubbles on the lips.

Butch nearly fainted, Brick always had his suspicions about Boomer and
Bell tried as she could not too giggle. Bubbles was more shocked than the
rest of them, slowly the sphere vanished in her hand and her bloodthirsty
eyes changed back to the old happy self. She closed her eyes and
enjoyed the kiss.

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Great update DC. Finally Boomer gets lucky.

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Aww... Bubbles and Boomer is teh makin out... how cute, Great update DC I totally love your story

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yay, everyones happy...except for bell....and goliath....nevermind

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Awwww Bubbles^^

How did she turned on the berserk mode on, though? xD

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I didn't get it either...

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Well the misterious blue fog was her power ... ... yes she got it back and went Bubblevisious (a great episode of Bubbles going berzerk). If you haven't seen that episode then I guess that is the reason you didn't understand


Sorry no chapters until tonight (after work)
I've been too busy working on this picture.
I know there is no backround ... I gonna make it later (when I'm good enough at it).


This is one of my first tryouts in darkening. This is from a drawn picture and the lines were enchanced through the Art line tool in photoshop. I used "motion blur" on the ball and Buttercup's hand. I know my positionings aren't perfect ... but hey I'm not a pro

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nice drawing DC

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It is a nice drawing though Buttercup could look more you know...

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Lily: few people here are worthy of my rape

...Angryer/toughter/More-into-the-game

Yeah. I realised it after I art lined it all ...
When I drew her she was supoased (I can't write this damn word) to have the "this is too easy" look

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Great story, darkness!

Thank you all for the comments.
I'm SOOOOO sorry for being so slow with this update but work has been a total killer!
The recent updates lack comedy, so I just had to put some (sorry Shad)

Here is the next update:


“Somebody help!” Yelled Dexter, as he and Jack made their way inside the hospital.

A stunning woman, dressed in light blue clothes came to them; her
beaming eyes were shocked to see the damaged girls in their grasp.

“What happened?” She asked. But before they could answer she said again:
“It doesn’t matter, wait here I’ll call for more doctors” And with those
words she skipped away as quickly as she could.

Dexter could hear her yells, whisperings of other peoples and yelps of
agony from other damaged patients. He didn’t care; his eyes were fixed
on Blossom which lay in his grasp. She had curled around him, like a
daughter would do to its father, her chest moved slowly up and down.
Dexter stared at her face, it was so pretty though damaged. Her smooth
skin, soft lips and perfect hair failed in comparison to her lively, happy,
cheerful and smart eyes, oh how he wished to see her eyes again. He
wouldn’t be able to bear her death. When his sister died, his heart broke
and then he met Blossom, the times he had spent with her had slowly
fixed his broken heart. If she would die now then his almost fixed heart
would defiantly brake down again and this time permanently.

“Boy … she will need doctor’s care now” said a compassionate female voice.

Dexter snapped from his trance and looked at the owner of the voice. It
was the woman; behind her were three other similar dressed doctors.
They had three movable beds.

“Why three?” asked Dexter, as he placed Blossom on one of the beds.

“One for you silly, those burn wounds are pretty serious” she pointed out.

Blossom, Buttercup and Dexter were moved into separate rooms, waiting to be healed.




The firefighters finally dared to go around the elementary, in hope to put
out the flame in the school, surrounding area and the forest. Though it
would most likely be too late to save the forest. The poisonous smoke was
drifting with the wind, moving deeper into the city. Soon it would begin to
rain and the rain will be sour.




Dr.X hid behind a dumpster. He couldn’t afford being seen, especially with
the justice hooligans around.

Bell, I hope you are alright. I promised that we would have a better life
if we both would survive this … And I intent to keep my promise. Please be alright!




In a whole other dimension were Bean and Berry flying around. They
have been flying for quite awhile. Still they haven’t found Shad.

“Where can daddy Shaddy be?” Asked Bean, her voice echoed of sadness.

“I … don’t know …” Berry whispered, she was barely understandable from endless sobbing.


Bop woke up.
“Daddy…?”

She looked around, her eyes trying to get used to the bright lights.
“Daddy…?” She asked again.

“I’m afraid he isn’t here” Came a metallic voice.

Bop tried to see who it was, but her vision was way too blurry.
“Where … is he?” She whispered.

“No one knows … he just vanished”
There was some silence; it was broken by the metallic voice again:
“Your sisters are looking for him as we speak”

“What!” Bop yelled.
Why didn’t they wake me? She wondered and threw her duvet off herself.

“Ehem… there are fresh clothes on the table” Said the metallic voice, Bop
could see the blurry being pointing at something on a table.

Bop tried to stagger towards the table but she was too confused. She fell
on the ground. A swift pain, when she hit the ground, made her vision
stop being so blurry. She stood up and noticed clothes on the table, it was
a white dress, like the one Bell has and pink undergarment. Wait a sec…
A feeling crept up in her mind; slowly she looked down and saw that she
had no clothes on. She yelped and jumped behind the table. Once there
she took a shoe and threw it at the large metallic creature. It hit him
square in the face with such a force that he fell down backwards. Quicker
than the eye he stood back up.

“What was that for!?” The machine growled

“You’re looking at me naked!” Bop yelled.

Bop had no idea that the clusters weren’t programmed to care about such
unimportant things.

“What is wrong with that?” Asked the cluster trooper.

There was some silence, before Bop threw another shoe into his face and yelled:
“PERVERT!”

“That’s it!” roared the insect machine, as he stood up. When up he ran
towards Bop, whom yelped and ran outside the room.




Boomer and Bubbles finally drew their head from each other, therefore
ending the rather long kiss. They stared in the eyes of each other, then
Boomer took a deep breath, this was the right time. In the middle of all
this chaos, he was actually going to admit his love. After all this time and
all their fighting, he had always secretly loved her.

“Bubbles… I… I…”

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Bout time you update So many things going on in so many places, I can't wait to see what happens next.

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Great update DC and i also cannot wait to see what happens next

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nice update really funny

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Casualities!
Ehm, there really isn't much left ...

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Dr.X finally was able to get to the school entrance; he had to sneak
around because of the firefighters. The school was on fire, that made Dr.X
quite nervous, what if Bell was fighting inside the school.

No, she wouldn’t fight in such deadly environment; She is probably behind the school He thought.




Balrog and E-100 parted once more; this battle was getting too repetitive.
Balrog gathered lava in his mouth, he shaped the lava into a sphere and
then with a trick of his, the lava hardened until it was like a rock. He took
a deep breath and with all his might he spat the flaming rock at E-100, but
E-100 jumped backwards and kicked the flaming meteoroid into the air.
Balrog used the opportunity and charged at E-100, whom had just
regained foothold after jumping backwards before. Balrog crashed into
E-100 and fell him to the ground, but Balrog fell down with him. The
ground shook as E-100 fell on it, but just as he had landed he put his knee
in front of him. Balrog landed harshly on the knee, E-100 kicked and sent
Balrog flying into the burning forest. Hundreds of flaming trees broke
from the impact of the giant monster.




Bones knitted together, blood gathered, ripped skin became whole again
and other wounds quickly vanished. Tina opened her eyes, finally she
had regenerated. She was still pretty weak from the force of the punch.

I … must hurry
Tina though, as she crawled out of the large crater.




Commander Destruction and what was left of the Cluster army came back
to Black Eden, their first sight was Bop running around naked while one
of their own was running after her and cursing her for hurting him.

Destruction heard someone say behind him:
“At least they are having fun”

With those words, everyone began to laugh. Destruction chuckled a little,
but soon stopped when he reminded himself that he needed to contact
Queen Vexus. He didn’t look forward to it, the queen could sometimes be
… unfair. Destruction made his way from the laughing group. Bop had
stopped running and was trying to cover herself with whatever she found
(she still didn’t get the idea that the cluster trooper do not care about
nudity) and the insect machine following her had also stopped, he didn’t
like to be laughed at.

There was a low hiss when the door in the meeting door opened up.
Destruction walked long slow steps, as he made his way towards the
holographic projector. Small buttons were pressed and he waited, then
with a beep. A downsized image of his queen, Vexus, appeared.

“Speak!” She commanded.

Destruction sighted and told her about their attack. He knew she wouldn’t
become happy at all.




The flaming rock, which was kicked by E-100 into the air, was now moving
downwards. Its direction was now where Bell, Bubbles, Boomer, Brick
and Butch were.




Boomer took a deep breath, everyone knew what he was about to say.
Bell thought it was abnormally cute, she was also sad because it reminded
her of Mandark. Butch was about to puke and Brick was red with anger.

How dares he, did he forget that they killed us. Doesn’t he care at all! Brick though.

“I… do… l… lo…” Boomer stammered, he blushed as he tried to speak.

A horrible noise came from the sky; it was like a sixth sense telling him
that death was lurking nearby. Everything went slow-motion, as he looked
into the sky and saw death approaching. The flaming sphere came down
upon them with obnoxious speed. He wouldn’t be able to escape nor would
Bubbles.

“Bubbles…” Boomer said, suddenly serious.

Bubbles looked at him instead of the flaming rock; she also knew that
they couldn’t escape it.

“I… I love you” Boomer whispered.

Tears came to Bubbles eyes, she grabbed Boomer’s collar and kissed him
on the mouth.

NOOO! Yelled Bell, Brick and even Butch.

BOOM!
The horrible impact made a large crack into the earth. The explosion sent
Bell, Brick and Butch tumbling away. When the smoke, which came with
the explosion, cleared there was nothing left. There was a giant
bottomless crack where it impacted, but Bubbles and Boomer where
nowhere to be found.




Tina stood on the ground and looked around, the utter destruction which
has been caused. She took a deep breath and yelled:

“E-99. Border action 4-6-3. Closer 44. Voice control on. Self-destruct on
my command!”

<<<DON’T DO IT!>>> yelled the leech lord when he realized what was going on.

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Bubbles!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You horrible man, DC!

(T_T)

Where is Bubbles? Where is she?

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Wow...that was really shocking and surprising dude!
A little to much drama for my tastes, but generally really great!

Finally! The end is so close I can taste it! Please... don't stop... I want more!

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Great update DC.

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Er...okay. I haven't quite finished reading most of the chapters I missed yet, but that women who's with Dexter inside the hospital. Does that happen to be who I think she is?

And don't be sorry. If the quiz I held back in my thread didn't tip you off, this will. Bop isn't THAT shy about nudity. At least...not when she's with Shad, who's pretty much the opposite.

Hmm, probably said too much.

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poor Bubbles and Boomer


owell there souls will be togther in the after life


great story keep it up

emperor=soul;
Thanks for taking the time to read my fic

Cadaverous;
Its not called Eden for no reasons

Shadowed State of Mind;
I didn't think about it really, but sure the Doctor/nurse is Claire

dark psyghost;
Thanks

BG07;
I've been tasting it for a long time

Forse the Deathmaster;
Yeah, I'm trying to mix fighting and drama

Aeris;
Horrible...and in evil? ... If so then it is only a compliment

This is the end of this chapter. Only one "end" chapter left then the story is finished

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In Megaville’s hospital, in a waiting room sat Jack. He was aching with
worries, everything has gone wrong. Powers totally out of his control
taken over, he felt weaker than ever. The waiting room was plain white
like most rooms in the hospital, there were lots of chairs, on a table
nearby were stacks of newspapers and magazines. Jack looked around;
he was the only one in this waiting room. He wondered if those two
monstrosities could be stopped at all, his sword would be able to cut
through them, but he wasn’t nearly strong to make the sword cut through.
He remembered the time he had to battle robots with extreme power,
these particular robots were mixture of metal and liquid steel. Making his
sword completely useless he though at that time, but a man told him that
his sword could cut through everything if only the user had the strength to
follow through the attack. This mysterious man made a robotic arm for
Jack, which gave him the necessary strength boost to obliterate the
robots. Jack sighed; all these memories reminded him of his original task.
Defeat Aku and go back home, he had defeated Aku but he wasn’t able
to go entirely home, instead he landed in this era. Jack though about that
for a while, in the end he came to the conclusion that he was actually …
happy here.

“Mr. Jack” Said a nurse, which came suddenly in front of him and ripped
him out of his thoughts.

“Please just call me Jack” He said embarrassed.

“Alright, Jack, I’m just here to tell you that the operations were
successful. They are all fine now”

Jack shook with happiness; he stood up and hugged the nurse. She was a
little startled and small tinge of red formed on her cheeks.

“These are excellent news indeed” Jack said happily.

“Yes. Just make sure that they rest for two months at least”

“Even Dexter?” Jack heard himself ask.

“Especially him, he was so badly burned that we might have needed to
remove his hands. But we were able to use the skin from a donor. He is
fine but must not move his arms for a long time”

“I’ll make sure they will rest… May I go see them?”

“Yes just go to Recovery Room 4, they are all three there”
With those words Jack walked, fast, towards the recovery room.




Tina lifted her hand, like a commander whom is about to give an order.
She had come to the conclusion that this must be the best way.

<<<You will die also! >>> Yelled the lord with his ear piercing voice.

“That…” Tina whispered to her self, but then she raised her head and
stared into the sky.

The black sky is ruining the perfect peaceful clouds Though Tina.


She now glared at E-100 and yelled.
“That … is a worthy sacrifice!” Her voice boomed over the whole area.

She pointed her arm towards E-100.
“E-99! ...”

<<<NOOO! >>>

“…Obliterate!”

Inside E-100, where the chaos emeralds were stored, came a horrific
explosion, it ripped through metal, control panels and screens like a knife
through paper. The leech put up his shield to defend himself from the
explosion. His eyes widened with terror when he saw… the chaos
emeralds floating in front of him, small cracks were on them, they shook
and slowly their color changed to white.

<<<Chaos… Control>>> the leech thought out loud.

From the outside, E-100 seemed to shake and his color change to bright
white. Small explosions ripped through his metal alloy here and there.
Balrog stepped back, he knew very well about the chaos control and he
did not wish to be destroyed by it. He swung his hand and a dark purple
portal appeared behind him.

<<<NO you won’t! >>> yelled the leech lord and with all the remaining
control he had over E-100, he grabbed both of Balrog’s hands.

<<<You will die here with me>>>

Balrog tried to struggle but with complete failure, E-100 tried to drag him
from the portal, which seemed to be sucking Balrog in. The leech lord
had no idea the portal strength was so powerful, it pulled in Balrog, E-100
and the lord. Balrog screamed when he realized what would happen. They
all were sucked in and the portal closed after them. Inside the
fast-motional purple portal, the leech lord and Balrog stared with furious
hatred at each other. Then the chaos emeralds exploded. This portal
world shone with white brilliance, E-100, the lord and Balrog were ripped
into billions of pieces, slaying them instantly. The portal couldn’t handle
this wide burst of superior energy, it collapsed and tore itself into
nothingness.




A drop fell down from the sky; it hit Tina on the nose.
So it’s over? She thought

Then the sky poured rain all over the place. Tina chuckled; she closed her
eyes and made herself ready for the inevitable. Her heart suddenly
pumped hardly.

This is it… She thought and smiled.

Splat, the leech monster inside of her exploded, the pressure ripped
through her chest, her tongue exploded in the same way. Her eyes
shrank, and then she fell backwards. Her life force was no more and her
heart stopped beating, but she was still smiling. Lot of differently colored
fogs came out of her body, the fogs moved up to the sky.

She lost all her powers … but one… her first drained power.




Brick and Butch were completely speechless; they just stared down the
endless hole. Their brother was dead, Boomer saved them from Bubbles
and now they were both dead. Tears began to fall from Brick and even
Butch. On the other side of the crack was Bell, crying her eyes out, her
only friend died, Bubbles had saved her from the two boys and now she
was dead. The world was so unfair.

“Bell…” Came a soft voice behind her.

Bell recognized her father’s voice. Quickly she jumped at him and buried
her face into his muscular stomach and kept on crying. Dr.X placed his
hand around Bell and hugged her tightly. They both vanished in white light.

Brick and Butch were still staring down the pit less hole. Brick slowly
moved his hand towards his chest. Butch noticed what his brother was
doing and did the same. They both ripped off the RR sign off their
uniforms.

“Sorry Brisbane but the RowdyRuffs are no more” said Brick and threw
the ripped off sign down the hole. Butch did the same and they both flew away.




In the sky was a cloaked craft, it hovered over the leftovers of the school
yard, three small spider like machines came from an opening of the craft.
The machines hovered over the field. One picked up Tina’s remains and
flew with her into the ship. The two other machines picked up Barasia and
Bulldog (all the pieces of them) and flew with them into the ship. Lastly
came Goliath out of the ship, He held an iron box; he firmly placed the
box in the most whole part of the yard. Inside the box was a CD, which
held the truth about what happened here. That video would soon become
the most watched video in the world.

The craft flew away and vanished in the black raining clouds.


End of chapter 17

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