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Postby BG07 » Mon Jun 05, 2006 7:24 pm

Of course... they need their arses kicked :P
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Postby dark psyghost » Mon Jun 05, 2006 7:25 pm

Great update DC
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Postby Aeris » Tue Jun 06, 2006 2:18 am

Where were you DC? :'(

Anyway, good update^^

Why is everyone getting wounded in your fanfic? Be more peaceful, damn it! xD
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Re: (Fanfic) "Leeching the worlds"

Postby Darkness_calls » Tue Jun 06, 2006 11:23 am

I feel so happy
why?
Because I was gone for a weekend and LOTs of people have asked me where I was (talk about being welcomed) lol

I thank for the comments ^_^

And Aeris ... there shall be no peace ;)


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Chapter 16
“The fire”

Boom!
The missile exploded in the air. Bubbles and Bell stared at the scene, and
then in the air formed a portal. Balrog began to step out. Bell stared at
Balrog, her father had told her of a monster which lived inside earth’s
core. She had only thought of it as a fairytale, but there he stood like an
idol of terror.

<<< Finally … I was getting bored >>> the monster yelled, with his piercing voice.

Bubbles grabbed Bell and told her with a commanding voice:
“This has gotten past us, but I have an idea. Follow me”

She flew towards the school and for some time Bell just stared at Balrog
and the monster talk to each other, then she flew after Bubbles.

This has gotten out of hand, oh daddy where are you? Bell thought

They opened the school door, nobody was inside. Everyone had fled
already. The once full of life entrance corridor was now like a ghost zone,
books and papers lay on the floor and the wind (which came when they
opened the door) blew the papers around. Many lockers were open and
tables were turned. Bubbles ran around, not knowing for sure where she
was going and Bell just followed her.

This actually looks like a fun place.
Bell though as they passed many rooms, inside every room was different
posters on the walls, the color scheme was different and the blackboard
had many different things written on it.

If I would have had a normal life, then I would have enjoyed being a student here.

Bell couldn’t stop thinking about it. The idea of normal life had always
been in her mind. Friends, fun, studying, school and …

…Love
This though reminded Bell of Mandark. She became really sad and
stopped thinking about having a normal life. She was made for the
purpose helping her father take over earth and she knew he didn’t love
her that way, but that was wrong. Dr.X always had loved her like a
normal daughter, but he had gotten too passionate of ruling earth and that
made him forget the most important thing that his daughter needed.

Bubbles suddenly stopped and that made Bell bump into her. They fell on
the ground with a loud bump noise.

“I’m sorry” Bell quickly said and stood up, quite embarrassed.

“It’s ok, I always forgive my friends” Bubbles smiled and stood up.

Did she just call me … her friend?

“Are you alright?” Bubbles asked.

“I’m fine, thank you” Bell replied with a sobbing voice and rubbed her eye.

“I just have something in my eye” she continued, not wanting her new
and only human friend to think she was a crybaby.

Bubbles smiled and opened up the door she had stopped by. A sign on the
door said simply “GYM”. They went inside and walked along the corridor.
After few seconds Bubbles entered another room. There was a picture of
a girl on the door. When inside Bell saw for the first time how a women
locker room looks like. There where showers, lockers, benches, mirrors
and everything she had read about (Dr.X gave her a teenager book once
to practice reading).

Bubbles flew to one locker and opened it up, inside were lot of stuff.
Bubbles took out a school uniform, an exact copy of her own and handed
it to Bell.

“For me?” Bell asked surprised.

“Of course, we can’t have you fighting in your underwear” Bubbles giggled.

Bell blushed a little; her white dress was so light that she often forgot that
she was wearing it. Bell thanked Bubbles and dressed. The uniform was a
perfect match. That is because they are both powerpuffs in a way, so
naturally they are pretty much alike.

Bubbles told Bell to follow her once again. They flew once more, now a
little faster. The air had begun to form a thick black smoke. Then finally
they were at one of the largest room in the school, the library.

“What … are we doing here?” Bell asked.

“I’m using Dexter’s secret laboratory”

Bell became sad again, the name Dexter reminded her of Mandark.
“It isn’t much of a secret if you know about it” Bell whispered with a
saddened tone, Bubbles was too busy looking for the right book to notice
her tone.

“Well after Tina saved my life…”

Tina saved … your life? Bell though in suprise.

“… I became much smarter for some reasons, I should have died but I
didn’t thanks to her”

“What did she …” Bell began but stopped when lava suddenly ate itself
through the roof and hit a book shelf, making all the books light up in fire.

Bubbles stared at the fire and then began to search faster.
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Postby BG07 » Tue Jun 06, 2006 11:30 am

Great update DC, bubbles better hurry her ass off or she is teh toast!
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Postby dark psyghost » Tue Jun 06, 2006 1:21 pm

Great update DC.
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Re: (Fanfic) "Leeching the worlds"

Postby Cadaverous » Wed Jun 07, 2006 8:34 pm

I just read the entire story whooo!!! It's awesomely cool
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Re: (Fanfic) "Leeching the worlds"

Postby Aeris » Thu Jun 08, 2006 2:18 am

And Aeris ... there shall be no peace Wink


You evil people! Brrr...

Poor Bell is wondering about her life. :D
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Re: (Fanfic) "Leeching the worlds"

Postby Darkness_calls » Thu Jun 08, 2006 9:33 am

Thanks guys and girl for the comments.
I'm honored that you took the time to read my whole fic Cadaverous, thank you.
Now I will finish this short side chapter


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“Bubbles, forget about the lab. The place is falling apart!” Yelled Bell, but
her yelling was drowned by a big wooden bookshelf falling down right
behind Bell.

Bell jumped up when it landed behind her with a booming sound. The
flames, which were engulfing the bookshelf, stretched out like they were
trying to grab Bell. She slowly backed away from the flames. This was
almost the first time for Bell to witness real fire; it somehow fascinated
and scared her at the same time.

“I found it!” Bubbles called somewhere behind her.

Bell turned around but couldn’t find Bubbles, the fire disturbed the air and
the black smoke was too thick.

“Bubbles where are you!?”

“I’m not sure…” was Bubbles answer.

“Ohhh… that’s just great. Hey Bubbles I’m going to blow this smoke away!”

“No Don’t!” Bubbles yelled, but she was too late.

Bell took a deep breath and as she did that, a lot of the poisonous black
smoke traveled down her throat. Bell fell down on the knees and started
coughing like crazy. Her vision began to blur and she felt weak. She
thought that the flames and the heat were the most dangerous in a fire,
but now she realized that it was this black smoke. It was poisonous and
she really couldn’t get clean air after inhaling so much of the smoke. She
crawled on the floor, trying to cough all the poisonous smoke.

She could feel the fire gaining on her, then out of the smoke she noticed
Bubbles. Bubbles had a gas mask on; Bubbles bent down to Bell and
placed the gas mask on her. Bell could breathe the smoke out and get
clean air. But how was that possible when she had no air tank on herself
to get the clean air.

“It is a wonderful invention of Dexter” Bubbles told Bell, like she had read her mind.

Bubbles helped Bell to stand up then she supported Bell. They moved
around, Bubbles looked behind them where the fire had grown restless.
They moved faster and then finally they came to an opening.

“Is this *cough* his lab?” Asked Bell.

“Yes, this is it”

They both walked down the staircase. Bubbles pressed a button and the
fake bookshelf closed behind them. There weren’t much light in the
corridor they now stood in, but there were many doors. Bell was able to
stand on her own now.

“Bell, to save time I think it is best to split up, you check the doors on the
left side and I’ll check on the right side”

“But what are we looking for?”

“It is a headband, it looks like a normal red headband and is probably
defended so you’ll notice it right away” Bubbles talked really fast.

And with those words, they split up. They opened up every door they
could. Inside were room filled with gadgets, some were empty, some
were filled with mechanical garbage and others seemed to be workplaces.
Then finally Bubbles found the right door, inside was nothing at all but a
small flying platform with the red headband on it. A little note was besides
the headband.

“Bell I found it!” Bubbles called and flew to the platform.

Out of curiosity she picked up the note. At that time Bell flew at her side.
On the note stood; “Use for gymnastic exams later this year”

“What is it?” Asked Bell.

“I once had a chat with Dexter about a machine which would make one’s
physical stats grow and he told me about this machine he was building”

Bubbles turned to Bell.
“I think it will fit you perfectly”

“What, me, why?” Bell said really quickly.

“It is better to make you more powerful, that way you will be able to kick
some asses, besides I have my weapon” Bubbles winked and knocked
lightly on the machine, which was still firmly placed on her head. Bell
though about it for a moment, then she looked at Bubbles and nodded.
Bubbles placed the headband on Bell.

“Now let’s get the hell out of here” Bubbles said when she noticed the
smoke entering the corridor, they were in.

Bell flew into the air, breaking the ceiling and she didn’t stop there,
instead she moved upwards until she was outside. Bubbles stared for few
seconds, the strength Bell now had made her … well impressed and then
Bubbles flew after Bell. Outside they could see the damage, after those
two monsters. The forest was bathed in flames and so was the school.

“See there!” Bell yelled and pointed.

They could see the Brick and Butch standing over the beaten bodies of
Dexter, Blossom and Buttercup. In complete anger Bubbles flew down
there, Bell decided to follow her. She didn’t want her only human friend to
fight alone.


“Now where the hell is Boomer and Bubbles?” Said Butch and looked around.

“I don’t know about Boomer but I’m right here”

Brick and Butch turned around. Not far from them, stood Bubbles and
Bell. Behind them was the school, black smoke rose from it. The
elementary was completely bathed in fire.


End of chapter 16
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Postby dark psyghost » Thu Jun 08, 2006 9:40 am

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Postby Darkness_calls » Thu Jun 08, 2006 9:59 am

I'm rather proud of this :P

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Postby BG07 » Thu Jun 08, 2006 10:03 am

O.O wow...
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Postby dark psyghost » Thu Jun 08, 2006 10:03 am

that are a lot of words and pages good work DC
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Postby Aeris » Thu Jun 08, 2006 10:05 am

No! The school is on fire!
How are children going to study? xD
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Postby Darkness_calls » Thu Jun 08, 2006 10:07 am

Aeris wrote:No! The school is on fire!
How are children going to study? xD


I'm pretty sure most of the children are dancing out of happyness lol
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Re: (Fanfic) "Leeching the worlds"

Postby Cadaverous » Thu Jun 08, 2006 4:20 pm

....wait bubbles got her powers back right? thats one thing thats confusing me, other than that great up date
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Postby Darkness_calls » Thu Jun 08, 2006 7:00 pm

No Bubbles didn't get her powers back. In the Amy chapter, Tina gave her Tails powers (uber smart). That is why I'm not having her as the tipical blond she is ;)
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Re: (Fanfic) "Leeching the worlds"

Postby Cadaverous » Thu Jun 08, 2006 8:13 pm

so when she dies she has to give up one set of powers?
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Postby Darkness_calls » Thu Jun 08, 2006 8:19 pm

Yes. That is the weakness of the leeches.
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Re: (Fanfic) "Leeching the worlds"

Postby Cadaverous » Thu Jun 08, 2006 8:27 pm

they scare me
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Postby APE » Fri Jun 09, 2006 9:16 am

Darkness_calls wrote:Yes. That is the weakness of the leeches.
so the leech-master would have to die like a million times?
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Postby Aeris » Fri Jun 09, 2006 9:47 am

Damn! And the powers are just given back randomly? xD

*Imagining super-man with Megaman's power* xD
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Postby APE » Fri Jun 09, 2006 9:53 am

nah, Amy said that Tails was dead, and boomer got exactly his powers back, what are the chances...
i think that only the powers of the dead-ones are randomly spread out...
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Postby Aeris » Fri Jun 09, 2006 11:09 am

Imagine all are dead but one... O.o
When the leech king dies... Wohooo. A new uber super hero/vilain is born xD
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Re: (Fanfic) "Leeching the worlds"

Postby Cadaverous » Fri Jun 09, 2006 3:00 pm

yo DC check your mail
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