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Postby miss redhead » Sun May 21, 2006 11:10 am

It's good, I like it ^_^.
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Postby Darkness_calls » Sun May 21, 2006 11:45 am

I thank you two for you kind words ^_^
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Postby Aeris » Sun May 21, 2006 2:02 pm

You evil people (T_T)
Stop killing your characters! Damn! Darkness you mean writer! xD
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Postby confused » Sun May 21, 2006 2:37 pm

I LOVE IT! But I still don't know why did Barasia and Bulldog fight the Powerpuffs...oh well! *cheers*
Urgh, it's too dark around here...
*puts on glasses*
Ah, that's better!
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Postby Darkness_calls » Sun May 21, 2006 8:48 pm

You evil people (T_T)
Stop killing your characters! Damn! Darkness you mean writer! xD

lol


confused wrote:I LOVE IT! But I still don't know why did Barasia and Bulldog fight the Powerpuffs...oh well! *cheers*


If you read the part where Barasia went to the "dark world" to "resurect" Boogieman. There came the reason why she fought them (Bulldog is just with her). Boogieman lost thanks to the powerpuff girls. He made a deal with Barasia. He would share enough power with her, so she could destroy the ones whom destroyed her and in return she would kill the powerpuffs. Naturally he himself can't survive in sunlight, that is why he wanted Barasia to do it ;)


I hope this made sense and explaned something ^_^

And thank you both for the comments :)
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Postby Aeris » Mon May 22, 2006 11:14 am

Wait... Is Barasia an original character from someone's fanfic or...?
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Postby Darkness_calls » Mon May 22, 2006 12:36 pm

Aeris wrote:Wait... Is Barasia an original character from someone's fanfic or...?


Yes, like once credited. She is from Griddles Fanfic.
I was rather idealess here so this update probably won't be good ...

Next update:



In a world totally out of time, flew Balrog. In his hand he held Tina. She
still hadn’t regenerated like a leech should, like usual she lost a power
with her death but she didn’t regenerate. Was there something that
Boogieman did?

Time progressed much faster than normally in this dimension. All around
Balrog and Tina were strange colored clouds, exploding or reforming.
Electricity seemed to run wild. Balrog had been flying for some time;
unknown to him Boogieman had just died. Something was happening with
Tina’s wound; pitch black larvas of some sort seemed to be crawling out
of her wound. When out they vaporized, Boogieman really did something,
those dark creatures, seemed to be holding the wound open and know
that they are gone (because like stated, Boogieman had just died). Like
described before, this place Balrog and Tina are in, moves a lot faster in
time, so Tina’s wound almost instantly closed up and slowly she regained
consciousness.




In Megaville town center flew three F-16 airplanes. The planes had the
American flag on the side. They flew in a triangle formation.

“This is Storm one, has target been acquired? Over” said the pilot of the
front most plane into the com-link.

“This is Cloud center, positive; a monster of some sort is fighting some girls. Over”

“GIRLS!?” yelled the pilot in the right airplane.

“Karl, don’t you read the news?” said the pilot in the left plane.

“Guys keep this professional!” Hissed the pilot in the front airplane.

“This is Cloud center, you have permission to engage. Over”

“Copy that, Storm one over”

The pilot, flying the middle airplane, reached for a handle. He grabbed it
and turned it right. A little light flashed, then he opened up a safety
holster, reviling am metal pin. The pilot moved the pin up and a red light
flashed besides a plate, which stood: “missile 1”

“Target acquired, missile armed, ready to fire”
The pilot grabbed his handle and pushed an obvious red button on it.
“Storm one, thunder two FIRE!”

A missile was blasted towards Megaville Elementary, aimed at the monster.




Back in Black Eden…
“Bop … are you alright?” Dr.X whispered.

“So … tired …” She slowly answered with her eyes closed.

Slowly the entire base came back to life. Even the cluster soldiers stirred,
like they have just waked up … which they technically did. Even
Samantha, Bean and Berry woke up. Whatever Boogieman did was now
gone. Dr.X walked quickly towards the main computer room. On the way
he noticed the cluster member looking around really confused, the engine
rooms began to roar again. Destruction felt in his mechanical gut that
something was wrong, he walked out of the room he had been currently
located and noticed Dr.X.

“Dr.X what happened!?” Destruction asked, quite annoyed.

“No time to explain. Get your best soldiers and meet me in the computer
room” Dr.X ordered.

For awhile they stared at each other. Then Destruction walked away.




Again, back at Megaville…
Barasia stood up; raising herself from the broken tree she had crashed
into. Her pretty face deformed with anger. She had those killing looks in
her eyes. She gave a battle scream and rushed towards Buttercup. She
punched towards Buttercup, barely missing. Buttercup kicked with her
knee, as soon as Barasia missed, upwards and hit her in the chest.
Sending Barasia upwards, but Buttercup punched downwards, hitting
Barasia in the spine and sending her down again. Barasia didn’t stay on
the ground for long, she span around, thrusting her feet into Buttercup’s
face. Buttercup yelled in pain as she fell backwards, Barasia jumped up
and landed on her feet. Out of Barasia’s arm came the cannon again, this
time it would hit Buttercup with full force. In her rage, Barasia forgot all
about Blossom and she didn’t realize until her arm was suddenly frozen.
Barasia turned around to face Blossom, but Buttercup kicked with all her
strength into Barasia’s calves and with a yell of agony she fell on her
knees, something was broken. Blossom used as much freezing power as
she could and froze Barasia completely. Knowing that this wouldn’t last
for long, Buttercup quickly moved beside Blossom. They both gathered as
much power as they could; they aimed at Barasia and shot all their
power towards her. Their green and pink beams mixed together, forming
a dark (almost black) green beam. The beam sprang towards Barasia.

If there is a robot heaven, then I will see you there … Bulldog was
the last though in Barasia’s mind just as the beam hit with full force.
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Postby Aeris » Mon May 22, 2006 12:43 pm

Darkness_calls wrote:pitch black larvas of some sort seemed to be crawling out
of her wound.


Eeeeeeek! Larvas!
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Postby BG07 » Mon May 22, 2006 1:44 pm

Awww... I don't want it to stop there... good update, I wonder if Barasia is ok...
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Re: (Fanfic) "Leeching the worlds"

Postby Darkness_calls » Tue May 23, 2006 10:37 am

I have a little trouble writing the next chapter so There won't be an update today.
But here is a picture it did (I'm gonna make a backround for it someday ...

(I know Buttercup's eyes are uneven, it was intended)

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Re: (Fanfic) "Leeching the worlds"

Postby dark psyghost » Tue May 23, 2006 3:08 pm

awesome fanfic i haven't read it all but still an awesome fanfic
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Postby BG07 » Tue May 23, 2006 3:23 pm

aww I wanted to see a new update... but this pic will do nicely for now ^_^
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Re: (Fanfic) "Leeching the worlds"

Postby Darkness_calls » Thu May 25, 2006 4:52 pm

FINALLY, I was able to write a chapter.
Damn writers block :cussing:
meh, anyway I thanks for the comments.

next update:




Buttercup and Blossom fell on their knees, breathing heavily. They
drained too much of their power and were now really tired. A thick dust
fog had formed over the school ground field, when it finally left; Blossom
noticed the horrific damage she and her sister had done. The school
ground was a mess, the well cut grass has in ruin, and a large hole was
from where they shot to about hundred meters away. There at the end of
the hole lay a dismantled, broken and deactivated body of a gynoid girl.
Black liquid lay, splashed everywhere around the motionless mechanical
figure with body parts scattered everywhere around. Dead, that is what
she was now. Just like Bulldog.

“We did it” Buttercup whispered, while trying to take a deep breath.

Blossom, with her super vision could see Barasia’s face. It expressed
sadness, not fright and her crystalline lenses were fixed on Bulldog.

“Yes we did … but I wished we didn’t have to”

Buttercup was going to say something but was cut off before a word was
spoken by two things:

The first thing was that she, like everyone else there, could hear the
sound of incoming missiles. She had seen enough action films to
recognize the sound.

The second was the sudden change of the air. It seemed a little purple
instead of regular blue. The missile then with no warning flew over
Blossom and Buttercup and headed to the monster.

“BUBBLES!” Buttercup and Blossoms yelled at the same time.

It was too late, she didn’t hear as she was battling the monster and she
would be able to get out of the blast radius in time. Blossom stretched her
hand forward like she would be able to stop everything that way. Really
desperate, they sprung forwards; hoping to be able to stop what was
about to happen in some way.

The horrific explosion boomed over them all and shakes them a little.
Everyone but the monster stood frozen in their tracks. Most of them didn’t
quite understand what just happened. Seemingly a claw of some sort
ripped through the air and slashed the missiles. There was an opening
now, where the missiles had been “cut”. To Blossom it seemed like a
worm tunnel she had read about with Dexter.

<<< Finally … I was getting bored >>> the monster yelled, with his piercing voice.

Out of the portal came Balrog, his sheer size and stature froze everyone
but the monster. It landed, shaking the ground. It turned around to face
the monster.

“At last we meet again”

<<< How long has it been … three hundred years? >>>

“THREE HUNDRED YEARS IN THAT PRISON!” Balrog roared, lit up like a
fire which just got spilled on with oil. The monster touched a machine on
his ear and whispered into it:

<< I will be needing it soon … Goliath >>

Only hearable to the monster, Goliath’s voice spoke:
“It is ready and has been fitted with the new arsenal”

“Last time we met, I was foolish to underestimate you. You nearly were
able to leech on to me and here … A little gift for you” Balrog spoke, not
noticing the monster speaking into to Goliath through a com-link.

Balrog placed Tina on the ground before the monster.

<<< Why should I care about one of my minions? >>>

This sentence echoed inside Tina’s mind and she snapped to reality. A
little confused she looked around, be fore she noticed…

“My lord” Tina yelled in total fright.

Tina jumped backwards with this unexpected sight, she the quickly fell on
her knees, facing her lord.

“My lord … If I have failed you then …” She got cut off by her lord.

<<< Be quiet, I don’t care about you. I’ve gotten all my pieces into the
right places … now you are just in the way >>>
He hissed and walked into
her direction, Tina though he was heading for her but her lord wasn’t, as
he was actually heading to face Balrog. Scared as Tina was, she crawled
away like a beaten dog. Clearly she feared her master more then
anything.




Meanwhile the three previously spoken airplanes were heading back to
base. Called away, because of this new threat.


Now entering Megaville were the Rowdyruff boys and The Justice League.




Balrog smiled (though unnoticeable from others, but he was smiling or
rather smirking) and spoke in upmost disgust:

“I banished you three hundred years ago from this place and this is what
you have been wasting your time in to. You leeched on to a human being
and stole more then thousand human children. You mutated the children
and turned them into this disgusting race of mini leeches”

Tina couldn’t believe what she was hearing. She didn’t like her lord like
every leech alive but she never would have guessed that her race was
nothing more then mutated humans, unworthy pests and she hoped that
this was a lie.

<<< Well yes … >>>


No, it can’t be! Tina though, tears slowly dripping down hear cheeks.

<<< They were nothing more then … items used to power me up enough to fight you >>>

We … are just … garbage … Tina thought again, she couldn’t control the
heavy waterfall of tears coming from her eyes. This had a huge impact on her.
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Postby Shadowed State of Mind » Thu May 25, 2006 5:00 pm

Didn't read the chapter yet. Just wanted to comment on your drawings.

The eyes...not good. Sorry, but...not good. They look like lizard's pupils.
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Postby BG07 » Thu May 25, 2006 5:16 pm

Aww poor Tina... good update DC
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Postby Darkness_calls » Thu May 25, 2006 7:11 pm

Thanks BG07


Shadowed State of Mind wrote:The eyes...not good. Sorry, but...not good. They look like lizard's pupils.


I know :'(
But I thought of dinosaurs ;)


I've tried thousands of eyes but I'm never able to get any good ones :(
The ears are also at wrong places, I always manage to make the "hip" and lower part smaller then they should be. I'm a little happy with the arms because I'm getting better at them (you really should have seen how I was first with hands :P )

But I can keep attacking my drawings all night ... >.<
On paper they look fine but when finally scanned and colored I manage to see all my mistakes :(
Now I'm a little sad ... which mean time to try improving (and change eye type) ^_^
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Postby Aeris » Fri May 26, 2006 12:53 am

Buuuuhhh poor mini-leeches :'(

Mini-leech is a cute name... awwww....

And for the eye, it's kinda... yea... Well, you should do the regular eyes, more easy to do.

Just look at my sig.
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Postby dark psyghost » Fri May 26, 2006 8:55 am

awesome update DC.
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Re: (Fanfic) "Leeching the worlds"

Postby Darkness_calls » Sun May 28, 2006 10:17 am

Mini-leech a cute name lol
I thank for the comments ^_^
And I learned to make much ... much better eyes :)
A little commedy in this update.


Next update:




For some time Balrog and the Leech lord stood there and stared at each
other with hateful glare.

“What should we do?” Buttercup whispered to Blossom.

“I … I don’t know” Blossom answered, she was staring at Balrog.

“You maybe don’t know, but we do” Came an all too familiar voice.

Buttercup and Blossom turned around and gasped. They knew one day
they might see them but they weren’t expecting them today.

“The rowdyruffs” Buttercup growled, moving her arms into fighting positions.

“Where is Boomer?” Asked Blossom, while looking around, suspecting a
hidden attack from Boomer.

“What are you talking about he is right here” Said Butch and pointed at … nothing.

“Where the hell is Boomer!?” Butch yelled.


Not long from them flew Boomer, he didn’t care about the powerpuffs. He
only faked interest to get his brothers with him, but he was actually
looking for Tina. She had robbed him of his powers and hurt Bubbles, for
that he was bent on making her pay. He scanned the area, ignoring the
two monsters. There she was, standing like a statue. He remembered his
fight with her; she could have gotten much stronger since then so a sneak
attack would have to do.

He tried to land as quietly as possible, but was too unlucky to step on a
tree branch. With a loud snap, the tree branch broke and out of curiosity
Tina turned around. Her eyes were red from crying so much, her shirt
was wet from all the tears and she was still crying. Boomer could do
anything else then feel bad, but he shook his head and bent his knees
ready to jump attack Tina.

“You are going to pay for what you did” Boomer hissed.

“I don’t care” She whispered back, her head was bent down and her eyes
were stripped of all joy, making Tina look like some kind of a sleep walker.

For a second Boomer didn’t know how to act, then he felt a swift pain in
his forehead where she had bit him and that angered him. He yelled as he
charged at Tina … she didn’t even care to move. The grass around his
feet were ripped up as he drew his feet from it with great speed and
struck Tina in the chest. She gasped as all the air was beaten from her
lounges and she was sent flying many meters away. Tina landed with a
loud crash and literally bounced few time before she came to a full stop.

For some time nothing happened, but then Tina stood up and faced
Boomer, her once pretty face was now covered in mud. Again she didn’t
seem to move, but instead stared at Boomer with her restless and sad
eyes. Boomer though she was just playing with him, so naturally be
sprang towards her again and this time full of energy, as his hand lit up
with blue flames.


Buttercup dodged a punch aimed for her head, but only to meet Butch’s
knee. It hit her under the jaw. Her teeth snapped together with such force
that it broke two of her teeth. Buttercup hell done and held her mouth in
total pain, much blood leaked down from her mouth. Blossom wasn’t
doing any good herself, she jumped away from a blow Brick sent at her
and his blow smashed the ground she stood just few seconds before.
Blossom hovered up and held her hands above her head, she clapped her
hands together. There was a loud noise, as pink energies started to form
in her hands and when she moved her hands in away from each other,
an orb of bright pink energy began to form between the hands.

Butch grabbed Buttercup by the hair and threw her down on the ground;
she was still holding her mouth. Butch grappled her and pinned her down.

“What are you going to do now, eh sissy girl?” Butch whispered

Buttercup became furious and spat blood into Butch’s face. He only
laughed and licked some blood of his face and grinned.

“So sweet sugar blood, I can’t wait to fill this place with it”

Blossom shot her energy orb at Brick; it went kind of slow compared to
many other attacks he had seen her do, ready to just sidestep it. But the
orb blew in front of him, and he felt an immense pain as waves of pink
ventured through his body, electrifying his every muscle and then the final
wave blasted him away.

He flew up and then finally landed on top of Butch. Butch wasn't ready for
this weight so naturally he was pushed down and his lips met Buttercup’s
in a … well you could call it a kiss. Both Buttercup’s and Butch’s eyes
widened with terror. Butch could feel her soft bloody lips. When the few
seconds of utter surprise were finally over, Butch threw Brick off himself
and jumped up, landing on his feet. Buttercup stood also up and they both
began to spit onto the ground and curse each other. Brick and Blossom
couldn’t do stop laughing; this was really a funny sight to behold. Butch
and Buttercup both blushed; this was something that should NOT have
happened
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Postby BG07 » Sun May 28, 2006 10:23 am

Awww a bloody kiss, how sweet... lol
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Postby Aeris » Sun May 28, 2006 1:43 pm

Awww... :D
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Postby dark psyghost » Sun May 28, 2006 3:46 pm

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Re: (Fanfic) "Leeching the worlds"

Postby Darkness_calls » Mon Jun 05, 2006 7:10 pm

Finally I am able to update. I apologize for those who have been waiting.

Next update:



In another dimension…
Dr.X was calling orders here and there; most of the cluster troopers were
storming around. If viewed from a distance it would seem as they were
preparing for war, well actually they were. Outside the base flew the
creampuffs, looking for Shad. He had been missing ever since Boogieman attacked.

“Dr.X sir!” said a small, robotic insect. One of the cluster’s engineers.

“What is it?” Dr.X asked. Seemingly wanting to go somewhere else.

“It seems that our dimension beacon has been obliterated where the school is”

“Damn it … well, pinpoint our nearest beacon, we will enter from there”

“One other question … if I may ask”

“What is it?” Dr.X asked, guessing his question.

“Well … why … why are we attacking?”

“I’m not going to stall anymore; we will destroy the powerpuffs now”

The robot nods and walks away. The powerpuffs weren’t what Dr.X really
was seeking. He was worried about Bell.




The ground trembled as Balrog moved towards the leech lord, he swung
his hand backwards, as a massive flame sword formed in his hand and
aimed it where the leech lord stood. The ground burned up as the sword
hit … nothing, the leech lord didn’t stand there anymore. In the air the lord
flew, the air chanted in dark purple glow and slowly gathered around him,
with a yell he threw his hands forward and the dark purple air seemed to
glide downwards. Balrog yelled annoyed, when the dark purple energy hit
him and drilled through his molten lava flesh. Balrog turned his head in
the direction of the leech, his eyes literally lighting up with hatred, he took
a deep breath and the fire around him seemed to die down. Balrog gave
an upmost roar, as he spit fire and lava out of his mouth.

The flames scattered everywhere, while the lava headed towards the
leech. The lord knew if he tried to dodge then the flames would consume
him, so he whirled his broken weapon in front of him and formed an half
invisible force field.


Boomer was ready with his fist to deal a death blow to Tina, whom just
stood there with her head facing the ground. Boomer suddenly jumped
away, because it was raining lava. He dodged another lava drop, looked
up and saw the monster using all his might to withhold the shield, the lava
was being thrown back as it tried to eat through the leech’s shield. He
wondered how long Balrog could keep spraying lava at the monster. His
though came to an end when some lava nearly hit him. Boomer moved
around, dodging the lava. He side glanced at Tina and to his surprise she
hadn’t moved at all, she still stood there like a zombie while the lava
burned the ground around her.

Some of Balrog’s scattered flames, hit grass, trees and such things and
quickly they caught fire and burned up. The fire spread to the forest and
the school. The air began to fill up with black smoke, as the forest and the
school caught fire.


Butch and Buttercup had been staring at each other for some time, while
Brick and Blossom were trying to stop laughing. Then out of the blue a
drop of lava hit the ground between them, Buttercup fell backwards in
surprise, but not Butch, he used the opportunity and charged at Buttercup.
She tried to stand up but met his foot, as it hit her in the head and threw
her head into the ground. The impact made a little cut on her forehead,
the wound wasn’t deep but like all head injuries it began to bleed like a
waterfall.

Blossom hesitated by this scene and it gave Brick the opportunity he
needed. Brick yelled with total power, as the slammed his fist into the
ground. The ground didn’t stop the fist and it went deep underground,
there Brick unleashed his power.

Time to use one of my new tricks Brick thought.

In the ground, Brick’s energy moved with great speed towards Blossom
like a prowling snake. The energy exploded when nearly under her. The
explosion of the energy caused the ground to blast upwards like spikes.
The spike impaled both of Blossom’s legs. Blossom screamed in utter
pain, but Brick didn’t give her much time to do more than that. He
punched her in the chest, then he realized a wave of red energy trough
his hands. The red wave hit Blossom; it broke three of her ribs and threw
her away. She landed on the ground and didn’t move, her eyes were
wide open and a small stream of blood ran down from her mouth, it
covered one of her cheeks and colored a small portion of the grass red.

Buttercup yelled with anger when she saw Brick punch Blossom. She
kicked Butch in the stomach, but she was to slow to withdraw her leg as
Butch grabbed it. He turned her leg, therefore forcing her to turn around.
He stepped on her back and held both her hands. Butch had her pinned
down and she knew it. If she would try anything fuzzy then Brick could
easily displace her arms.

“Say Butch is my master and I am a weak little girl” Butch said with
enjoyment in his voice.

“N … never” she stammered.

Butch pressed his foot down into her back and moved her arms slowly
towards each other. Buttercup growled in pain.

“Say it!” Butch yelled

“Bu… Butch… I… Is…” she began.

“A total moron” Dexter completed for her.

Butch turned around only to meet Dexter’s large metallic hand into his
face. Butch yelled as he was slammed to the ground in front of Buttercup.
She also turned around, really surprised to Dexter.

“You alright?” Dexter asked and passed his hand.

“I will be after I kick his ass” Buttercup smiled and grabbed his arm.

Dexter helped Buttercup to stand up; her face was swollen and bruised.

“How cute” Brick said, the sarcasm easily detected.

Both Buttercup and Dexter turned to face Brick. The anger in their faces
turned into fear when they saw Blossom’s motionless body. Brick had two
of his fingers placed on Blossom’s neck to check her pulse.

“I… Is… she…” Dexter tried to say.

“Dead? Oh yeah, I killed her” Brick said, his voice was cut of all emotions.

“You will pay!” Buttercup and Dexter yelled in a chorus and charged Brick.

I’ve said before that running towards someone and being almost blind
with tears is never a good thing. Both of Dexter’s mechanical arms
exploded, not because of Brick but because of Butch. Dexter yelled as the
flames and burnt metal, damaged his arms greatly. Buttercup froze in
her track, that was also a mistake. Brick sent a red energy at Buttercup;
the energy looked like screws and worked like ones to. The screw-like
energy blasts drilled into Buttercup as they hit her. She yelled in pain as it
hit her almost everywhere and ripped up her clothes and skin. Blood spat
out of her torn body as she fell unconscious.

“Those two fell for it” Brick smiled deviously.

“Fell for what?” Butch asked, puzzled like always.

“I tricked them to think that Blossom was dead. That of course made them loose focus”

“I see, good job”

“Now where the hell is Boomer and Bubbles?” Butch looked around.

“I don’t know about Boomer but I’m right here”

Brick and Butch turned around. Not far from them, stood Bubbles and
some White haired girl in a school uniform. Behind them was the school,
black smoke rose from it. The elementary was completely bathed in fire.


If you are wondering where Bubbles and Bell were, then let me tell you …
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Postby BG07 » Mon Jun 05, 2006 7:18 pm

Geeze DC, I was getting worried about you... great update ^_^
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Postby Darkness_calls » Mon Jun 05, 2006 7:22 pm

Thank you ^_^

Well I notice in almost everyfic that the Rowdyruffs are beaten so here they will get some spotlight ... for the moment ;)
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