ow. ow. OW. Hey, Nick-what did the five fingers say to the face?
Seriously dude, wake the fuck up. Are you reading what we're saying? Or glancing at it at all? Or even noticing that it exists? For fucks sake! You have not written any stories here. At all. In any sense of the term. I've had kindergarten kids tell me about a snail they almost stepped on, and that was more well told that what you've presented. You ask for advice. We give it. And then, you do FUCK ALL! Apart from ask "Is it a story yet? Is it a story yet?" No it's not a fucking story yet! Stories don't just write themselves if you leave them long enough. You have to do something. You have good ideas, but you're letting them die. Not only that, you're getting yourself hated by being a dumbass. Seriously dude, are you really 21? Pull your fucking finger out of your hole, read what we've written, and change your "stories", because right now, they are nothing more than festering puddles of brainrot on the information superhighway
Mac users edited it out of the Bible, but the eleventh commandment was "Thou shalt get a proper computer, for fuck's sake."
Vis wrote:Cole got owned by Larry. Sweet.
Liberal Arts Quantum Physics: Light's damned fast and not everything is as it seems. Space is funny like that. The end.