Sorry i left the Literature world of ours. Especially not commenting on your fic, guys. Im now free already ^^ free from studies. But sometimes, it's going to be hard to think. otherwise i cant update. So now, im just going to give you guys a short background of the story "Despising Destiny".
( Despising Destiny is based on the game "Rival School" which has great fighting sequences as well as a good plot and story. The setting will be on Hokkaido, Japan.)
The day was really Quiet, Peaceful and Silent. School was really perfect cause of the Shiny Sun, Showing it's smile to Students who used to study hard. Ordinary Students, Roaming the school yard while chatting with their friends. Eating lunch as they were all having fun. These students was nearly innocent, But some rumors were heard by the students of the whole school. A powerful Gem, with it's bright black color, was said to have it's powers where a human can obtain Unimaginable forces coming from it's deep mind. The Gem shows it's power to those humans who only wills to have power for their protection... or Domination. A Rumor about the gem was claimed by a Journalist Student named "Manabu Kyoshin" was said to spread these rumor about the gem. It is said that the gem was shattered into pieces, and it's powers are also lost. The pieces of the gem also have powers, but only a little amount from the original. He's a journalist and as he said, It's only a rumor. So therefore, The rumor about the gem might not be true. The School, Shukumei Highschool, is said to have these powerful gems which Kyoshin has explained. After some investigation, The police explained to the students that the School is safe and it has no powerful signs regarding the gem....
It's the day of Monday, As Kyoshin both raised his hands, pointing it at the ceiling. Stretching himself to wake him for a while, He released a powerful yawn. And as he woke , He quickly stood up from his bed and tried to fix it quickly. He dressed up after taking a bath and was ready for school. He always looked like a Nerd, But with his physical apperance, He look more of a Fighter, Rather than a freaking Nerd. With his white hair, he's somehow graceful with his movements. He's a journalist from his school, And also a writer.
Along the way, He met his Bestfriend "Isamu Takashi". Takashi is a yellow haired boy, Having a scar in his eyebrow, which symbolizes his great fighting techniques. Takashi quickly pressed his hand against Kyoshin's chest and greeted "Good morning!" Saying it aloud in the middle of the street. Kyoshin looked really annoyed with Takatshi. Kyoshin was just silent, As ever while Takashi is still annoying him by picking up his nose. "So, What's with the glasses getting thicker and thicker everyday, Kyo?" Takashi asked while his finger is inserted in Kyoshin's Nose. "I prefer that you remove your finger. Or else..." Kyoshin raised his hand, Dashing it towards Takashi's Face. "Woah woah woah!" Takashi quickly evades from Kyoshin's hand. "See? Now stop bugging me. I still need to scoop something." Kyoshin explained as he carries his bag and continued walking. Takashi followed as he panics along the way.
Meanwhile. Kyoshin early realized that there are so many students, Circling someone in the middles of the Schoolyard. "Fight fight fight!" Everyone Cheered. Kyoshin quickly opened his bag and gets his Camera. He quickly hurried to the crowd as he saw a Black haired guy in the middle. He noticed that he's holding a basketball. "He's a player of the sports team. The Basketball Club." Kyoshin noticed. Then Takashi jumped out of nowhere and lands beside Kyoshin. Takashi gave a glance at the fight and said "wooo, a fight huh? Get a scoop of it, Kyoshin." Takashi ordered as he tried to remove the roaring crowd.
Then, Takashi noticed that the other guy was a guy, Wearing an oxygen mask, and holding a sharp knife on his hand, was in front of the Basketball player. "Isn't that from Section 3-F?" Takashi asked as he looked at Kyoshin seriously. "Yeah, I just cant remember his name..." Kyoshin mumbled to himself then they all heard a shout from the crowd. Kyoshin quickly raged and saw that the fight was already starting. The masked guy was realy quick, and still moving smoothly. While the Basketball player was just standing, Waiting for something.
The masked guy Jumped and throwed a knife at the Player. As he lands on the ground, he touched it, making a smooth movement and dashed towards the Player. He ducked, and tried to stab him with his dagger. But the Basketball Player just stepped sideward and hold his hand. He throws the Masked Guy away from him. Landing safely, The masked guy quickly gets something from his pocket. It's a detonator. He pressed the button and the Knife which is near the Player Exploded. Kyoshin was shocked, Also Takashi. A huge explosion occured in the circle of the crowd as the masked guy turned his back agaisnt the explosion.
End of chapter 1
McDurg- I dunno' whispaho, I've seen some pretty hot things in my life. Like myself. I masturbate to my own image every day. Naw. How about all three of us combine, in the form of a sexy Godzilla? We would totally fuck Mothra.
Alfimi - *sighs*....things i have to do *corners whisper against the wall* *unbutons shirt**flashes**butons shirt up again* there, enjoy your hearty.
Coos - Whisper's a bitch.
Malumultimus - Whisper...you are my favorite worshipper.
Mal again - Nyaaaa~