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Abel's Fiction

Postby Abel the 16th » Mon Jul 25, 2005 7:49 pm

I started an account at http://www.fictionpress.com under the pen name Abel Sedecim a while back. Today I started a story called The House on Grease Hill. It's a supernatural drama about a group of supernatural teens that go journeying into the inner workings of a haunted house. So far I only have the Forward and Part 1 of Chapter 1, but I'll update it ASAP, but please read and review por favor. Believe it or not, it's based on an abstract dream I have about a few nights ago, then I decided it was so wierd and good I should write a story based on it. With little creativity I believe I made it into a pretty comprable story which I may be tempted to actually finish. I would have prefered to draw some illistration, but I can't draw for jack. I wish I could though *sigh* Oh well, try to let imagination fill in the gaps and I hope you enjoy. ^_^
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Postby Vulcan » Tue Jul 26, 2005 2:47 pm

Start it then
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Postby Hambone » Tue Jul 26, 2005 4:06 pm

Cool, I always wanted to find a site like this.
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Postby Abel the 16th » Tue Jul 26, 2005 6:36 pm

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Re: Abel's Fiction

Postby Abel the 16th » Sun Jul 31, 2005 12:50 am

I update the story, so Part 2 of Chapter 1 is now UP. Please read and tell me what you think about it. This one is a little bit more action oriented than the last part, but I think I did a to technical job of depicting the fight scenes. I don't know? Regardless please Enjoy.

P.S. Does anyone think I should post the story direct or is it working out find with the link?
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Re: Abel's Fiction

Postby Abel the 16th » Wed Aug 03, 2005 12:31 pm

Chapter 1 is now Complete. Just click on the link provide.

The House on Grease Hill
Chapter 1: To the Haunted House We Go


I think I'm going to start updating by full chapter completion instead of by partial completetion. Chapter 2 is coming soon.
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