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LilyPichu
 Post subject: Fanfic: PPG
PostPosted: Mon Jul 11, 2005 11:24 pm 
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No real title as of yet, kind of short, and it's not my best...but it was something I felt like writing. ^^;






Blood.

That was what Professor Utonium first gazed upon after the massive showers of light. Puddles of crimson seeped underneath the table, the metallic liquid’s heavy stench tenaciously clinging onto every pore of his skin. The atmosphere was utterly disgusting. Walls were splayed with sugar and spice, both blended together with the unmistakable red. Colorful dolls were torn apart from their interior, the cotton also drenched with the substance he despised most.

Smoke was wafting around mercilessly. It stung his eyes, like acid burning the core of his vision, fresh tears erupting from every blink he managed. Memories were diminishing. Sequential order was insignificant compared to the situation now; what mattered was his creation, waiting for him just beyond the cracked kettle.

He vaguely heard himself chortle, calling out futilely, [i]“Hello?â€
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Oooh! Update soon, this sounds interesting!

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Yhea like yours Griddles! ^_^
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Holy shit! That was awsome.

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LilyPichu
 Post subject: Re: Fanfic: PPG
PostPosted: Tue Jul 12, 2005 3:19 pm 
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Thank you for the kind comments. I will update, but remember that this is how I think Bell should originate, also a remix of how the PowerPuff Girls were born, considering...

You know, the whole 'sugar, spice, everything nice' routine at the beginning of the show was, well, a little too sugary. ^^;


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So Bell's the bad egg of the bunch, eh?

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LilyPichu
 Post subject: Re: Fanfic: PPG
PostPosted: Tue Jul 12, 2005 5:31 pm 
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You'll see. =)

Bell has fascinated me for ages, by now...


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Coolishness. And Griddles and LilyPichu, when I looked at both your avatars I thought Griddles was talking to himself XD. I got so confused.

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lol

Added after 17 minutes:

Bell has fascinated a lot of us, hasn't she.

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LilyPichu
 Post subject: Re: Fanfic: PPG
PostPosted: Tue Jul 12, 2005 7:47 pm 
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Yes, yes she has. I adore her split personality. XP


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Can't wait to find out about her true origins. But Bleed's not wanting to spoil anything

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