Thanks for the advice guys, means a lot!
And, to explain about the enemy, the warship is lead by a ruthless being known as Thanatos, an ancient evil awaken after many centuries of being trapped in oblivion. 2 of the most powerful races of the universe: one known as the Saviors that rest in Earth. When close to death, Thanatos sent himself into a black hole, escaping from his demise to wait for his revenge, to get stronger so that no being can stop his path of destruction and ruling of the universe. As time went by, the Saviors thought he was dead, lost in a dimension or, better yet, left his fate unknown.
The world of Exodis will be based in power, and some-what of technology (yes, like DBZ).
I'll explain more when I write the first chapter, but that's the enemy Exodis will face!
Edit: I feel like dropping this thing... Having difficulty trying to make a good intro, trying to piece together things... holy crap is this thing making me feel depressed... I guess I'm not caught up for writing a story...
Exodis is the little kid of the forum, compared to everyone else.Grey:
From now on i will call you eggy because i don't like x but ex sounds like eggs. i like eggs.Yog:
Exodis, your manner of speech and the way you conduct yourself is beginning to evolve to the point where I'm starting to like you.Blood Lord:
Yup, Randori is a very well respected night elf of the community. His valuable service to the site has brought great blessings to this people.BeeAre:
I'm totally gay for Randori.Stuff:
Exodis, you are learning. Mama is proud.
Deemed as the best, Outlawed as the worst.
Check out my story! Exodis - The Last Savior