Thanks for the advice guys, means a lot!
And, to explain about the enemy, the warship is lead by a ruthless being known as Thanatos, an ancient evil awaken after many centuries of being trapped in oblivion. 2 of the most powerful races of the universe: one known as the Saviors that rest in Earth. When close to death, Thanatos sent himself into a black hole, escaping from his demise to wait for his revenge, to get stronger so that no being can stop his path of destruction and ruling of the universe. As time went by, the Saviors thought he was dead, lost in a dimension or, better yet, left his fate unknown.
The world of Exodis will be based in power, and some-what of technology (yes, like DBZ).
I'll explain more when I write the first chapter, but that's the enemy Exodis will face!
Edit: I feel like dropping this thing... Having difficulty trying to make a good intro, trying to piece together things... holy crap is this thing making me feel depressed... I guess I'm not caught up for writing a story...
As I saw the creature, I was as white as an egg. I was so scared I might crack from fear. As the humanoid began to lunge after me, I was walking on egg shells from how scared I was. It grabbed me, took me to its station, and cracked me open. The last thing I saw were my yellow insides cooked on a pan. Human nature is as evil as a rotten egg.
Stuff: Exodis is funnier than people give him credit for.