Cascade wrote:It's okay. I kind of like ones with lots of allegories better.
I've noticed the problem with the majority of poems on this forum is that they just say things outright, and not force the viewer to read deeper into it. But at least the poem has a message.
gamingchick wrote:Did you reaf it it means that the rain heals all And that everything will get better, its not emo that would be luke this
she left me
she left me
I hate my life
She left me
oh god i suck
Bill Shakespeare wrote:When in disgrace with fortune and men's eyes
I all alone beweep my outcast state,
And trouble deaf heaven with my bootless cries,
And look upon myself, and curse my fate,
Wishing me like to one more rich in hope,
Featured like him, like him with friends possessed,
Desiring this man's art, and that man's scope,
With what I most enjoy contented least;
Yet in these thoughts my self almost despising,
Haply I think on thee, and then my state,
Like to the lark at break of day arising
From sullen earth, sings hymns at heaven's gate;
For thy sweet love remembered such wealth brings
That then I scorn to change my state with kings.
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